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Ok, I can draw really good sometimes, other times horrible, anyone care to help me draw better? I guess sort of like a red line. Also, I do draw better off the computer, but they are colored better on it, so I use MS Paint to color them mostly. So, here are the pictures. I collaged them into one big one. These are like my best pics too:




EDIT:


This was just drawn like, right now. Also, this sort of has my new style.

** I directly used your drawings for this, hope you don't mind....it was the best way I could say what I needed to **

On the first pic, The fur on the tail should probably face the other direction. You also need to be sure that the paws are atleast somewhat in line with each other. Smaller noses and thinner muzzles would help as well, and make sure you don't make the farther ear look longer than the closer one. If it's draw 3/4 view, don't forget the other eye.


On the second pic, I could only find a few issues. First off, if he/she is supposed to be growling, open it's whole mouth. If not, then you're OK. Also, the bend on the back legs some a little further down, not right at the top. The front legs get slightly too thin towards the bottom, and again tail fur should face the other way.


And the third pic. The first face is fine, though I woun't put the line at the end of the mouth, but that's just me. On the second face, try elongating it's head just a little bit, and have it's ears face the same direction. As for the third, try to makes it's ears match up just a little more, and shape it's mouth less like a circle, with that expression the mouth would look more like...a rounded triangle or something. A smaller nose would be nice, and a slightly adjusted eye.


That's the best I can explain, hope it helps. But if you are unsure about part of it feel free to ask me!

Thanks, I'll try to work on that. Like um, this?

Yeah. The mouth can be closed too if you want.

Here we are :]

Ok, but I think I'm still going to draw tail fur my way still. I just really can't draw it the other way, it doesn't seem right. But that's just me. Anyways, after I get a few more people to critque my style, I'll decide on the best way for me to draw. And post a picture with that style.