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 Post subject: Please Critique and Make Suggestions!
PostPosted: Thu Jul 02, 2009 12:20 pm 
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Hey! I drew head shots of Balto and Cosmica. I really want to know what you think of the picture. I am also putting up one of my old drawing style so you can compare, and tell me if I am improving or...not :3!

Cosmica is a Husky/border collie/dalmatian
Balto is obviously a Wolf/dog

Umm you can really only critique on the head, I am not really looking for help on the anatomy but that might be good too. :)

The Old picture (is first) is of my really old char. Passion Flower, the new one is last and of balto and cosmica.


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 Post subject: Re: Please Critique and Make Suggestions!
PostPosted: Thu Jul 02, 2009 3:40 pm 
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Not bad. I think the upper part of the head on the first one is a bit to high.

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 02, 2009 8:39 pm 
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Thanks you two!:D But, Mightybalto1925 the first one is my old style ;) not to be critiqued. Thanksss again!:D

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It is nice but yeah, now that I look it is rather short :). Thanks!:D

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 24, 2009 1:30 pm 
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Which picture?? If it is the second one than ok. The first one is of my old style.

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 30, 2009 4:49 pm 
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You are indeed improving and I've enjoyed watching you progress. However there are still a few bad habits that you should work out fo your art. The first is that you have a tendancy to make the foreheads too large/high. If you look at a canine's skull, you'll get a good idea of the right height.

As other's pointed out, the muzzle should be longer too on both dogs. Of course it varies between breeds, but in this case considering Cosmica's lines she should have a longer muzzle too.

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