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 Post subject: Squad 89 Saga: When Justice Comes to Nome
PostPosted: Fri Jun 26, 2009 12:33 pm 
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A small preview where me, Pecario, and Whisper tried to create a forum years ago called Squad 89 this is the fanfiction

Fire just fire all around them a small K-9 squad was able to get what they needed but their perp had escaped leaving them no way out and only a door that wasn’t hot was the window where firefighters waited below. “Captain Indy, are you really sure you want to jump that is a five story drop down there” one member said stepping back slowly. Indy himself wasn’t sure about this as he was afraid of heights but if it was the only way out, well it was the only way out. One by one each of them jumped out of the building until there was only himself and his mate Sergeant Whisper. “There is still enough time for both of us to…” however, that sentence was interrupted when a criminal who was on fire burst through the door running towards Indy and Whisper. They both growled but Whisper was the first to make her move clawing him to the floor. Indy tugged at Whisper’s collar but soon the building was beginning to give.

“Whisper, he’s not worth it” he yelled to her but the struggle caused a barrel to fall over and spill out gas along the ground.

“Oh yes he is, he was the one that murdered my sister years ago. Look I’ll be right behind you okay” she said and gave a small smile to him. Indy became very worried about his wife and tried again to pull her off but that resulted in him being pushed out of the building and falling onto the cushion below. Soon after, another captain, a husky came running up to him, “Indy where’s Whisper” she said but by that time the gas made contact with the fire and caused a massive explosion. “NOOO!!! WHISPER” he yelled running back inside but was quickly stopped by the rest of his team and just like that, she was gone.

That was 2 years ago but today a small pickup truck drove through the Alaskan wilderness and in the pickup bed was Indy and his daughters. Tala, his oldest and a cross-breed between her mother a husky and Indy a German shepherd, currently serves under her dad as a squad member and then there is her little sister Angela or Angel for short. Angela looks a lot like her mom taking a lot of her husky feature except for her legs marks which then takes after her dad.
The little puppy slowly opened her eyes on the bed of her owner’s pickup unfamiliar with any of her surroundings; the frigid air tickled her fur as Tala came by her side nuzzling her awake. Tala looked at her dad who then became concerned about him; the death of Whisper seemed to really damage his mind even though it never got in the way of his work, she had to be the surrogate mother/older mentoring sister to Angel. Dad, its been at least 2 years now, she thought but all she could hear was the faint song of Lucky, by Jason Mraz and Colbei Calliat, their first song when they officially married. “B…big sister where are we, this isn’t our usual kennel” she asked. Angel nuzzled her sister not sure what to tell her because after the accident, he was decommissioned and was forced to never work in California as an officer ever again. “Look sis, dad was given a better position down here in Illinois a higher position thanks to an old friend of his” Angel replied.

“But what…about my friends”

“I’m sorry sis but you’ll make new friends here”

Moving seemed to make Angel a little sad but she instead distracted herself by looking over to her father. “How is daddy” she asked.

Tala sighed shaking her head. “Still the same, he’s grieving over mom maybe this promotion could be helpful…look Chicago is coming up right now.”

The windy city came into sight and the town seemed to be a bustle of activity with subways, loads of people, and shopping, but what other people didn’t know was this city is also notorious for drug smuggling and thus more and more dogs are enlisted into police while those dogs who are upper-class live cushier lifestyles. Many strays are also seen around the areas who are mostly those who cannot afford them in there homes and some dogs partake in illegal activities just to feel that they belong and have power to hold on to.
Pretty much crime is prominent in Chicago and that’s why the police gets such massive funding for an impressive brick building like the one in front of police station and outside stood Indy’s old friend, Captain Wildfire and her owner, the Commissioner of the Chicago P.D.’s K-9 unit. As the owner’s walked off to discuss the processes of this new city, Wildfire went up to nuzzle Indy and looked him in eyes admiration, respect, and maybe something more entered his heart. “It’s really good to see you again Indy” she said and smiled seeing his kids jump off the pickup.

“Hi Wildfire” Angel said wagging her tail gnawing on her leg. Lately, Angel had gotten training from her and her biting strength seemed to be getting stronger with each month that passes, she would soon show her true strength though.
Tala was the last off the truck and walked up to meet Wildfire bowing to her. “It good to see you again Captain” she said changing into her vest but Wildfire seemed to have invested interest Indy only to keep himself on her mind. “Erm…Captain Wildfire” she asked and soon the husky snapped out of it. Can we talk later just the two of us, she whispered to him and turned to his two daughters picking up little Angela with just her jaw. “Whoa there kid save that energy for training” soon she placed her down softly on her dad’s back and looked to Tala. “At ease lieutenant and welcome to Chicago everyone. Before you get to know the facility, my chief requests an audience with all three of you first so come on” Wildfire said as they went around to a secret staircase leading to the chief’s quarters.
Now while the humans have their ranking system, the dogs have theirs and you would be surprised how similar they are. There is a commissioner and a chief and officers, but unlike the trainees for the humans, pups were often the ones who were trained mainly due to interest over the years and with Angel about to turn a half-year old she is now ready to take on her own training.

Wildfire waked through the gate of the Chief’s quarters, bowing to him in salute before allowing herself to speak. “Chief Chrome, Captain Indy and his family are here as you asked” she said and brought them in. Chrome unlike the other dogs brought about an aura of no-nonsense to his job, everything thing to this muscular malamute and German shepherd expresses why he is the one in charge and much more. As Chrome awoke to his feet he looked directly into the eyes of Indy almost as if to see into his own mind. “Strong-willed, pain lots of it, and a respected leader. Your reputation suits you Captain Indy” then he looked over to his daughters.
“Let’s see here Lieutenant Tala, top marks from your instructors predicted to become captain one year before your adolescent stage ends. You also seem to have the same will as your father but seems to be soft enough to take care of your younger sister. And then there is young Angel, you know there is something there that I cannot place my paw on but we will get to that later, but first Captain Wildfire, my maps.” Wildfire had set up the maps in one end of his kennel. This was no ordinary maps, this was a map of Chicago drug routes, claw marks, disgraceful comments of self-pity, news article that seem to be pasted on, if any this was the chaotic half of Chrome’s mind.

“It is frustrating; these drug lords, using their own dogs to run through sewers delivering billions of dollars right under our nose. While our last bust uncovered nearly half-million dollars worth of crystal meth, we don’t know where they are, or how they are stationed. The only other way is that there could also be two dogs that are leading and invading each others turf. These drug cartels, can be taken but we need evidence and while having someone flipped to our side is good and all, it will not take in a court of law and that is why you are here Captain Indy. You and Wildfire will…” Chief Chrome was soon interrupted by a paw from Tala who seemed very interested when he mentioned this former drug cartel member and soon started pawing at the cage.

“Sir if I may, I would like to see this flipped cartel member,” she said

“Alright Lieutenant but keep in mind, the member seems to be a little distraught so approach with caution here is my seal to the guard show it to him since you are not officially registered yet.”

“Yes sir!” Soon Tala left them running through the building taking Angel along with her as they went to visit her friend. Meanwhile Chief Chrome looked to Indy and Wildfire knowing what he must do.

“Captain Indy, as well as you have done in small groups of 2 or 3 dogs; I want you to take half of Captain Wildfire’s group. I will be in charge of that, as I will take a random mix of strong, seasoned officers and newbies who are still getting used to the processes around here but as for your daughter, I would like to see her on a different group other than yours, possibly Wildfire’s or if possible, take on the promotion exams”


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PostPosted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 1:23 pm 
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Update: 4 pages in not sure how long because this will be a series eventually


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