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 Post subject: my animation !
PostPosted: Sun Jun 07, 2009 1:19 pm 
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Hi guys !
I presents my animation here !

For begin a "What is love" collection x)
http://www2.noelshack.com/uploads/What- ... 091518.gif

IMALOU LOITUMA YEAH !!
http://www2.noelshack.com/uploads/Imalo ... 000015.gif

My run cycle :
sketch : http://www2.noelshack.com/uploads/Loupi ... 018875.gif
clean : http://www2.noelshack.com/uploads/Loup- ... 002122.gif
color : http://www2.noelshack.com/uploads/Loup- ... 076608.gif
final : http://www2.noelshack.com/uploads/Loup- ... 048547.gif

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 07, 2009 10:03 pm 
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I love the run cycle but it would look better if the background was looped too.

Anyway your animations are great and I very much look forward to seeing more!

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 7:25 am 
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This looks awesome! As Vivid said, it would be bette if the BG was looped too. For the nimation, I just have one tiny tip. This animation is great, but it would be even greater if you added a few more frames. ;) Use keyframes (Frames that are the most important ones.) and add frames between them ;)

Great work, otherwise!

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 10:38 am 
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A new with my panther character ( i don't find a name for him.. ) :
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 11:15 am 
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Like the others are saying, there good, just practice with the frames. I suggest trying to make things more of the same size, such as your head on your newest one. I know its hard, but it can be done.

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 09, 2009 7:50 am 
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GhostlyVividDreams wrote:
My favoite ones are the running white lion and dark brown/red wolf! :o What program did ya use?

photoshop ( and paint for the brown wolf ;) )

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 09, 2009 6:16 pm 
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Excellent animations! ^^ As the others have said, try to fix the frames and the head shapes and sizes. Otherwise, I think they are awesome! c: I also noticed on the wolf one, the tip of the wolf kept getting cut off in your animation. It didn't happen in your newest one though, so I assume that got fixed. ;D

Well done with the animations.

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 15, 2009 8:09 am 
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NEW NEW !
But i'm not very happy about this pic..


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PostPosted: Wed Jul 08, 2009 11:25 am 
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New one with Kazzy :mrgreen:

http://imalou.deviantart.com/art/The-Ke ... -128747338

( full wiew for see the animation )

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 08, 2009 11:39 am 
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The new one is hilarious! :D

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 12, 2009 2:48 pm 
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GhostlyVividDreams wrote:
Lol poor lil gray wolf. :lol:


The gray wolf is my fursonna :mrgreen:

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 17, 2009 7:51 am 
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Good animations! The Keilidh Lazor one is hilarious XD

As for the run cycle, can I make some suggestions? A few more frames will make it look a little less jumpy. And with the background, the characters looks to be running in place. Try to make the back ground move, like this (this is an old animation, but you get the point) :
http://natticat8.deviantart.com/art/Blu ... -109393995
Or you can make the character go across the screen, like here (but you don't have to do the paws only, you can do full body): http://natticat8.deviantart.com/art/Run ... -129833356

That's about all I can say, keep up the good work!

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