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 Post subject: Many in One) Sneak Peaks!
PostPosted: Sat May 30, 2009 10:09 am 
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Many sneak peaks in one. Im working on a LOT, so why not give you all some idea's of what they may be about? I may change these a bit before posting the real fic on the site. It has the plot too 83

Just to let you know, this is part 3-4 of "Dakota". I made it that way so the story would make more sence. And I needed a way to get JT into the story. "Stranger" is very short, too, so thats another reason why I added these two together.

PLOT: *Part three and four of "Dakota"* Dakota's wounds have healed, and she's moved on. Her best friend Angie, has a new friend JT. Dakota see's that when Anna meets him, she likes him a lot. Dakota wishes she had a good dad like that, when she meets three males that fall for her. She likes them all, but cant make her choice. WHo will she choose? How will Anna respond? How will 'they' respond?...

Stranger

Dakota's neck had healed, and Anna had recoverd from shock. Angie was thanked by Anna numbers of times for saving Dakota's life. Anna loved Angie a lot, so did Dakota. But many more dogs would soon be added to Dakota's life.

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Anna was out, not for anything, just, going for a walk in town, wich she began doing more. She was bored a lot, ever sence her brother died. She would normaly hang out with Angie, but she was out with Dakota, anyway.

I'll go on over to Angie's, to see if their home yet She thought. Se walked around the corner to Angie's. Nothing. "Oh well." She said and kept walking. As she walked, she thought she saw somthing out of the corner of her eye. BUt when she'd look, nothing.

Then, she heard thud, thud, thud, thud, thud, from behind. She looked, and saw not one, but three dogs running twards her. A gang! She thought and turned to run, but another dog was infront of her. She looked back, there was no exit.

She saw some of the dogs licking their lips. She was disgusted. Revolted. Angerd. But mostly scared. They were all male, and she had heard stories of what some gangs of males had done to just a single female. She finnaly spoke "Let me go!". "I don't think so." One said, he was bigger than the rest. He moved closer.

"BACK OFF!" A angery voice said. Anna, and the gang of dogs looked up, to see a red dog landing infront of Anna. "Stay away from my, neice!" The red dog shouted, but, said 'neice' a bit late. This dog was big, slightly bigger than the one who had spoken only moments before. Some of the dogs ran off, to remained. "Or what?" The other dog said. The red dog looked him strait in the eye. Then, the last few dogs ran away.

He turned around to face Anna, who was staring at him like, she had seen a gohst. There was a pause. "Thank you, stranger." Anna said." "My name is JT, wich is short for Jason Thomas. Whats your name?" He said. "Anna, Wich is short for Annabell." She answered. JT nodded. "So, where are your mom and dad?" He asked.

"I don't have a dad!" Anna retorted. "Oh, sorry, well where is you mom. You have a mom, right?" Anna nodded. "I'll help you find her." Jt said, turning. "Wait!" Anna said. He stoped for her to catch up.

As they walked, neither of them talked, at first. "How long have you been here?" Anna asked. "Wow, most of my life, I wasn't born here, tho. I used to live realy far away from here, in a town called Nenana. But when I was very young, I fell into a crate, and was taken here." JT explained.

Woah... Anna thought. "What happend after that?" She asked. "Hmhm, I thought you'd ask that." JT started. "I wonderd around, I was scared to death. I was alone for about a week. Then I was taken in, by a nice, single man. Named Jason, wich is half the reason I got my name." He chuckled.

"Now, its my turn to ask the questions." He laughed. "But I have another question!" Anna shouted. "Why did you call me your, neice." She asked. "Oh, just to make them think we were related, and that I was protecting you. Do you have an uncle?". Anna shook her head. "What about an aunt?". "Yes! Her name is Angie! But she is the only other relative I have, other than my mom." Anna said.

"Well then, just call me your uncle JT from now on!" JT cheered. "Realy! Thats so cool! I never had an uncle before! I-I.. wow." She cheered aswell. JT just giggled. "Anna!" A voice shouted. "Momma!" Anna replyd.

"Momma! He saved me! He did! He said he could be my uncle! Can he?" Anna asked. Dakota was speechless. She looked at the red husky mix. "Thank you, for saving her, I don't know what we would have done without her." Angie said. JT stared at the girl, she was beautiful, he was frozen. "Y-Your welcome, miss. You must be Angie." JT started. "Anna said you were her, 'aunt'." He laughed. "Yeah, I guess you coud say that." Angie winked. "Thanks for saving my daughter." Dakota spoke up.

"Yeah, thanks for saving me! Can he play with us a lot momma? Aunt Angie?" Anna asked. "Sure hun, he can hang out with us long as he wants." Angie smiled. JT smiled at Angie, Dakota and Anna. He had not had very many friends, but now he made three, in less that two hours! "Well, there's no need to call me a stranger anymore." JT chuckled.


Choice

A few months after JT joined the gang, Dakota had seen how happy he made Anna. She also saw Angie's change. "Ang, I kind of feel bad." Dakota sighed. "Why?" Angie asked, raising a brow at her. "Anna realy loves Jason T, and she doesn't have a dad. Do you think I should try looking again? For both out sakes?" She asked. Angie smiled and nodded.

Meanwhile, Anna was pulling on JT's ear. "Ow! Ow! Ow, ya crazy pup let go!" JT laughed. Anna released her grip. "You gotta pair of jaws there Anna." He added. "Thanks uncle JT!" Anna barked. Dakota glanced at the two playing. "Im oing for a walk Anna, stay here!" She called and ran off.

She walked on the beach for a bit, and heard a sound behind her. "Terrel! Come back!" A strong voice yelled from behind her. She looked back before being trampled by a small white figure. She opend her eye's and saw a very larg grey dog standing over her. "I am so sorry miss, my son was running and didn't see you! You OK?" He asked. "Yeah, Im fine." She said, shaking herself.

She looked behind her and saw the pup he was talking about. He looked that he was about Anna's age. "Aw, whats his name?" Dakota asked, looking at Richer. "Terrel." He said. "Oh, so where's his mom?" She asked again. "Oh, uh. She's, dead." Richer sighed. "Oh, sorry, I didn't know!" Dakota exlaimed.

Richer chuckled "Its fine, well, I'll see you later. Come on Terrel!" Richer said, but just as he left he licked Dakota's ear, and dashed off with his son. What in the.. She thought. She was a bit shaken and began to make her way back into town. She broke into a run, wanting to get back to Angie's as soon as she could. Poor dog, I wonder what happend to the pups mother She thought. What if it was a bear? Another dog? A hunter? After thinking about the word "hunter" the terrible thought of her wolf family came back.

She was so deep into thought, she didn't see the brown dog infront of her. "Hey!" A voice shouted. She looked up just intime to see her muzzle hit this stranger on his. She pulled back. "Eh, hehe, sorry." She studderd. The dog didn't reply, he just looked in her eye's. He shook his head "Oh, yeah. Its fine, realy." He smiled. "Let me walk you home?" He asked.

"Sure.." Dakota said. They began walking, and telling eachother things. "My name is Donner, but you can call me Don." He winked. "My name's Dakota." She replyd, but did not wink back. "Well, Dakota, what were you running from?" He asked. "Nothing.". The finaly made it to Angie's house. Angie, JT, and Anna were playing by the pourch. "By, Don." Dakota smiled and ran to hug her daughter. Don smiled, then turned to leave.

A week later, Don and Richer were a big part in Dakota's life, she'd been with them a lot more. And liked them both, a lot. She was on her way to Angie's one morning with Anna, when she heard a scream. What the?.. She thought. She ran around the corner. Angie was there, but with somone else. She had to know him, because, she was nuzzling him. "I can't beleve its you!" Angie cried.

Seeing somthing red, she looked over. It was JT, standing as if in shock. "JT, what's wrong?" Dakota asked. He looked at her. He looked at his paws. "Hey JT! This is--" Angie stoped after he looked at her with tears falling down his face. At first, she didn't know why he was crying, then, after thinking about it, she realized he loved her, and seeing her with this dog, he was heartbroken. "Ja--"She started, but he already running away.

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Angel's Life Part 7: Tragedy Can Bring A Miracle

PLOT: Taking place during "Sleeping with the enemy". Angel and Jaxs are expecting thie 3rd litter! And are more excited than ever. But when tragedy strikes, what wil the couple do? The only way for thier hearts to heal, is for a marical, but what could fix their broken hearts?

"I can't beleve it. My little pups, almost two and a half years old!" Angel saighed to her mate, Jaxs. "Well its not like we won't be able to see them." Jaxs chuckled. Angel pushed and walked out of the den. He belly was round. A sign that she was pregnat. And she was vary happy. She hadn't told Zasha or Songa yet, and was on her way to do just that.

She walked to the junk yard. "Zasha! Shade?" She called. "Angel?" Zasha asked. "I havn't seen you in ages!" She said, nuzzling her friend. "Momma, is this Angel?" A tiny voice asked. Angel looked down. "Aww, you didn't tell me you had your pups already!" Angel exlaimed happily. "How many?" Angel asked. "Six." Zahsa smiled proudly. "What are their names?" Angel asked as the tiny pups walked out infront of her. "None yet." Zasha said.

"So what brings you here?" Zasha asked. Angel's smiled got even bigger. "Im having my third litter!" She shouted. "No way! Im so happy for you!" Zasha exlaimed. "Wanna come with me to tell Songa?" She asked. Zasha nodded. "o play with daddy, pups." Zasha said and the tiny pups ran to play with Shade.

They walked into town, thinking Songa would be out with Zorro somwhere. They saw her in the distance. "Songa!" They souted. She looked up and came over. "Hey, whats up?" She asked. "Im pregnat!" Angel shouted again. "Great! Im so hap--" Songa stoped, she saw somhting behind Angel and Zasha.

"Well, well, well, havn't seen you in a while." A voice said. Angel turned, and growled, it was Rose. "What do you want?" Angel asked. "Nothing. I just overheard you saying your having a third litter?" Rose asked. "Why would you care?" Angel snarled. Rose chuckled. "Wach your back!" She said, almost in a wisper.

As Rose walked away, Angel was trying to jump at her, but her friends stoped her. "Save your energy!" Songa said. "She's not worth it." She added. "Yeah." Angel snorted. They walked Angel home, and she walked in her den. "Hey Jaxs." She greeted. He smiled. "How was your day?" He asked. "I've had better one's." She said and curled up next to him.

Long after Jaxs was asleep, Angel woke. She yawned, and put her head down. Wach your back... Wach your back... Wach your back! The thought rang in her head before she fell asleep.

DREAM

Rose pounced on Angel's back. She fell on her stomach, hard. "Stop!" Angel pleaded. Rose just gorwled and pushed Angel, over and over. She stoped, and hit Angel in the face with her paw. She bit Angel many times, and clawed at Angel's stomach. Then left. The words Rose had said rang in Angel's head. "Wach your back... Wach your back... Wach your back...

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New Home

PLOT: A story of my character JT (Jason Thomas). About his life before Nome. But when he is taken from his family, he had no friends, no home, nothing. He, later, gets adopted. But has no friends. How will this little pup live in his new home?

Danny walked back and forth, waiting, waitin for his human to let him in, to see his puppies. Each moment seemed to last a year, he'd never been so scared. Then, the door was opened. He peered inside, he saw his human, the vet, but, he could't see his mate. He walked in and looked over his human. There, there she was, smiling, and licking her five puppies. A tear fell down his face. And he smiled.

6 months later.

Sarah and Danny leid on the front porch, watching their five puppies play. "I love how all the humans that live on our street adopted the puppies." Sarah said. "All but one. He kept, Rojo, the one that looks mosty like you." Danny pointed. "I know wich one he is!" Sarah said.

"Just be happy we have one." Danny replyd. Sarah nodded. They watched their pups go back to their new homes, one at a time, until only Rojo was left. "Rojo, dear, come on in." Sarah called. "Coming!" He answered.

Rojo mostly looked like his mother, he was mainly red, wich was the reason he got his name. Rojo means red, so thats what his name was.

"Momma, why didn't I get a new home?" He asked. "Well, our human wanted to keep one of my puppies, so he chose you." Sarah explained. "Well, why does dad hate me?" He asked. "Oh! Rojo! He doesn't hate you, he, he-". "I knew it! He hates me." Rojo said, running out of the house.

"Rojo! Come back!" Sarah called. He ignored her, he climed onto somthing, he couldn't tell what, then he fell into a crate. Sarah followed his scent. She saw his tail, sticking out of the crate, then she saw the lid placed on top. No...

She saw it being placed onto he truck, and she could hear his cries for help. "Momma! Momma!" He cried. Then, the truck started, and began to leave. She chased after it. "Rojo! Rojo!" She cried. "Mommma! Momma! Help!" she heard his cries one last time, and the truck was gone.

The truck stoped, and unloaded it. The box Rojo was in was unloaded. He jumped, shook, and did what ever he could to get out. One man opend the box, and he took off. "Momma? Momma? Where are you?" He shouted. He sat under a wooden gate. "Where am I? Where's mommy?" He asked himself.

A week later, Rojo was famished. He callapsed infront of a pourch and whined. "Momma.. Momma." He repeated. A man steped out after hearing his cries. "Oh my gosh!" He said and took the puppy in. He called the vet, and Rojo was taken to the animal hospital.

A few weeks later, the man came back to get the puppy. "Whats his name, he's a sweet pup." One vet asked. "Oh, he's just like my dad, Thomas. But the pups name is, Jason Thomas." The man said. The vet nodded and handed the pup to him and they left.

After they got home, he put Rojo, or now, Jason Thomas, down on a rug. "Well, JT, what do you think? Im Jason, I hope you'll like it here." Jason said and sat on the couch. JT smiled and jumped on the couch with him. "You crazy pup." Jason laughed.

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Sacrifice

PLOT: This is about Dakota's daughter, Annabell (aka Anna) and when she is forced to live in an abandend, old but huge house with an ugly, scrarred, cursed, and big dog. But she doesn't know about the curse, that he must learn to love, and the one he loves must love him back. But, who could love a scar-face?

On a cold winter day, a spoiled, selfish, and unkind dog heard scratching on his front door. He opend it to see an ugly, old female standing there. She asked to stay they night, away from the ice cold winds outside.

Repulced by her ugly face, he sneered at her and turned her away. She warned him not to be fooled by looks, that beauty lies withen. And when he went back inside, she shook the mud, durt, and other things on her body, and her beautiful face caut his attention. He tried to say he was sorry, but it was to late, she had seen that there was no love in his heart.

And as is punishment, she revealed an army of twelve dogs, hiding in the bushes, the attacked him and left nasty scares on his body. His handsom look melted away as they ripped at him. She warned that the scars would only be healed, if he learned to love, and to get love in return. As the mothns past and a year went by, he lost all hope.... For who could learn to love, a cursed, scarred dog?


Two years later: Nome Alaska.

"Go away, weirdo!" A female spat. "Why do you call me that?" Anna asked. "Your dad is a mental freak!" She spat. "HE IS NOT MY DAD!" Anna shouted. "Sure, weirdo. Oddy, freak, whatevr you would want me to call you." She said. Anna snorted and left. She walked home to her mother. Dakota was looking around the den, for any of the food she had saved.

"Hey mom." Anna said. "Why hello Anna, anything good happen in town today?" She asked. "No. Momma, do you think I'm, odd?" Anna asked. "My daughter, odd? Hmf, where would you get an idea like that?" Dakota asked. "Oh I dunno, It just doesn't feel like I fit in here. There's no one I can realy talk to." Anna sighed.

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Balto II: Offspring's Journy

PLOT: This is what 'I' think B2 should be, Im only useing Songa(Red fased pup), Jake (Dingo) Kodi (My verion) and Qwen(saba) after they are adopted, it go's into their point of veiw!

Balto was asleep, but was moving around in his boat as if he was running. He was dreaming, but, not a very good dream.

Balto awoke, like he had been doing for a while, he stood, and walked to the end of the boat. He looked over the edge, it seemed higher than normal, but he jumped anyway. Once he laned, he looked tward Jenna's house. It took much longer this time, but when he finnely mad it, he saw Rosie standing out side, crying.

"Oh no."Balto said to himself and ran into the shed. He ran over to Jenna, who wasn't moving, he looked down at the pups, five, but none were moving also. "How could this happen." Balto cried. Then it went black and dark blue. "Balto... Balto, wake, up!" A voice yelled

He felt frezzing water smash into him, he woke screaming. "Jenna!" He yelled. He looked up at what had woke him, Boris. "Jenna? Oh, I see, you have another dream again." Boris chuckeld, in his russain voice. "Yeah but not a good one." Balto replyd.

Boris gave him an odd look. "Yes, but Balto its just a dream." He said. "Yeah... well, Im going to check on Jenna." Balto barked and jumped off the boat. He ran to her house and went to the shed. He took a deep breath, and walked opend the door.

He saw Jenna, and she was doing fine. " Come on in, they don't bite." She said smiling, he walked in and looked in the basket. "Atleast not yet." Jenna smiled. Balto stared at them, six, just like in his dream, but this time they were alive, and healthy.

"Oh, Jenna, thier all so beautiful." Baolto wisperd. "Yes, but now they need names." Jenna replyd. "Oh.... yeah." Balto said. "Lets wait a few weeks, so thier personality's will help us." Balto said again. Jenna nodded her head and smiled.

About three weeks later, the pups eyes were open. "I think now is a good time." Jenna said. Balto nodded. The first pup they looked at was red, she had darker red bangs, her under coat was yellow-cream, and one of her eyes was brown and green, the other was brown. "Saba?" Balto segested. "Perfect!" Jenna smiled.

Then they looked at another pup with bangs. He was male, and his under coat was grey, and his eyes were blue. "He looks strong, so a strong name is.... Zuko?" Jenna said. "Yes, again perfect." Balo chuckeld.

There was only one brown one, she looked much like Balto, she had blue eyes too. "I love her eye collor, but blue doesn't seem like a good name." Balto said. "Oh! How about Aleu?"Jenna asked. Balto smiled and nodded.

The next pup was female, she had a white muzzle, and a red face. "Songa, thats beautiful."Jenna smiled. "Yes, yes it is."Balto said. Then they looked at the smallest pup, he was red and had light blue eyes. "Aaww, he's very small, like a, dingo, oh that perfect Dingo." Balto howled.

They named the last pup Kodiack, and he was strong looking. "Saba, Zuko, Aleu, Songa, Dingo and Kodi, our liitle puppies." Jenna sighed. Balto smiled "Yeah, our little pupies." He said. It was getting late, so Balto went home to Boris and told him about the pups names.
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The pups were eight weeks old, and it was time for them to be adopted. They were all very excited. "Aaawwwoooooo, aaawwwooooo." Aleu howled. The other pups had thier paws over thier ears. "Aleu, honny, please don't howl like that." Jenna said calmly. Aleu stoped and Songa sighed.

"Oh, Im sorry momma. It just happends when Im excited." Aleu barked, but was then takeld. "Im excited too! I can't wait to get a human! And chew on their socks haha." Saba cheered and was then takeld by Aleu. Then Dingo jumped to the top of the box. "Poppa! Are you gunna get a human too?" He asked.

Balto winked at him, "Naahh, see, humans like cute little puppies like you." He said, rubbing Dino's head with his paw. "Not old grizzly grown-up's like me." He laughed. Then a you boy walked up with his mom.

"These are Rosie's puppies momma. Jenna had um'. I Like... this one." He said, picking up Dingo. The pups waved bye to him, and Jenna smiled, "I know that human, he'll be a good boy for Dingo." She said to Balto, who didn't seem as happy.

Soon after a girl came up, "Look mommy! pupies!" She said. The pups danced around trying to seem playful, she then chose Saba, and walked away with her. "Bye Saba." The pups called, she waved back until she was out of sight.

Then four people walked up, a man took Zuko, another man took Songa, a young girl took Kodi and a old man grabed Aleu. They all walked away, and Jenna cryed alittle. "Its OK Jenna, like you said, all their human are from around here." Balto said, trying to comfert her.

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Aleu

The old man took held me for a long time, I looked up at him, he saw me and smiled. He rubbed my head, "You'll make a grate gift for her" He said. I didn't know what he was talking about, but I licked his face and he laughed.

Then I saw a larg house, we walked inside and he took me to a small room. He put me on the floor, and walked away, I looked around the room, it had larg boxes and buckets. A storage room I thought.

I heard the door open, I saw him with a little box in his hands. He picked me up and put me inside it. It was dark but I wasn't scared. I felt him move the box and heard him talking. "Here's you gift." He said. Suddenly the box opend and an old woman held me, smiling.

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Dingo

The little boy took me to a very big house. Once we walked inside, I saw a stare case, and raced to the top of it. Then we walked down a hall way and he turned into a small room. He droped me infont it and told me to stay, so I did.

"Hey dad look!" He cheered. "What is it Tucker?" A man asked. "Momma let me get a puppy!" He said. The man came out and held me, I waged my tail and my licked his face. "Hmhm, cute, take good care of him Tucker." The man said.

He handed me to, who I now know as, Tucker. "OK boy, lets go to my room, and I'll sneak you some turky meat." Tucker said and I fallowd him to a small room. When he left I sat by his bed. "This looks like It'll be fun."

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Saba

"Look uncle Max! She'll be perfect!" The girl said. "What is it?" He asked. "She'll be great for your team when she's older." She said. The man stood up and looked at me. "Doesn't it look, uuhhh, small Susie?" He asked. "No! And its a she not an it!" Susie yelled. "Okay, well whats her name?" Uncle Max asked.

Susie looked back at me. "Uuhhh, she doesn't have one yet." She said slowly. "She looks a bit like my old lead dog, Gewn, doesn't she?" Her uncle said. "She does! So is Gwen her name?" Susie asked. "Yeah I guess."

Gwen I thought. That was a fine name, I liked it better than my old one. "Gwen, lets go home!" Susie called, walkin out the door. I jumped to my feet and fan after her and jumped into her car.

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Songa

The man placed me in a big box-like area. I looked on the walls. I saw blood, it was very old, but still scared me. Then I heard growling, I wemperd. "Shut up!" The man said and slapped me on the back of my head. Then a door opend and a larg male husky ran tward me at full speed.

He grabed me in his jaws and shook his head. He then droped me and kicked me. I closed my eye's, I new I was going to die. But I heard someone taking the mean dog away. Then a felt warm hand grab me. I looked up, it was a girl, she had a badge on her shirt. "Don't worry girl." She said.

I new where she was oin to take me, so when we got out side I jumped and ran. She, to my surprise, stood there and wached me run. I ran until I found my friend, Nakita. "Help!" I cried. I was weak, and fell. She came running over. "Songa! What happend!" She asked. "Dog fight." I whiperd.

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Kodi

My new owner, who told me was Samantha, put me in a big backyard. "This is your new home Kodi." She said. "Rosie told me your name." She said again.

I simled at her and began to explore my new home, I found that my dog house was, rather big. I found that there was a doggie-door. I loved my new home, and then I saw that the inside of the house was great too.

I found a small bed next to a larger one. "THats where you sleep, and thats where I sleep." Samantha said. I walked on the small bed, it was very cozzy. I curled up and fell asleep.

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Aleu

I had lived lived with the old couple for, about three mounths, and I loved every day I did. The old man's name was Jeff, and his wife's was Sally. I slept with them at night and sat with Sally while she waited for Jeff to come home from work.

They also gave me a new name, Clara. I went by both of my names, when I talked to my family I went by, Aleu. But when I was home, I went by Clara. But it didn't matter much.

Finnely, Jeff came home from work. "Where have you been? You would ave been home two hours ago normaly." Sally asked. "Yeah.. They had some trubble, and asked me to help." Jeff answered. Sally smiled. "That was nice of you.". I went and scratched on the door. "Oh, I'll let you out Clara." Jeff said. He let me out and I trotted to go and find Saba.

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Dingo

After a few months, I realized I was having so much more fun! I had a new home, a new master, and a new name, Jake. Tucker and I were like brothers, we never went anywhere without eachother, unless he want to school.

"Jake! You wanna go see your brothers and sisters?" Tucker asked. Then it hit me, all the kids that took us-all but Zuko, Aleu and Songa, but they still agreed to come- had agreed to meet up after school and let the pups play. I ran to Tucker and he hooked a leash on my coller and we dashed out the door.

As we walked, I could see Aleu. "Hey! Aleu! Wanna come walk with us?" I asked. "Nah, Im looking for Saba, or what ever her new name is." Aleu chuckled. "Okey, see ya!" I replyd, running off with Tucker.

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Saba

I was running with Susie, to the spot where we would see my siblings again, and I just couldn't stop running! "Gwen! Slow down!" Susie exlaimed. Oh, woops! I slowed down. Then, I saw that we were there. I sat, and waited.

Susie caut up to me, but, as she did, a bad scent enterd my nose. Songa I could smell her, but somthing else. Another dog? One of her friends, mabey, but. Still. Somthing else. Blood! I smelt blood! She could be hurt! Dieing! Or-or I couldn't push the last thought into my head.

"Songa!" A cried. I ran twards the scent. "Gah! Gwen!" I heard Susie whine. "Songa! Where are you?" I called. I heard a voice. "Its okey! I-I'll go for help!" I saw a light blue dog, staring down at somthing red. I rushed over. I was taken aback.

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Songa

I saw a red thing come over me. Then it ran off. I don't remember mutch after that. Then I saw many figures over me. "Wha? Where am I?" I asked. "Oh Songa!" My mother cried and fell over me, nuzzling me. "Your OK!" Everyone was saying. "Yes, Im OK. Can I go now?" I asked. My father nodded.

A few months later, I was about a year old, and was taking a wlk with Nakita. "You hear that?" I purcked up my ears to try and hear what my friend was talking about. I could hear footsteps, and whoever was making them, they were running from somthing or some one. We heard it coming closer, and then we could hear panting.

We looked back and saw a black, white, and gold Akita running tawrds us, he was bleeding. Then we saw a brown, big and angry looking figure running behind him. We squented thier eye's, and then, relized what was chasing the young dog.

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Animation Source is my home!
Animation Source is my home!
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