Lunar98's Art and Renders *I need Critiques and Comments*

CrashKeys · **Posted:** Wed May 27, 2009 6:14 pm

http://baltosource.timduru.org/en/fanimage/lunar98/1824.html&display=60 http://baltosource.timduru.org/en/fanart/lunar98/4187.html

I want comments and critiques. I want to know what you think about my art and renders. I really don't care if it sounds harsh or not, but try to make it sound not TOO harsh. Eh, comment and critique away!

Alpha Jenna · **Joined:** Thu May 28, 2009 11:37 am **Posts:** 11

lunar98, I think they're quite good! Well done; your renders are very amusing, 'cause of their markings/fur colors.

~ Alpha Jenna

CrashKeys · **Posted:** Thu May 28, 2009 8:55 pm

Thank you Alpha Jenna!

Sweet Fur Wolf · **Posted:** Mon Jun 15, 2009 8:57 pm

Truthfully, I see nothing bad to say about your art nor your images/renders.
The art is a style unique to you and the renders are done beautifully.
With all that said and done all I can simply say is that
You Have Awesome Art Skillz.

Pikayu · **Posted:** Mon Jun 15, 2009 10:05 pm

I'd say work on the anatomy more. Use real life references and study how the legs bend (among other things). Some of your pics have their legs bending at odd angles. You do have an interesting style, just practice and improvement will come.
Good luck ^^

Mighty · **Posted:** Tue Jun 16, 2009 3:21 pm

Like stated, Your anatomy needs some work. For the most part It's good. It just seems to be with the legs your having problems. They just seem to long and loose to me.

Panama_WhiteWolf · **Posted:** Wed Jun 17, 2009 7:53 pm

Well first off what other people have already said, work on your anatomy. Look at real wolf pictures. Some of your drawings i have noticed that the legs are in positions that look like the leg is broken.

And the wolves head needs improvment to, the eyes are to close together and to large.

You just need to practise and look at wolf pictures more to get a good idea of properly drawing wolves.

CrashKeys · **Posted:** Thu Jun 18, 2009 6:53 am

Alright guys and girls! Thanks, I always knew something was wrong about the legs! But the head, no, never knew. Thanks for pointing that out Panama!

Panama_WhiteWolf · **Posted:** Thu Jun 18, 2009 1:49 pm

Quote:

Alright guys and girls! Thanks, I always knew something was wrong about the legs! But the head, no, never knew. Thanks for pointing that out Panama!

No problem, Glad i could help out a fellow artist.

NattiKay · **Posted:** Fri Jul 17, 2009 7:59 am

Your art is good, but I have one suggestion: Don't put both eyes in the corner like that....it looks like cross eye (no offense!)

CrashKeys · **Posted:** Sat Jul 18, 2009 11:09 am

Ehh.. I used too big of a brush. ^^' And non taken, as I said, 'as long as it is not TOO mean.' Trust me, my cousin gave it straight to me. Did I feel horrible, but I knew, it was for my own good. She told me 'Life is harsh, so that's why I made it sound harsh.' Now, I don't mind and I want her to come back to LA and I'm gonna show her my art and ask her, "Do you see anything in need of improvement? Tell me anything! D:<"

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