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Plot Summary:

There is a young wolf dog who is captured by humans, going to be used as a fighting dog. She meets many dogs, nice and mean, and finally escapes, embarking on a great journey to save a magical being, told about by one of the dogs she killed.
It's a long story and right now you're probably thinking "What the ...?!" But I assure you it will be better than it sounds!

Characters:

(I decided here would be a good plave to show off my Chicken Smoothie.com Pets)

Mae - The wolf dog -

Lew - The crazy killed dog -

Sampson - The friend -

Mysteek - The magical being - *WILL UPDATE*

Story coming soon to a Balto Source Forum Board near you!

I find it odd that nobody has replied to this yet so I guess I get to be the first.

I like the story idea and yeah, the magical being thing did make me go "what the..." but that only makes me wanna see what that means and how it ties into the story.

Can't wait to read it.

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Mae yelped as she was vicously thrown into the ring. It was down in a man-made ditch, indoors of a small dome-like building. The dirt came up in a cloud as she hit the ground. She looked up and saw a terrible black dog covered with scars. He snarled,"I'm Lew, and I'm gonna kill you. Fair warning."

The she wolf/dog gasped,"No! I'm too young to die! Where am I, anyway? What's going on?" Lew smiled evilly,"This is a dog fight, stupid. And WE'RE fighting."

Lew lunged at her, but she dodged out of the way. He turned, biting her neck and pinning her, but she kicked him off and copied his move, only faster. Mae was nervous and scared. She didn't want to hurt this dog, but she had to. Lew kickied her jaw, and she gave out a small cry.

It was strange, but Lew felt bad for hurting a girl. He walked up to her slowly,"Are you ok mi-"

He was cut off when Mae lunged up, biting his neck and swing ing him around, throwing him down with all of her strength. The wolf in her was begining to slowly creep out of it's shell. She pinned him and snarled,"Any last words, Lew?"

The male tried to shove her off, but every time her tried, she hit him hard in the face. He finally sighed, his eyes turning black and cloudy. His voice got squeaky as he hissed,"Find the mystical being on Mount Keni, find it and you shall rule all as I once did..."

Mae frowned, more confused than you guys are.What was he saying. Her tail twitched, and she finished him off with a bite.
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Well, that was some quick action. I didn't think that she would go from "where am I?" to "I will bite your neck so that your blood spills across the floor in a super-violent blood explosion extraordinaire!!"(that last one I paraphrased).

I like it so far so can't wait to see more.