Animation Source Forums

=> Visit the Animation Source fansites!

Read the site rules!

All times are UTC - 6 hours




Post new topic Reply to topic  [ 3 posts ] 

What should be my fict's name
Situations 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Being a Wolf pup of Batlo 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Balto's wolf pup 50%  50%  [ 1 ]
The hero's howler 50%  50%  [ 1 ]
Total votes : 2
Author Message
 Post subject: Unwelcomed because of Blood
PostPosted: Mon May 04, 2009 8:17 pm 
Animation Source is my home!
Animation Source is my home!

Joined: Thu Sep 25, 2008 7:44 pm
Posts: 3724
Location: BEhind you, stalking....
Gender: Female



This Fan Fict is un-named so the title hardly makes sense right now.

This story revoles around the daughter of Balto,the one that does not belong to Jenna. SHe is a prue wolf,Balto had mated with wolf and earned her since the others died. balto could not keep her because of Jenna and she left Nome,now she is back and wants to become real family. Jenna is hardly near her,not wanting anything to do with her,maybe Jenna will accept her or keep away. Maybe Balto's wolf pup can become family and earn something more.

Chatper 1


View point-Balto's wolf pup


This was the day,I travled far to reach the home I was sppouse to be living in,Nome. My white paws leaving foot prints as I ran,my long pink tuonge hanging out from my gray muzzle. The icy winds fluttered snow flakes into my brown eyes,but it didn't make me whince at all. All I wanted was to be in the warm house of my father-Balto the dog who saved Nome-and be with my family. I soon saw Nome ahead of me,I jumped and howled for my father. I landed on my front paws,having some trouble running again but I magned. Soon I saw a gray wolf/dog with wide eyes. I looked like him execpted for my white tips of my ears,tails,and paws. "Dad!"I yipped,running to him.

View point-Balto


"Aooow!"I heard a long howl shout through the sky. That howl was familiar,could it be? Then it hit me,the pup that left me because of my red husky mate,Jenna,was here. I ran to the sound and saw her. She was graceful and lovely as ever. She was gray like me but her paws were white,her ears were tipped and also her tail. "SnowBell!"I yelled,yes that was her name. Since birth,Snowbell was white in the prue winter when I had her,and her laugh was like bells. "Dad!"She said,jumping on me and licking my cheek. "I missed you so!"She said "I have to"U replied laughing,she joined along,her voice was like the bells that rang beauitfully. Snowbell sat down infront of me and waited for me to get back up. I did,laughing once more. "Snowbell,it's nice to see you,what brings you here?"I asked,tilting my head. Snowbell smiled "The forest didn't give me anything fun to do,so,I came here for family!"She said.I smiled at her. "Well,I glad you did come here"I got to my paws,now standing. "I'll lead you to my home and let you get settled and then you'll be able to see the rest"I started to lead her to the ship. Now I wondered,what would Jenna do if she saw SnowBell?


Last edited by MMD(MokaMokaDance) on Sat May 09, 2009 10:13 am, edited 1 time in total.

Top
 Profile  
Reply with quote  
 Post subject: Re: Situations(Vote for fan fict name!)
PostPosted: Tue May 05, 2009 6:49 pm 
Famous one
Famous one
User avatar

Joined: Mon Oct 27, 2008 2:30 pm
Posts: 1129
Location: Carried away by a moonlight shadow
Gender: Male
I like the fanfic and here are some title ideas:

Family bonds
You'll never be welcome here
Pure blood

And one question: How can his kid be all wolf if he's not all wolf?


Top
 Profile  
Reply with quote  
 Post subject: Re: Situations(Vote for fan fict name!)
PostPosted: Tue May 05, 2009 7:27 pm 
Animation Source is my home!
Animation Source is my home!

Joined: Thu Sep 25, 2008 7:44 pm
Posts: 3724
Location: BEhind you, stalking....
Gender: Female



There's a very sad ending for Balto and SNowbell. Pm if you want to know why she's full wolf. I'd hate to ruin the twist here. And,I do like your titles,Now I will offcialy call it "Unwelcomed because of Blood" Your titles just made the idea pop in my head!^^ Anyways,here's the rest fo the chapte seeing I didn't get to finish bceause of time....

View point-SNowbell


My father seemed...worried for some reason. Then it snapped,JEnna,my step mother. "Is mother still not over it?"I asked. Balto turned to me and half heartedly smiled "She's still Jenna we know and love!"He said turning back to the path. I frowned looking down as we walked. I found myself looking at the large ship,Balto jumping right in. "Boris!"He called,a old looking duck came along. "Boris meet my daughter,Snowbell!"He smiled and Bois frowned "Balto?She looks alot like a wolf!"He said and I growled "Got a problem with that quakers?"Boris odvisly took that offensive "I'm a goose,some wolf"HE said. BAlto stepped in between us before I could lose my temper. "Boris,I will tell you the story later,just get along"HE said and walked in the small room. "Duck"I said,sticking my tunge out to him abd following Balto. "Wolf breath"Boris said,waddling away. I rolled my eyes,I really had a temper sometimes,all because of the crowd I hung with. MY friends consits of May,Spring,Summer and Winters,the sisters then there were the lovely Demon,Lion,and Edward,the triplet from another wolf. I was dearly in love with them,but after hanging out with the seven of them,I became very aggerssive. Balto turned to me "So,your pretty..."balto was like this with me since I was young and still with him,afraid to get involved but wanted to. He wanted o be a good father,but I was to different for him to compare to. "Mean?Yeah...kindof need to be out there"I chuckled. "Well,that's true"He grummbled,then I felt like I needed to leave ad see town. "Mind if I sneak out for a bit?"I laughed,Balto smiled "SUre you don't need any help getting around?" "No!"I replied and was out and running to town. Balto made me feel very welcomed but guitly at what I did to the two(Balto and Jenna). My paw took me around,meeting some dogs. "Well,well,lookie here"I heard a voice say,then turned to see a black and white husky,well built for one. "Steele,nice to see you?"I titled my head in question "Haha,very funny full bred"He spat. "Stay away,or I'll tear you limb from limb when no one can identify you"I growled "Sure,sure,after you can beat me!"Steele launched himself towards me then a soft but commading voice yelled "Stop!"

end of chapter,read chapter two to find out who the voice was!^^


Top
 Profile  
Reply with quote  
Display posts from previous:  Sort by  
Post new topic Reply to topic  [ 3 posts ] 

All times are UTC - 6 hours



You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot post attachments in this forum

Search for:
Jump to:  
Powered by phpBB © 2000, 2002, 2005, 2008 phpBB Group