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Where the river runs, werewolves live in harmony. Jeromy's ancestors has lived on the acient grounds for thousands of years. But when a mysterious werewolf enters the territory and threatens them all, they rebel. When the river runs red, will Jeromy stop the flow?

Rules:

*Mild cussing allowed but block out the letters.

EX: What the f--- is wrong with you? Only keep the first letter in the word. Everything else MUST be blocked.

*Do not post once, and then leave the role play.

*I will once and a while hold role player of the month. This is where the user who has done his/her best at roleplaying will be posted.

*Do not post one line at a time. Try your best to keep it more than one line.

*NOTHING innappropriate. Kid-friendly site, means kid-friendly topics.

*Do not post some thing like below:

OOC: Writer's block

This will not be accepted. This is a lot like spam. If you post role play, then OOC: Writer's Block, that is acceptable.

*You MUST use a character made by you, OR that you have permission to use.

*Try your best to fix grammar mistakes. Use proper punctuation. It's hard to read if you don't.

*Have fun. I want people to enjoy this.

Roleplayer of the month:

N/A yet


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Age:
Gender:
Species(human, werewolf):
Personality:
Eye color:
Haor color:
History:
Accessories:
Text color:
Roleplay example(more than one sentence):
Picture(s):

MY BIO

Name: Jeromy
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Species(human, werewolf): werewolf
Personality: Daring, funny, classic, charming
Eye color: hazel?(I'm not sure) Blue if wolf form
Hair color: brown
History: His ancestors have lived on Weshmire Willows for thousand of years. Other than that, not much.
Accessories: none (other than clothes)
Text color: Black
Roleplay example(more than one sentence): Jeromy roamed the willows. The fog always managed to linger around him. The fresh air, sparkling like crystal mist. He was home--his true home was always here.
Picture(s):



Wolf forms:

Sounds good I will join

Name: Dark
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Species: Werewolf and proud of it
Personalty: Loving and calming he is the first to cheer someone up but if someone speaks ill of his brother then they wont live to talk about it
Eye colour: Green in human form and brown in wolf form
Hair colour: Black
History: dark Just to have an anger problem and killed another werewolf because of it thanks to his brother he has'ent anymore but he still fells guilty
Accessories: He has a scar from a fight which he has told noone about not even his brother
Text colour: Green
Roleplay Example: It had been weeks since dark has seen another werewolf apart from his brother it did get a little lonely not that his brother was not good company but he was only one wolf 'Dark we shold stop for a rest' said darak he nods and sits down for a much needed rest

Name: Darak
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Species; Werewolf
Personalty: He wouldnt hurt a hair on your head he is lovable and kind and shy
Eye colour: Blue as a human but black as night in wolf form
Hair colour: Brown
History: same As his brothers apart from the anger problem
Accesories: None apart from clothers
Text colour; Black
Roleplay example: I sit after running for a week i was tired but my brother wanted to find other warewolf and so did i not that he was not good company but he was only one wolf

Please. I only had one problem. Read the rules. They clearly state use proper grammer. Please make an effort.

Also, will you be in Jeromy's clan or the mysterious werewolf's clan?

(Thanks for being turthful and i've edited it tell me if it is good or bad)

It had been weeks since dark has seen another werewolf apart from his brother it did get a little lonely not that his brother was not good company but he was only one wolf 'Dark we shold stop for a rest' said darak he nods and sits down for a much needed rest

This is a MAJOR run on sentence. This is what it should look like:

It had been weeks since Dark has seen another werewolf, apart from his brother. It did get a little lonely, not that his brother was not good company, but he was only one wolf .

"Dark, we shold stop for a rest." said Darak. He nods and sits down for a much needed rest.

Part 2:

I sit after running for a week i was tired but my brother wanted to find other warewolf and so did i not that he was not good company but he was only one wolf

This is another run on sentence. And it should be in third person, such as the first was in.

This is what it should look like:

Darak sits after running for a week. He was tired but his borther, Dark, wanted to find another werewolf. Darak wanted to find one too, but he was only one werewolf.

If you learn from this, you could be an excellent role player. But if this continues, you might not be able to keep up.

(Thanks for being honest with me again if you wont me to change it i will)

Balto, what I want is grammar. I want you to use sentences. With periods, commas, and other things such as that. But if you continue with run-on sentences, people won't understand what you are talking about. If so, people won't roleplay with you and you'll be forced to watch the role play go on without you.

(Ok.....)

Hopefully it'll work out. If you're new to English or you come from a different country that doesn't speak English that much, this role play isn't right for you. But if you're willing to try your best at grammar, then I'm willing to help you.

(No i was born in the u.k the turth is my english sucks and if i dont get good at it i can play football for the school anymore so this is why i am here but if you willing to help me i am willing to listen)

I see. Well, I think we should stop before we make this all spam. Does anyone else want to join?

(I can ask a couple of people that are A LOT better then me to join if you wont)

Okay, thank you. But make sure you give them the link. And let's not spam anymore.

Avvie Cat top the rescue! ^^

Name: Kira Kat
Age: 16 years
Gender: Female
Species: Human
Personality: She's quite the hardhead, but she's willing to listen to any kind of problem if you can get her attention the first time. She's also very kind, but push the wrong button, and you're asking for it...
Eye color: Dark Brown
Hair color: Black
History: She was born the abnormal one in the family. She actually believes in the superstitious and claims to be called a 'witch.'
Accessories: A black and red dragon necklace, two lace-up, fingerless gloves that to up to her elbows, and usually has her hair up in a ponytail with a cresent-moon holder.
Text color: Midnight Blue
Roleplay example: Kira panted heavily as she stood in the middle of the dark forest. That was horrible! she thought, her eyes wide with surprise. I imagined it a lot worse, but...here?! She then sighed heavily and took a quick look around before slowly continuing on, her senses more alert now that she knows that there were even more werewolves near....
Picture(s): http://www.ktla.com/common/medialib/image/71371.jpg

Accepted