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Post subject: Ablivia Posted: Sun Apr 26, 2009 5:14 pm |
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This fan fict is about were wolves,vampires,and many other creatures which may or may not exsit.The plot,characters,etc belongs to me,And yes,I did make Ablivia up(Ah-bliv-e-ah) Plot Ablivia,the land of peace for all creatures that welcomes the warm and friendly envorment. This great land is located in Earth amazingly,hidden by a sheild in Ireland. The portal that lies in the Dunluce Castle,there is were all creatures have been all along. After many years of hidding,two witches,both brother and sister fought,soon Ablivia was a land of cold winter,the sister had fallen and the evil brother stands. Ablivia is now ruled by the evil brother named Aleric,using the power of his sister,Sabrina,a snow witch to create the frozen land. All of Ablivia is now in need of help,but no one able to stand agaisnt them. When a human girl somehow enters the portal into Ablivia even when it's protected by a sheild(which doesn't allow humasn in),is chosen to lead an army of willing creatures to fight for theri freedom. Well,I'll have the first chapter will be posted soon!Please tell me what you think,from comments to suggestions!^^
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Post subject: Re: Ablivia Posted: Sun Apr 26, 2009 5:56 pm |
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I think I'll give it a read; you've piqued my interest. I may not be too into the vampire or were wolf thing 'cause it's done a lot but the rest of it sounds cool. Also, I just love how the portal is in Ireland so that alone makes it awesome 
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Post subject: Re: Ablivia Posted: Sun Apr 26, 2009 6:37 pm |
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Hope you'll enjoy it!^^ Well anyways,I'm not going to do so much of the vampire werewolves,I'm adding creatures like faries to animal warriors,maybe even dragons!^^ A mix of all of these creatures! well,heres the first Character! Chapter 1-Welcome to Ireland! This was it,the happy streets of Ireland were just below me! My green eyes gave a twinkle as I knew something wonderful was happening in my life. "Amy,sit down,please you look like a five year old in a candy store"Said a annoyed voice,I turned to meet blue eyes. "Sorry Ash,just,well enjoying the view"I said,this was my friend Ashley,or Ash for short. She had long blond hair with some brown colored in. "Enjoy it a little less please,it's freaking me out"She mummbled and went back to reading her magaznie. "Sorry"I frowned sitting back down and watching the lush green land below us pass. It was only minutes before we were able to step off the plane and breath the fresh air of Ireland. "Wow!It's lovelier then I ever imagned!"I through my arms out to my side,letting the light breeze throw my black and red hair(Which I dyed the otehr day) around. "Amy,let's go!"Ashley said pulling me along. "Alright,alright!"I smiled soon on my feet walking with her.
We finally got to my grandmother's house,which was a good 2 hours or so,well I fell asleep on the way so I might have to ask Ashley later. "So,your grandma is out of town?"Ashley asked,having her suit cases by her sides,just like me. "Yeah,she said she won't be but a week or so till she comes back,going on vaction for a few,it will be good for her"I said walking up to the door. "Grandma said that the key will be...here!"My eyes twinkled as I found the shiny key in the flower pot sitting next to a rocking chair. I grabbed it and unlocked the door,walking in. "My gosh!Your grandma sure does know house fashion"Ashley said,laughing with me. "Grandma sure does!"I agreed,the house was small but it was well enough to fit a few people. I notice her living room was a light lavender color,her funature was either white or light purple. Ashley and I walked into the kitchen,it was also small,but very cozy. "There should be some food in the fridge"I said to Ashley,knowing she would be hungry,but she was in awe of the beauty of my grandma's home. "Cool!So were's our rooms?"She asked,titling her head in wonder. "Should be to the left,there is one free room,so you can have that one,I'll take my grandma's"I smiled,lettign Ashley go into her room. "Found it!"I heard her yell,making me chuckle at her sillyness. I couldn't help but wonder into my grandma's room and look at her stuff. It was very beautiful,she had so many clothes that fit with the weather here,but I also liked the dresses. Then I heard this strange noise come from her closet,just after I closed the door. What could possibly be in there?I just looked,I wondered in confusing. I held my hand to the nod,taking a breath and holding it,then yanked the door open once more. I had closed my eyes then peaked them open,a goldren necklace hung in the closet,just swaying,then I saw no clothes were there,just that necklace. I reached my hand towards it,as I grabbed the chain a small light filled the bottom of it then I saw nothing but darkness.
Darkness,Darkness,and more Darkness I saw then sat up. Had I fallen asleep?Was that all a dream? I felt a cold line on my neck. I jumped up and ran to the mirror that hung on the closet door. I foced my eyes on a gold chain then as I peered far down,it had a stone,it was shaped as a four leafed clover and also was green. "Amy!Get your fat butt out here!"I heard ashley yell,banging on the door. "oh,uh,Coming!"I said running to the door and opening it. "Hey sleepy head!"Ashley smiled "Good morning Ash"I smiled back at her,still confused on my "dream" with this necklace. "Is there something wrong,Amy?"She asked me,frowning as she saw past my mask. "No,everything is just fine"I lied and walked out,I began to start the day,just hanging out here at my grandmas,just geting used to this. I feared something bioth good and bad was about to happen,but I brushed it off for now.
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Post subject: Re: Ablivia Posted: Mon Apr 27, 2009 9:33 pm |
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Here's the next Chapter! I'm trying to make them longer but it's hard work!^^ well here it is! Chapter 2-Site seeing to another world "So Amy,ou planned on going to vist Dunluce castle right?"Ashley asked as we sat at the table looking at some papers we printed out from all these sites about places around Ireland. "Yeah!" I said "I've always wondered what a caslte looked like so I thought DUnlunce was the best place to do it." Ashely smiled and took out her cell phone. "I'll get a cab and we'll go there!"She smiled and started to dail the number she memorized before. "Oh and get the camra and stuff!"She added before she started to talk with someone. I nodded and walked into the spare room which was Ash's room for right now. It was a pain white color with a fairly big bed and a cloest. The light breeze fluttered the curtians around as I started to look into Ashley's bag. I found her camra,then I had mine. I walked back into the kitchen and saw her all ready and reached for the bag I had packed with all of the stuff we needed. "Let's go!"She smiled and pulled me out the door,then waited for our cab.
It seemed like hours before we got to the castle. It was stunning,wll to me it was. The old bricks seemed to be enchanted with magic and as we toured inside of it we got a better view. "Oh,this is wonderful!"I said clicking the camra of so many places along the castle. The tour guide started to blab on and on,then I saw a closed off area. "Amy,psss,Amy!"Ashley hissed pulling me "Let's go!"She tuged on me once again. "Where?"I asked puzzled,then she lightly nuged her head tto the area I had seen. "No!That's like really bad,we'll get in trouble"I whispered,not shocked that she would do this but in disbelief that she would get me into this. "Come on!An adventure!"Ashley said. I was caught into peer pressure,I wished I really paid more attention in health so I wouldn't have to figure out to deal with this. "Ok!Fine,Ash I give let's go" Ashley was really good at sneeking around,even with a clumsy partner in crime. She left me into a door,then after that a creepy cave like theme. I shivered as I inhaled and exhaled cold icy air. Ashley smiked as I jumped from seeing a rat. "Scared are you?"She chuckled then turned away from me to see a rather huge spider hanging on it's web. "AH!!!"Ash screamed and ran,leaving me. "Wait!Ash!"I yelled looking around in the dark,staying away from the spider and started to run. I felt everything starting to get colder,I shook as I tried to keep warm. Maybe I went the wrong way?I thought then stopped as a light came from my new necklace. I tried to yank it off,but no luck. "What does this thing want with me?!"I growled tugging on it again. Follow the key,open the doorI heard the chanting voice say,I nearly jumped but it was calming yet surpizing. "The Door?"I asked walking towards somewhere,the "key" seeming to point it's way for me. I held my hand out then felt a wood like feature. The clover necklace blasted a huge burst of light at that moment making me see the door. I whinced as I eyes started to burn because of the light,then I yanked the door open. My body felt like some one was pulling me in. I fell into darkness of the door,engulfed by it. Get up,you'll die off coldnessThat voice,the angel like voice sang to me to live,but how was I dieing. I felt myself being pulled togther then I felt the coldness. I busted up,looking around,it was snow all around me. My mouth nearly droped but I was to cold to take that in. I got to my feet,my sandles covered in the frozen water. I shook terrible then heard the light sound of snow crunching behind me. I turned around to see a gray and white wolf with hard green eyes.
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Post subject: Re: Ablivia Posted: Thu Apr 30, 2009 7:40 pm |
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HEres the thrid chapter,in this the story starts to un-fold. SO enjoy! Chapter 3-Ablivia? SO there I was,laying in snow with a wolf,watching my every move. "Nice doggy"It snapped at me,growling like I offened it "Ah!Wolfie,nice wolife!"I tried to recover but ended up back up from the wolf. It crouched lower,walking silently towards me,then I knew my choces,run like an idoit or wait to be eaten. I'd rather fight before death,so I truened and ran from the wolf,I could not hear the soft crunching of the snow as it ran. I knew it would follow but how could I be so stupid to run,why not climb a tree,but I didn't have time for thinking of my stupidity. My body heated with the run,my heart beating faster as I ran,then I could hear the light russel from the area beside me. My legs keep going,I didn't want to stop. I finally was able to stop,but sadly I was trapped. I turned around to see the wolf staring with calmness. "Back away!"I yelled grabbing a stick,I didn't want to hurt it so I wacked the stick around to see if it would back off,no luck. I looked back,seeing the cliff that made me stop gave me an idea. Maybe,I could be fast enough to climb down. I through the stick at the white and gray wolf,it having dodged and growled. I quickly looked over the cliff,seeing a branch there,maybe I could hold onto that. I jumped,free falling till I was close enough to caught the branch. I whipped my hand out and caught hold of it,hanging above the ground. I stuggled to reach my other hand(I hardly had any upper body strength) and gripped with two hands now. Death was now near as I heard a small crack from the branch. I winced as I heard it again and the branch flinched with it,lowering to death's arms. My eyes produced tears that streamed down my face,then I let go,knowing it wouldn't matter. The icy air swirled around me as I fell,I was spread open,one hand out to the cliff as if someone could reach me now. I closed my eyes then a felt a fluffy feather like sudstance under me. What is this? I thought gripping the "feathers." I couldn't open my eyes,I felt so weak,so tried. I felt sleep grab old of me,and my dreams began. Wake up young one,they need you. That voice,the lovely voice seemed very clear. I noticed that it seemed different,it was a bit deeper but very nice still. Who are you?I thought,maybe I could commuinte with this person. Lovely,I'm no one you should meet,just wake up,you need to speak with them. Alright,I answered tried to open my eyes. Slowly I could hear the world around me,then three voices reached my eyes. "but sir!She can't be,we can't just-" "Shush now Prince,I know what the legends says,this is the girl with deep darkness and red flames,see it decribes her hair"Said a low voice that interrupted the other,but where they talking about me?.Then a quiet mummble reached my ears. "And her clothes are graceful and different from ours,like thoses humans" Humans? Where they not humans themselves? I struggled with the darkness till I found myself in a tent with three other boys. One was an old winkled man,white snowy hair and a small beard. The second was a young man,maybe in his eary 30's,his hair was short and brown,his eyes were a slate blue. The third was more hidden in the dark,I could tell he was the mummbler I had heard before. The guy was more about my age,19,20 maybe. His hair was long and black,hanging freely. I notice the burning red in his dark eyes,it nearly sent me running. "She's awake!"Said the brown haired one,his blue eyes sparkling like a child "Prince,calm down,you never my know their kinds ablities"I blinked at the old man first then found my voice. "Who are you,what do you want,where am I?"I shot the questions fast,worried as I was I couldn's help it. "One,I'm Prince!The old man is Master Chris and that guy over there is Dark"Well,red eyes is Dark,wonder why "two,Were just here to look after you till Lady Spirits finds a punishment,and three Your in Ablivia! This is the land of the shifters,Lavirea"I titled my head "La-what?" Prince smiled "La-ver-e-ah,Levirea"He chuckled,then looked to the tent's enterence,a long howl broke the sudden silence. "Well,I guess the introductions were cut short,bye!"I shook my head to see if this was just a dream,the two were gone and Dark was still there. "Is this a dream?"I asked him,he shot a glance at me then back to the tent's wall. "No"Not talkitive huh? "Then what's going on?"I growled,he already,made me mad,it was like he didn't want to be here,or talk to me. Dark turned to me,shot a angry glare. "Do humans or whatever you are,talk this much?You should know what is going on if your you know what"Dark snorted and turned away,I was about to yell till he gripped onto me and pulled me outside. I saw thousands of people staring,hissing,growling,any noises of animals came from their mouths. "People of Levirea,I give you a trasspasser,no kind of magic readeates from her,we will have a sacrife!"I heard a voice yell infront of us,distanced but very loud. The crowd,laughed,smile,clapped,gave realiving sighs,all for my death? I struggled in Dark's grip but gave up quickly. Follow my instructions carefully You again?Your helping me,I asked,looking around the area,no one near me but Dark and his voice was to deep for this one. I will always help you,now let the male take you where ever then yell to their leader to let you see SoftWings I nodded to myself and let Dark push me along till I saw a light blue haired women,her skin was pale and her eyes icy blue. "So,any last words?"She asked,her voice very demontic to me,but strangily calming. "I would like to see SoftWings!"I yelled as loud as I could. "Softwings would never listen to such creature with a burning sent as yours"The women said Tell Kirten to let you see Softwings,or you will cast a spell Cast a spell!?I'm human here!I sighed metally and glared at the women,taking in the fact her name was Kirsten. "Kirsten,Let me see Softwings or I will cast a spell"The women froze for a second then shook her head "No,I wouldn't wnat to put her in danger" Repeat these words exactly...Levirea,Santos,Jesna,Safa "Levirea,Santos,Jesna,Safa!"I yelled,the wind and snow swirling around with anger. Kirsten gasped ad took a step back "It's not possible,theres no way someone could master a four words spell!"She said. The the icy winds came behind me and made a figure,which turned out to be a great dragon roaring agt the sky then turned to Kirsten. Repeat,I will free my summon from my grasp if I don't see Softwings I repeated,vemon stinging my words. Kirsten looked up then back at me. "Alright,i'm sorry"She said going to her knees and bowing not coming back up to see me. "Softwings will be out in a moment,please keep your distorier in your hands"She begged. Soon we both looked up feeling a great mist of soft snow. Then a creamy white wolf appeared after snow flakes gathered. It had great fluffy wings that sparked with the rest of it's body. The wolf was graceful,nearly prancing through the air. The beauty flew down to me,flying with little effort. "What may legends have brought me?"She asked,gently nuging me towards a bigger and white tent,lending me in. The crowds gathered,growling and yelling,asking this Softwings why would I still live now? Well That's it for now!^^
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Post subject: Re: Ablivia Posted: Sat May 02, 2009 5:54 pm |
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It's good.
Keep it up. Don't be discouraged by the lack or responses 'cause in my experiences with posting fanfics here not many people will read them and the ones that do won't really post unless it's a popular member's fanfic.
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