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 Post subject: The old and the new art. o:
PostPosted: Wed Apr 22, 2009 6:38 am 
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I just found these older drawings in my gallery and thought I'd compare to newer ones. xD I think I've improved since gettign a tablet and also from the great advice you guys gave me over the months. I'd like to know what you think and what else I can improve on? :B Thanks.

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Wow, you've really improved. I wasn't on the site much before your improvement, so I have't seen your older arts.

I'm not one to talk, but you could probably work more with shadeing on backgrounds. What I mean is on the one with the snowy scene, it kinda looks like the wolves were cut and pasted onto the background. It doesn't really look like they're on it. I'd try making the shading on the ground around their feet darker than the shading where their bodies are because their paws are closer to the ground. Pretty much anywhere the wolf comes closer to the ground the shading should be darker than parts that are further away.

I hope this helps!

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Pikayu wrote:
Wow, you've really improved. I wasn't on the site much before your improvement, so I have't seen your older arts.

I'm not one to talk, but you could probably work more with shadeing on backgrounds. What I mean is on the one with the snowy scene, it kinda looks like the wolves were cut and pasted onto the background. It doesn't really look like they're on it. I'd try making the shading on the ground around their feet darker than the shading where their bodies are because their paws are closer to the ground. Pretty much anywhere the wolf comes closer to the ground the shading should be darker than parts that are further away.

I hope this helps!


Thanks for the advice! n__n I did find that really helpful since I've veen struggling with improving my backgrounds lately. I'll try to make the shadows better next time. :]

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The Chibi one is fine O.O.....I need to start practicing >.>....*points* You! From now on! Will be my Rival!! Muahahahahaha!!!! *runs away* *Voice in the Distance* I will never lose!......

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Star_Fire wrote:
Your wolves are a bit small, try drawing them a bit bigger but other than that they are nice! :shock: 8)


Hehe. That's mostly due to the characters build. Me and Daisy are young so we are small, Deni has a hybrid character so she's smaller too, etc etc. But thanks anyway!

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