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 Post subject: WereWolf; Possible book I'm writing. Would anyone review?
PostPosted: Tue Apr 21, 2009 5:47 pm 
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The United States of America is known widely for it's crime rate. People shot, murdered, missing, all that jazz.

Speaking of Jazz, she's just a normal highschool student that lives in a sucky foster home. But her world turns right around when she's bitten by a stray dog, and undergoes changes...

There's a hidden pack in the mountains, one that's relatively new to the state, of wolves. Interesting, that they would come to this certain state(not yet picked, XP sorry) of all places. But they aren't normal wolves; they're werewolves.

And desperate werewolves, at that, who have lost a pack member. They've chosen Jazz Hayes to become their new packmate, but will she accept? And will she be forced to join them against her own will?

Meanwhile, another werepack in the area is causing up some trouble...

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I'm working my way into it's tenth chapter, here's the story link;

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4934305/1/WereWolf

I guess you could review here, I really would like some advice or even someone to boost my spirits so I could continue writing.

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 Post subject: Re: WereWolf; Possible book I'm writing. Would anyone review?
PostPosted: Fri Apr 24, 2009 1:01 pm 
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hmm sounds good so far but ill have to read some more to critiuque u

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