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Hey Emery,

I have one question on this story. It sounds outright, from what i read, that this is going to be a pretty long story. Is it? I really enjoyed the little bit you gave here to read. It has a subtle deepness that i tend to be drawn to in my reading. By this statment i mean that you're story is holding somehing back from me, the reader, which gives me an incentive to read on. It's not like some of the other, fluffier, stories i read around here, where everything is right out for you to see and understand. I can't wait to read some more. I can't wait to see what the reason is that Julius doesn't want to be so known, and i can't wait to see what kind of trouble he's going to get in on down the road.

Just as a sidenote, i had a story idea like this once with Dakota, but tweaked in such a way that he was going to become a hero. He left to become a hero, and found the love of his life in the wilderness.

Oh well, that's enough for now. I can't wait to hear more. Please post again soon.

Sleazy E

Excelent description. I love it when someone actually takes the time to paint a picture of a scene. Do you have any other fanfics posted somewhere so i can read them while i wait for you to update?

Hey, Thanks for giving me the link to your other story. I read it, but i'm personally not a fan of first-person stories. I did think it was very well written though, so be sure to keep up the good work. Oh, and on a personal note, if you want to read one of my stories it's on this forum. It's titled, "Loves Innocence," It's a bit lengthy, and not finished. I don't mean to advertise on your story-post. I just wanted to be nice and share one of mine for your enjoyment. Okay, see ya later.