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This is a plot and introduction of a story I want to write. But also, I was wondering if you in particular want me to finish it. Hopefully, if I get enough support then I'll post the next part and see how you like that. So, just leave your opinion. If you dislike it, please tell me anything you might want me to fix. So it's all up to you, or at least half up to you. The spots in the introduction that have § sign are things that you could suggest. Like the name for the cat that takes care of the tribe members. Anyways, I hope you enjoy!
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Plot
"A hero will rise and the power of the Tribes will rest in their paws. And then Sunrise will become Sunset. "
The words from the ancient cats have troubled the five cat tribes for seven moons until Bluemoon was born to the Tribe of the Woodland. After a mysterious event at Silverspring's Waterfall, Bluemoon awakens in a strange place far from home. The prophecy laid down by the ancient cats before Bluemoon's birth is spoken to her for the first time. Meanwhile, a cat named Tallreed, has taken over the tribes. With the help of her new companion, Konan, she must find her way back to the tribe's before its too late.
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Introduction of the Story
A cool breeze of the night lay upon the cats of the Tribe of the Woodland as they slept among the trees. Few noise was made except from a hollow under an oak tree. The only opening was slightly big enough for a cat to squeeze through, and was the best place for the nursing kits and she cats who where expecting a litter. The § cat, named Wetleaf, that took the care of all the tribe members was helping a she cat named Sandtrail give birth to her first litter. "It's all right Sandtrail," Wetleaf whispered as she picked up the only surviving kit of the litter and placed it down beside Sandtrail. "She was the only to survive, what shall you name her?" it was Wetleaf's job to report the new name of a tribe member to the leader cat. Sandtrail looked down at the she kit, then looked up at the moon. A cloud passed over it, making it shine blue. "Bluemoon" Sandtrail lead the kit towards her stomach with her tail. "Very well." Wetleaf said as she stepped out of the hollow. "She is the one..." She murmured to herself.
When Bluemoon was four moons old, she had to pass the inspection from the leader cat. The leader cat's name was Clifftop and he had to make sure Bluemoon was a healthy member of the tribe.
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The names of the cats are based on what the mother sees after her kit's birth
So does anyone like it so far? Please comment!
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