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Post subject: The Forbidden Love~NarniaFreak91 and Me  Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2009 8:56 am |
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Plot:Scar is still living after the fall of the cliff, and the attack of the hyenas. After Simba found this out, he banished Scar into the Outlands. Scar and Zira mated, having a male cub named Riddick. Riddick lived in the Outlands, being taught hatred, and fighting. Riddick and Kiara are teenagers now, and one day, Riddick finds Kiara, and immediatly falls in love with her. Since Riddick is the son of Scar, he won't accept him loving Kiara, so he doesn't let Kiara out of his sight. Will Riddick and Kiara ever get to be together? Will Simba ever accept? Characters:Riddick~NF91 Kiara~Me Simba~Me Vitani~NF91 Nala~Me Nuka~NF91 Zira~Me Scar~MF91 My Bios:Name:Kiara Age: Around 3 Gender: Female Picture:  Name:Simba Age:7 Gender:Male Picture: Name:Nala Age:7 Gender:Female Picture: Name:Zira Age:8 Gender:Female Picture: 
Last edited by Angelic Wolf on Fri Mar 20, 2009 9:22 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Post subject: Re: The Forbidden Love~NarniaFreak91 and Me Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2009 9:20 am |
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Give me a minute, and I'll start, unless you want to start since Riddick's the main character?
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Post subject: Re: The Forbidden Love~NarniaFreak91 and Me Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2009 9:27 am |
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Kiara was walking the waterhole that sat in the middle of the pridelands. To the east, she could see the shadowy place called the Outlands. Any traitor or banished lion was to go there. Kiara kinda thought of it as jail. She carried on, walking beside the waterhole, until she saw a herd of Antelope galloping across the vally. 'This is a great time to hunt!' She thought, then went sprinting after the hooved creatures. She saw a sick adult behind the herd, and decided to go for that one. She kept chasing it, until she was about five feet from it, then she pounced, but missed. She fell face first to the dusty ground, and sighed. "Ugh!" She grunted, then headed for pride rock.
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Post subject: Re: The Forbidden Love~NarniaFreak91 and Me Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2009 9:35 am |
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Far away from the Pride Lands, there were the Outlands. A brown lion, with a black mane and evil green eyes, was standing on a rock and watching towards the Pride Rock, with a bitter look on his face. This lion was Scar, the lion who once killed the great King Mufasa, and got banished by Mufasa's son, Simba, who was now the king of Pride Lands.
Scar growled quietly, without opening his mouth, and he held a great grudge to Simba, since he had ruined his plans for becoming the king. Scar knew, however, that if he'd show himself anywhere near the Pride Lands, he would get killed. And this fact made him even more furious.
"One day.." he growled, "One day I WILL get my revenge!".
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Post subject: Re: The Forbidden Love~NarniaFreak91 and Me Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2009 9:54 am |
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Ooc: Sorry for posting soo late. My internet is acting a bit slow.
Bic: Simba was gently watching the pridelands while sitting on Pride Rock, with his head held high, tail flickering, and mane swinging with the wind, he sighed. A gust of wind that carried leaves and pollen came across his back, and wrapped around his neck. A patch of clouds above opended, shining the sun on him. This was the great Mufasa, watching over his son. Simba let out a great sigh, then noticed Kiara heading home. "Where have you been?" He asked from across the valley.
"J-Just hunting!" She yelled back to Simba.
"Ok, well come on.." He said.
Zira woke up from their den made of a termite bed. She yawned, then noticed Scar was out. She went outside, and saw a beetle crawling beside her clawed paws. She smacked the bug with her claw, picked it up with one of her long claws, and ate it. She walked on throughout the dry land, searching for her mate, when she saw him on the edge of the land watching the Pridelands. "What are you doing!?" She asked, concerned
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Post subject: Re: The Forbidden Love~NarniaFreak91 and Me Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2009 10:20 am |
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It's okay, I'm a little late aswell x).
Bic:
Scarr turned his head as he herd Zira's voice, and looked at her.
"Just watching over Pride Lands...Which COULD have been mine, if it wasn't for Simba" he replied, the turned his back towards Pride Rock. Scar growled, as he remembered the day Simba banished him, and when he nearly got killed by the hyenas. But then he got a calm look on his face, and turned back to Zira.
"But don't worry, my dear. I'll make sure Simba will pay for everything we've had suffer because of him" he said to her, as an evil grin turned on his face.
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Post subject: Re: The Forbidden Love~NarniaFreak91 and Me Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2009 10:26 am |
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"Yes! We'll kill him and his precious daughter, and take over their precious land, and make the rest live here!" She said, he voice sounding almost as a hiss. She looked at Scar and made an evil grin just like he did. She turned around, flickered her long, tan tail, and went to Riddick. He was sleeping in the den. "Wake up!" She yelled at him.
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Post subject: Re: The Forbidden Love~NarniaFreak91 and Me Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2009 10:33 am |
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Riddick opened his eyes, as he heard his mother yelling.
He was still a young cub, but his mane had already started to grow. Riddick got up, streched his legs and yawned.
"Huh..? What's wrong, mom?" he mumbled, sounding pretty tired. He wasn't too happy with his mother waking him up, but he decided not to show it.
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Post subject: Re: The Forbidden Love~NarniaFreak91 and Me Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2009 10:37 am |
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"I've got a job for you. If you love me, you'll go into the Pridelands, act like a loner, go to Pride Rock, let Simba into his pride, and when the time comes...KILL HIM!!" She yelled to the top of her lungs, then chuckled joyfully to herself. She then looked at Riddick, and waited for an answer. "Well!?" She demanded.
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Post subject: Re: The Forbidden Love~NarniaFreak91 and Me Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2009 10:41 am |
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Riddick looked at his mother, with a bit surprised look on his face.
"Mom..Don't you think I'm too young to kill Simba?" he then asked, pinning his ears down. He loved his mother, and his father too, but unlike them, he had a kind, and gentle nature. Maybe he inherited that from his uncle, Mufasa.
"I mean..you haven't even trained me for anything like that yet" Riddick continued, but looked at his mother with a respective look on his face.
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Post subject: Re: The Forbidden Love~NarniaFreak91 and Me Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2009 10:47 am |
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"Well, you father will train you. He's got the skill..." She said. "SCAR!!!" She yelled for him.
Simba was watching his daughter walk into their den when he heard Zira scream. "What's that all about?" He said out loud. He craned his neck to see if he could see over the cliff, and at the forbidden land. "Nala!" He called.
Nala was sleeping in the cave when she faintly heard Simba call her. "Hmm? What?" She asked
"Come here." He said.
"Ok." Nala yawned, then got up, and walked to Simba's side.
"Zira was screaming." He growled.
"I wonder why?" She said, then looked at the Outlands
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Post subject: Re: The Forbidden Love~NarniaFreak91 and Me Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2009 10:51 am |
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Scar walked over to the den, where Zira and Riddick were.
"What's going on in here?" he asked, looking at both his mate and his yougest son.
"Well, mom wants you to train me for...killing Simba" Ridddick replied with a bit of shy sound in his voice, looking at his father with a respective look in his eyes.
"Really?" Scar asked, then looked at Zira with an evil grin. Then he turned back to Riddick.
"Son...Let's go for a little walk. I have something to tell you" he said to Riddick, with a smile.
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It's fine. I edited the post after I saw you fixed it.