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would you red this?! anyway the storys about steeles son who has learnt to hate wolf dogs but goes to nome and falls in love with saba but has a hard time telling her his background all the while Balto is trying to work out where he has seen fang befre (in steele)

First bit (all ive written)

Balto walked carefully towards the shed.He stuck his head in "Jenna?" but the dog he saw was not jenna.It was a young black and white dog.The dog jumped and seemed to notice balto for the first time.He snarled as balto came closer.
"who may I ask are you?" he was tensing up ready to fight
"I am balto ,and you?"
"Fang" he answered bluntly.
"welcome to Nome" balto said cheerily "how long have you been here?"
"long enough half breed" he snarled
"oh well, if you feel that way" balto turned to leave But then heard fang mutter "sorry, Its just..." the last part of fangs sentence was lost as loud barks rose from outside."sorry got to go" balto said over his shoulder as he ran outside.
"why did it have to be me dad?" muttered fang to him self

2 years earlier
"gypsy" Steele ran panting into the hut, The beautiful grey and white malamute laughed she was nursing 5 small puppies
"there you are outcast" she smiled affectionatley at her mate "youre always the last dog to know about every thing" Steele smiled but stayed on the door step.Gypsy rolled her eye "come in, they wont eat you" she laughed.Steele stepped into the small out house,two of the small bundles looked just like their mother in every way another two had her markings but Steeles colours but the last one was very differrent from his siblings.He had most of steeles markings steeles coulors and one tooth that stook out
"fang" whispered steele and gypsy agreed

Thanks

yes I know this which is why I might change it to saba sorry I forgot to put this in name changed