Ok well basically I created this topic to upload my short stories and poems. And maybe if I figure out our new scanner I might and some hand drawn pictures. I will put a description of why I wrote the story right before the title. Any and all comments are appreciated.
#1Ok right before Christmas break this year, my Basic Skills/English teacher gave our 7th hour an assignment. First we wrote down a Name, place, item, and a random item. Then we each got someone else’s card. We just didn't know whose. The Card I got had this written on it. (I had to put all of these things into my story)
Phillip Joey Bobman
Rainbow Land
Camera
A Rat named Pancake
This was the story I wrote. I actually made one of my classmates cry at the end and one of my friends from that class hasn't let me live it down.
Christmas Miracles The soft pitter patter of rain filled the air of Rainbow Land. Only one other sound was heard in the graceful land. It was the tapping of shoes as a single figure walked in the rain. The young man was wearing buckled black boots with ragged blue jeans. His white button-up shirt looked baggy on him. But around his shoulders and down to his ankles he had a black trench coat on, its leather shined from the light that hit its leather surface. On his shoulder was a rat, his fur was a pearly white with a golden brown circle over his right eye. The rat scampered from shoulder to shoulder.
" Phillip. Phillip Joey Bobman. At one point that name meant everything to me. But now......I can only wish to live up to it." Philip whispered to both the rat and the rainy night. “What will I do Pancake? What will I say? And will they except me after what I have done?." Phillip told the rat, who he had named Pancake. AS if he was expecting an answer from the rat, Phillip sighed in defeat. Now, as he stood in front of a house, his eye's drifted to the mail box. Phillip could still read what the faded black letters read. It read, Bobman.
He rang the door bell. And before a minute had passed, arm's hugged his legs. It was the twin's, Martin and Sara. He placed his hands on their heads as they walked into the house.
With the flash of a camera Phillip was home. With the flash of a camera a precious moment in time was saved forever on that Christmas night.
*One Year Later*
*Christmas Eve* Phillip lay on his bed. His head resting ageist a soft feather pillow. A slight smile crossed his face. And his green eyes were shinning with memory like a river rippling in the moonlight night. Phillip was gazing at three things on a shelf.
The first was an expertly hand drawn picture of Pancake. The seconded was a stone jar with the picture of a rat engraved on the front. Inside were the ashes of the beloved rat Pancake. Pancake had died a few days after Phillip had arrives home, the cause was unknown. And the third and last object was the picture taken by the family’s camera the day Phillip arrived home. Phillip felt a tear run down his cheek. Never before had he cried, but perhaps he could shed a tear for the rat who gave Phillip back his life. It reminded Phillip of something that Christmas Eve.
It reminded Phillip
That miracles are real.
That miracles come in the most,
Unusual forms.
And those miracles often come
In small packages.
Even in that of a rat.
A Rat named Pancake.
The End #2 This one is a poem I wrote a few days ago for English. I'm pretty sure I'm the only kid in my grade to write a serious poem. Here it is.
The Beast Dark black shadows across the land,
A rumble, a roar, they both pierce your ears.
I know my way across this rugged land, so just take my hand.
The moon is hidden, and yet you shed no tears.
My soft voice tells you it's alright,
And yet you shiver in fear of the beast.
Don't cry he will not hurt you tonight.
For tonight you will live, he shall not feast.
As you gaze into his emerald eye,
Something changes, deep in your heart.
A feeling has come, so in joy you cry.
The Dragon has welcomed you, and you shall not part.
End #3 This was just a doodle in class and it turned into something awsome ( as far as my stuff goes anyway ^^ ). Then I desided that this would be Pyro a charator in
DinoWars 2: Island of Begining with Godzillawolf. I added the explosen in the back ground because I needed some type of fire. By the way this is the first hand drawn pic I have gotten up onto the computer ^^...and I know you can't see his eyes but thats just the way the hair fell on his face from the angle I was dawing from.
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