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How would you rate my anatomy out of 10?
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 Post subject: Balto pic!! please rate my anatomy skills!
PostPosted: Mon Mar 02, 2009 12:17 pm 
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Yesh i've been practicing my anatomy skills and it turned out o.k. I would like you to rate it,tell me what i could imporve on and what you think looks good. ^^ thanks. This took me about 25 mins in total ;)

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 02, 2009 2:25 pm 
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6/10

Dosen't look alot like Balto but it is alot better than my Blato drawings.

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The colors are right,but they need to be a bit darker,and you need to make the chest area,a bit more puffier.

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It's not horrible, but it's not amazing. The biggest thing I saw that just "leapt out at me" was his head looks too big. The rest, however, I agree with DarkCloud. All you need is practice, though. Use references to real wolves/dogs and such to help you with your anatomy.

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It's not so bad :] I like the frontal paws but the legs are too much thin, the body is big and you shoud do the legs proprtionated(sp?) at the body. The mouth and the muzzle are ok but the eyes aren't two mad eyes, they have a normal expression, you should add them an angry expression. The back legs have a good lenght but are too thin and the paws are too small.

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Also, the mouth is a little....odd. You showed too much of the gums (it shouldn't go all the way around the mouth) and, if you look past the teeth, you see open air.

agree with this, when a wolf snarl, you see only the top gums and not everyone in the mouth.

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 03, 2009 1:04 pm 
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eeewww man i see what you guys mean >.< the mouth looks horrible! But i have nothing to do tommorrow so will draw another wolf growling using all your fab tips. thanks ;)

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diego_rules wrote:
eeewww man i see what you guys mean >.< the mouth looks horrible! But i have nothing to do tommorrow so will draw another wolf growling using all your fab tips. thanks ;)

can't wait to see the new result! :]


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