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I've been critiquing others arts for a while now and I want some critiques (but not flames) too. Here's one of my newest pictures with a background, until my dad gets Photoshop reinstalled.

http://baltosource.timduru.org/art/Pika ... display=18

Sorry I can't put it as a file, my dad had to unplug my book (it stores documents) from the comp.

OKAY! So please tell me what you think of her & The picture, I know there are mistakes so let me know ^^

That's way better than I could draw! If I were to rate it, I'd give it a 9.9/10. The Sun, the grass, and the clouds are very nicely detailed also!

Oh, wow! This is a brilliant picture! I love the perspective! The clouds just to left/behind her head look so perfect and realistic! I like how you used the lens flare effect for the sun! It makes it look as if it were a photo or something. And I love the expression! It matches how the ears and tail is set. I love it. Great job! Sorry I can't give critique, it's too perfect!

What a great picture. I think it's fantastic!

I don't really know where I should crit', except the anatomy could be improved a little. Mostly just with the shoulders and neck, you'll want to make the shoulders more...visible is the only way I can desbribe it. xD I think you're really good, can't wait to see more from you.

Thank you everyone ^^




Okay, I'll mess around with the shoulders next time I make one like this. I'm horrible at making them face the veiwer, but I'll learn. Thanks for the crit ^^