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 Post subject: Losing control. -Closed, no spots left-
PostPosted: Sat Feb 21, 2009 5:08 am 
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Stark. He is a creature, but he doesn't know what. He doesn't know if there are others like him. He doesn't know how he got to be this way. He just knows he is. He was once human, but now, he is human no more, but instead he is this... thing. This terrible creature. And he can never go back to being human, for he hides a terrible thing that is designed to kill out the human race.


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Stark used to be a human, but now he is a creature. He just woke up one day as this creature, on an island in the middle of nowhere. For days he sat, longing to speak to anyone, anything - longing to go back to the humans, to be a human. But he could not speak to humans, even if he found any, for he could only speak through thoughts. One day, on the beach of his island, he sees what he longed for, wished for, hoped for for so long. a ship. He swam there, but when he got near the humans he lost control. Suddenly his canines became longer, and his blue eyes turned red. Then everything went black. when he woke up, Stark saw what he had done. He had killed the humans. He had lost control.

After a long time of being on his island, he finally meets another creature like him, but she is different, she has wings, She is white and her tail is a different. she seems happy, but she also hides a deep secret, much like his, but different. She has no memory of ever being human, even though she once was.

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Stark - Me
Other Creature - Fantasy (Alice)


Name: Stark
Gender: Male
Appearance: See pic.
History: Was once a human, but now is suddenly a creature. has always been stuck on his island. He discovered his terrible secret a while back, a few months ago.
Personality: Seems serious all the times, shifty, and always hiding his emotions. He always seems sad and angry at the same time, and almost never smiles.
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 Post subject: Re: Losing control. -Open, one spot-
PostPosted: Sat Feb 21, 2009 10:59 am 
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I'll be the other creature

Name:Alice
Gender:female
Appearance[/b:]Alice is more of a wolf leopard mix,her fur is white as snow and has purple eyes,her tail is like a leopards but at the end would be a fire(like Charzard from pokemon) that changes color depending on her mood,flufffy wings!
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She doesn't know anything about her past but was once human.She woke up finding herself as a creature and figured she was all along but couldn't believe herself.
Personality:very smart,witty,lovable,cheerful,can get along with anyone
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Extra/other:Her mood colors are orange is happy,blue is sad,red is mad,purple is embaressed,pink is love


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Alice swiftly flew through the skies of a small island,it's breeze helping her glide more easily.She started to lower to the ground,carefully she planted her paws on the island's surface and tucked her wings beside her.The fire that floated above her tail was orange like normal,her tail swung around touching plants and anything flamable though it didn't burn anything.


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Stark stared blankly out to sea, just like every other day in his creature life. It was different when he was human, oh so different. With a sigh full of Sorrow he went to turn away, when he suddenly heard a familiar sound. It sounded like footsteps, but his feet were still. He stared doubtfully around, before seeing a distance away a creature like him. He was frozen in place, she was the same, yet different, she had wings, a flame on her tail, and she was the purest white he had ever seen. He could only stand, seemingly frozen to the spot, wondering if he had finally gone crazy.


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Alice felt like someone was watching her,she turned quickly not believe someone would be here.She was facing towards another creature like herself but different,no wings or a flame on his tail.Alice could only gasp at him,just not believe for the second. "Hello"She mange to yell at him qith a soft voice.


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Feeling as if he was in a trance, Stark walked up to the creature slowly. Once he got there he managed to say "Hello" softly, but his was still in disbelief that after all this time...... He was no longer alone on this world, as he thought he was, no longer stuck on this horrid island alone forever.


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Alice let her feathers on her wings ruffle up as she felt a chill,not good or bad just feeling so releved for meeting someone a bit like her. "Hi,I'm Alice,and you?"She asked,wanting to get to know him.


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"My name is Stark" He said. He was silent for a while, before he asked sadly "Alice.... Do you miss being human too?"
He had just supposed that she had once been human, not once thinking she might not have been. He was once human, surely she would have once been too? Maybe she had been something other than a human though... before she was this... thing that they were. He doubted it, but maybe these creatures they were were actually a species, and they were magical.... or something. Stark was very confused about how he had became what he was.


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"Human?"Alice asked looking away "I don't know,I don't remeber what happen before I awoke here"She said to him "I feeel I was but I don't know"Alice almost brought her voice to a whisper.The bright orange fire that floated around suddenly turned a sad blue.Her tail's fire turned smaller.


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Stark saw the flame on her tail turn blue, and go smaller, and he was entranced by it. He watched her tail, but it didn't change again. He heard what she said, and felt that he had bought up a bad subject. He tried to think of something other than that to say, but there was nothing, except for his terrible secret.... So he said the only other thing he could think of to say. "Urr... So, Have you seen others like us, when you flew around?" He asked, at the same moment hearing something rustling in the bushes beside him.


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Alice shook her head "never have but you"she said


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Stark shivered as night started to swallow the sun, making it cold. A breeze ruffled through his fur, and he looked around for shelter. As usual, the woods were the only shelter. But Stark knew the island very well. "Come on" He said to Alice, walking into the woods. When he finally arrived at the middle, they were near a lake, and Stark lay down under a bush. There wasn't much warmth, but it was better than nothing.


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Alice followed,seeing him cold like that made her sigh.SHe laid down somewhere else,she lifted open one wing "You know,my wing is a bit more warmer then a bush"She said to him.


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Stark was so used to being alone, and he only had just met Alice, so the thought of lying next to her, although appealing, was also strange to him. "I'll be fine" He mumbled resting his head on his sharp claws, trying not to look cold. But as soon as he closed his eyes, he had a dream...

Stark was standing on the deck of a ship, when suddenly he lunged. The warm taste of blood hit his mouth, and after that, he only caught flashes of what was happening. There was screaming, moaning, shooting..... then... nothing. When Stark next saw things, the humans were lying around him, in a pool of blood.

Stak woke up suddenly, sweat pouring all over him. He gasped with each breath, as if he had run a marathon. It was halfway through the night now, but he felt even more tired than before now.


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