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Keilidh · **Posted:** Fri Feb 20, 2009 4:40 pm

I really do prefer this style to the old one. :] It's more...anatomically correct. (I probably for that word wrong.) You should work with it.

Pikayu · **Posted:** Fri Feb 20, 2009 10:23 pm

Cute ^^
I agree with Keilidh you should keep working with it, there's some great potential there.
Let's see... Work with the paws some, move the toe lines a little more away from the veiwer, it should help them look a little more rounded as opposed to looking flat. Also on the first pic work with the fuzzy parts a little more. You did well on the male dog, but on the female the fur around her chest looks a bit... clumpy.

Over all it's not bad, study some anatomy books and make some sketches from real photos for practice. Good Luck ^^

VividEnigma · **Posted:** Sat Feb 21, 2009 3:18 am

Your old style was great, but this one was even better. I love it. Any critique has already been said by Pikayu. I like how it has that 'coloured' outline. Mine just plain black. N omatter, what you do with your art, it's always original =) That's a good thing.

Pikayu · **Posted:** Sat Feb 21, 2009 11:34 am

luckyshamrock wrote:

Pikayu wrote:

Cute ^^
I agree with Keilidh you should keep working with it, there's some great potential there.
Let's see... Work with the paws some, move the toe lines a little more away from the veiwer, it should help them look a little more rounded as opposed to looking flat. Also on the first pic work with the fuzzy parts a little more. You did well on the male dog, but on the female the fur around her chest looks a bit... clumpy.

Over all it's not bad, study some anatomy books and make some sketches from real photos for practice. Good Luck ^^

thankyou so much for this critque! i know the paws need huge work and can never figure out how to place the line so thanks for the tip!

and looking at the female -yes she does need better fur! it looks like she has matted fur - which isnt good

my traditional pics are much better then my dgital ones - they are drawn by hand and its the darn mouse that is the key to a successful drawing! ( my mouse is bad lol)

thankyou everyone else for the kind critique - its hard to be kind yet constructive and i think you all did well!

You're welcome, they are very good for using a mouse. I can't line with a mouse to save my life. I usually used the pen tool in Photoshop or my tablet.

Dani · **Posted:** Fri Mar 06, 2009 6:49 am

Awww Angie and Elix. Cute new style.

PinkCandy · **Joined:** Sun Jan 11, 2009 5:43 am **Posts:** 105

awomee stylee i love it so cute

renard trash usa · **Joined:** Sat Mar 14, 2009 4:55 am **Posts:** 27

it's very cute: the color are soft and the line are made well.
But Tries to make more details and to work more the shadows:It will look of the volume to your drawing

Phoebewoof · **Posted:** Sat Mar 14, 2009 9:24 am

Wow your art is so cool !

Angelic Wolf · **Posted:** Sun Mar 22, 2009 8:41 am

I have always loved your artwork! It's a very unique style, and to do it on MS Paint is even better! It takes me a whole day ot draw a dog on MS Paint. I love the collie! I would give the new style a 9/10

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