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What do you think of this pic? It took me about twenty mins. Basically Bambam is fed up and she always goes and lays on this tree when she is fed up. ^^ Please rate it.

Ni-iceee !

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thanks

agreed i hate those smudy bits >.< and yeah my anatomy isn't perfect but i am working on that

seriously you are jealous of my drawings?! wow!

same! il ove your art tis so cute and your anatomy is really good (much better than mine!)

I voted 8/10

The drawing is good in my opinion, I love the way you draw eyes! I'm never satisfied with my eyes xD the tail is also good, not much long and a bit fluffy, as wolves' tail but the only thing I say is that the frontal part of body is bigger than the back's part.

First off the positives: I LOVE how you made the eye, it's so pretty! The tree and tail look pretty good too. I also like her face.

As for critiques: It doesn't really look like she's sitting on the branch because of the way her rear end is lifted off it. Also because her front paws look like they're resting in midair instead of on the branch. Try lowering her rear so that her stomach is against the branch and put some shading right around where she touches the branch.
It also looks like her other back leg is missing, maybe try adding it in as a paw sticking out in the area where the branch first comes up. Lowering her rear like I mentioned before might also help this.
As others have mentioned the blurs don't look right.

Other wise, great job! Keep working on it and you'll improve a lot ^^

I really love the colors! I like your drawing style too.

Nice work, but what about shading it?

It's nicely drawn,but as GSD pointed out,it could use some shading.

yeah agree with you on that one but i will draw another pic later i'm on my lap top at the moment