Rate my new pic!

Rina_Wildthing(BB) · **Posted:** Wed Feb 18, 2009 11:40 am

Hey! Will you rate on a scale of 1-10 my pic of Jenny and Dahn (dan)

Pleasy! 1 being lowest (sucks) and 10 being amazing!

Rating:
1> Terrible
2> really bad
3> Bad
4>Kinda bad
5> Ok

6> kinda good
7> good
8>really good
9>Great
10>Amzaingness*10

Pic >>>>

Dee · **Posted:** Wed Feb 18, 2009 11:49 am

its really good just one thing. i think it would be better if you like added lines where her teeth are?

Rina_Wildthing(BB) · **Posted:** Wed Feb 18, 2009 11:54 am

[I tried that and It makes it look horrible]

Thanks diego!:)

Dee · **Posted:** Wed Feb 18, 2009 11:59 am

okie pokie

i love the way you drew the dalmation its adorable <3

Rina_Wildthing(BB) · **Posted:** Wed Feb 18, 2009 12:50 pm

Thankyou very very much!

I am making a fanfic about Jenny

hope it comes out good =B

Wolf Girl. · **Posted:** Thu Feb 19, 2009 11:29 am

It is absolutely adorable. I give it a ten! You are really approving.

Rina_Wildthing(BB) · **Posted:** Thu Feb 19, 2009 4:12 pm

Thanks!:D

Wolf Girl. · **Posted:** Fri Feb 20, 2009 9:23 am

You are very welcome

Keilidh · **Posted:** Fri Feb 20, 2009 2:44 pm

It's good, I give it a six. I think you need to go read up on canine anatomy though, and make the muzzles longer. Other than that I do see potential, your style is cute too. Keep it up and I'm sure you'll go far!

WWM · **Posted:** Fri Feb 20, 2009 5:43 pm

I gave it a 6. They would look cute as puppies, but I was under the impression that they were adults, in which case longer muzzles and slightly smaller eyes might be more apropriate. ;]

Two things that need work:
-Cleaning up your picture. If you get rid of the white dots scattered throughout, it would look much cleaner and more proffesional.
-Ear anatomy. When you directly connect the top of the ears of a pointy-eared dog with their neck it makes the whole head appear 'inflated' and unnatural. (I'd know from experience...>.>)My suggestion would be to draw the head first(not connecting the ears) and then draw the ears. There should be a very small 'v' line between the top of the dog's head and the bottom of the ear when you do it correctly, giving them a more natural appearence.

Otherwise, your style is very cute and unique, and I suggest you stick with it! ^^

Rina_Wildthing(BB) · **Posted:** Fri Feb 20, 2009 9:29 pm

Thanks for the coments! I will try to make it look more dog like soon
they re only 1 2/3 old in this pic

Jadewolf · **Joined:** Sun Nov 05, 2006 11:35 am **Posts:** 115

eh..its not bad lol I would make their snouts longer though

Pikayu · **Posted:** Fri Feb 20, 2009 9:56 pm

First of all really cute style!
The only thing that kinda bugs me is (like everyone said their muzzles should probably be longer if they're adults) and I think you should learn about canine anatomy and give some new poses a try. They seem to all have basicly the same pose.
I'd give it a 6

Keep working on them and you'll do very well!

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