A Poem about Dusty meeting Aleu

Gold Wolf · **Posted:** Thu Jan 29, 2009 3:50 pm

Another short but very different poem.

Kodi:"Dusty,are you at home"?

Dusty:"Yes Kodi,I am,why"?

Kodi:*Steps to one side*,"I wanted you to meet my sister Aleu".

Dusty:"Kodi?,don't you remember?".........."Aleu,and I have met before".

Kodi:*Blushes*

Aleu:*Chuckles*"Yes Brother dear,we have".

Jake Razor · **Posted:** Sat Jan 31, 2009 10:31 pm

It could use some context. How have they met and where? And no offense, Aleu saying "Brother dear" doesn't sound like the way she talked in the movie.
But the questions it raises have potential, and I'm interested to find out the answers.

Conay · **Posted:** Thu Feb 19, 2009 7:50 am

Might I ask, how is this a poem?

sunkissin · **Posted:** Thu Feb 19, 2009 11:56 am

I agree with what Conay said.

This just sounds like something you wrote in a few seconds.

Conay · **Posted:** Fri Feb 20, 2009 5:46 pm

Rebel™ wrote:

I agree with what Conay said.

This just sounds like something you wrote in a few seconds.

I know, not alot of effort placed into it.

Jake Razor · **Posted:** Sun Feb 22, 2009 6:18 pm

Do you plan to write an actual story about this? If so, I'd like to read it.

Lone Wolf_fanwriter · **Posted:** Mon Feb 23, 2009 12:39 am

Again, I have to say that you should try writing a longer poem.
Also, I agree with Dragon Tamer: You might consider writing a story around this. It could be interesting.

Cheers.

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A Poem about Dusty meeting Aleu