Muru's Fatal Demise while meeting Aleu again

Gold Wolf · **Posted:** Thu Jan 29, 2009 8:06 am

If you're a fan of Muru,please by all means,don't read this.

A very short poem about Aleu meeting Muru again.

Aleu:"Hello,Muru.....are you in your cave?"

Muru:"Yes,I am".

Aleu:"It's a real pleasure to see you again"

Muru:"Really?,it's really nice that you came back to visit me".

Aleu:"Yes......so it is!"*Chomp*

Opinions please?

Lone Wolf_fanwriter · **Posted:** Thu Jan 29, 2009 3:05 pm

Personally, I think you could have found something else to write about, but I won't label this poem "too violent for display."
I will say that I think you ought to write about something else and perhaps take a bit more time writing it, but that's only my opinion.

[email protected] · **Joined:** Thu Feb 14, 2008 7:21 pm **Posts:** 35

Actually, I think it's kind of funny. :lol:

SkulShurtugalTCG · **Posted:** Thu Jan 29, 2009 9:12 pm

Pretty funny, but it really belongs in the "Balto 2: Things You Didn't See In The Film" thread.

Gold Wolf · **Posted:** Fri Jan 30, 2009 5:35 am

Well,that was my intention about the poem,but then again,maybe Lone Wolf,and Skulblaka have a point.

Aleu:"Mmmmm,Tas......."

Muru:*Slides towards the side of Aleu's mouth*"Phew,free at last,nice try Aleu.......Bye!"

The End.

Tricky Title,huh?

Conay · **Posted:** Sat Feb 21, 2009 2:44 pm

Well... Like your other Poem, seems like you wrote it within 5 minutes...

Lone Wolf_fanwriter · **Posted:** Mon Feb 23, 2009 12:35 am

Hmm... I tend to agree with you, Conay.
Foxy Aleu (Foxy_Jenna), I have to ask that you put a bit more time and effort into your poems.
I'm not trying to crush your creativity, but I'm sorry to say that right now these messages are teetering on the edge of being spam.
If you have any questions or concerns, let me know.

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