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My note= So, this is basicly the introduction of this, "Fanfic" it's Pokemon, but more relistic, I need ya'll to help me! If you Know a GOOD Pokemon site, that let's you make an acount and Upload your fanfiction, please give me a link! If you were to copy this, I guess it wouldn't be very good, so please don't. I spent about 37 minutes writting and correcting every thing I could, I am finally finishing English (learning) so this helps me. Again, you know a Pokemon site that let's you Upload your fanfics, please tell.
I need to know if people acually are intrested in this, a simply "Yes" or "No" Would be nice,that's all I need to know about my fanfic. If not many people say yes or comment on this, I will not write the rest.
So far ...The main charter is a Red Ringed Umbreon, so he's not on the name deal yet, only if we get to the Big chapters.
Introduction~
The night was shown in to many eyes as a burden, not being able to play games, talk to friends, need to rest, well…they clearly haven’t seen the night so beautiful like this now.
The Red Ringed Umbreon ran threw the night swiftly, threw the forest. Moving right to get out of the way of a tree, and sliding low to the ground, under a log. To not get hurt, of course. “Hm?” Umbreon thought as a strange, small sound was heard by him. It sounded like something or someone was flying? Umbreon ’s rings glowed brighter and then he stopped and jumped back, and in a few seconds, the spot he would have been if he didn’t had jumped back was covered by fire. Umbreon looked up and started to run back, as two huge boulders nearly crushed him. Bang! Bang! Shots were heard behind the Umbreon. And Human’s voices, most likely hunting. Well, this Umbreon didn’t plan to get shot, on this beautiful night. When the moon fully shinned down on Earth. Not tonight.
Umbreon jumped down to a log and ran on it; guns shot were still being fired. But Umbreon still ran. The fog was rather thick now. Umbreon couldn’t see too well. Umbreon (While still running) looked to the left, and then to the right. He couldn’t see a path? Should I stop? The Umbreon thought. Bang! ‘Nope.’ Umbreon thought again as his barley missed being shot by a gun.
Umbreon kept running, until, he could not feel the ground beneath him, and he fell down that cliff. And he never really had any feeling after that.
‘Huh? Where am I?’ I thought. I felt so much pain, had I fell right off the edge of the Earth and down to wherever? I slowly opened my eyes…my god, so much fog. It covered the pretty moon which I admired. I felt pain in my paws…’Come on, get up.’ I thought. I slowly rose to my feet, and the pain was too much and I fell back down. ‘Maybe I should rest more…’ I mummer, my voice to weak to speak louder. I looked around…by the looks of it, it seemed I had fallen off a cliff! Fire? No, I said as I squinted my eyes to try and see more clearly the lamps? I think that’s what the humans called them. I stood up, my legs managing not to give up on me and let me fall down. I looked forward; there was a small path that curved around the valley…should I take it? I would rather not visit the humans. So I had no other choice it seemed, I slowly made my way down the path, I felt something gently brush against my paw, I looked down. It was a rapper, Human’s trash. I shook my head and continued on my way. I felt something burning cold on my pelt, I already knew it was snowing; I need not to look up. I didn’t plan to die here, and I would try not too.
I felt water on me? No… my blood. I kept my head down as I looked at the snow below me, and not forward. Was I looking for traps? I wasn’t. I just needed to see something new, I rarely get to see the beautiful snow, why not enjoy it while I can? While I still live? I really shouldn’t think things like that; I thought as I lifted my head to look at the path before me, by the looks of it, it would be a long journey. I would take the chances of my death, I liked to Travel, even my Dad, he liked to travel, because of that- I rarely got to see him. But here now in the present, I don’t have a family, so it doesn’t really matter.
‘Did it really ever mattered?’ A voice in my head asks me, and I simply replied, murmuring it out, ‘Not really; never cared enough for it to matter.’
After a while after walking down the path, I saw what looked like a Human house, but unlike the ones I usually saw in Urban places; it was smaller, and it seemed so broken down. ‘What could be the harm in a little peek?’ I thought. ‘Isn’t that how one of your friends died? A … ‘Little peek?’ The voice mocked me, this time, I had no comeback, or reply for that.
I looked at the little house again, grayish, small windows, the “Glass” was all gone, there was no door. And, there were items in the house, but not a lot. It was clear-This area was not very populated by humans, but about animals, I don’t know, when was the last time you saw a Cat using a door to get in a house? I’ve never seen one. I doubt anyone else has.
I walked in, threw that little door, moonlight shinned threw the cracks of that little house I entered. Cobwebs-I doubt those little Blood Sucking Spiders ever caught a meal in this little house; I looked around, there was a bed, some blankets- I guessed that they were torn? I jumped up, landing with a soft ‘Thump’ on the “Bed” Well, I had been wrong, a small blanket was not torn, and a red, very small Blanket. (Bandanna) I laid down on the bed rolling on it. Next thing I knew, that little Red Blanket was around my neck. (I personally thought it looked cool.) I looked around one more time, there was not much I could gain, or obtain in here. ‘Maybe another day .. I’ll come back. ‘ I thought and I jumped down from the bed and slowly made my way out of the little house. “See you another day.” I whispered softly to that house. And then I made my way back on that path I had saw when I had woken up from my fall.
Crunch…Crunch.. I heard the snow, as I walked on it. I sighed, I felt so sad right now-Why? Well, that was like asking why does the Earth Exist. And truthfully, I didn’t know the answer. In the distance, I thought I heard .. Music? Yes, it was music, made by humans.
“Do I have anything else to do? “ I asked myself, was I expecting an answer? I think I was, but; as I expected, there was no reply for me, no friend. To be coutined in the next chapter.
My note=So, Yes you liked it? Or No, burn it?
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