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Chapter One.

Kiara woke up to find a strange,but somehow familiar blue-eyed female wolf staring down at her,so she shot up to her feet,and asked who the blue-eyed wolf was,she then looked at Kiara,with a puzzled look on her face,and replied,"Why don't you remember me?",I'm Aleu,the blue-eyed wolf replied softly,"Oh yes","now I remember you"Kiara responded,"but where in the name of Pride Rock am I",Aleu chuckled,"Why you're not in Pride Rock at all","You're in Nome Alaska,again"Kiara gasped,for a second,then asked Aleu,if she could go say hello to Balto,and Jenna,"Why of course you can,I'll take you to see them once again"Aleu responded with glee,"In fact there they are now",Balto,and Jenna ran over to where Aleu,and Kiara were standing,Balto then circled Kiara,as if he didn't know who she was,then asked,"who are you"?"you seem strangely familiar",it then occurred to Jenna,"Balto,you silly half-breed,we've met this lioness before,Kiara,then smiled warmly at Jenna,do you know where I could stay at for the nights,that I'm here?""she asked them,"why not with Aleu,and I"Balto offered,"Papa,we don't have enough room for her to stay with us","Well,you're more than welcome to stay with me",Jenna replied gleefully,Kiara accepted,and walked back to Jenna's house,and when they arrived,and went inside,Kiara,gave a toothily yawn,and went right to sleep.

To be continued

Excellently written. I tried a Lion King/Balto crossover, and it did not work out. But this is tremendous! I'm looking forward to reading the rest!

Chapter Two.

Jenna woke up Kiara yawning toothily,with a start,"Must you make those noises?"Jenna asked Kiara,"Yes,I feel that I must make them",Kiara answered in a slight growl,which made Jenna jump back twenty feet from Kiara,meanwhile,Aleu,and Balto were already awake,and were on their way to Jenna's house,when they too heard Kiara,and Jenna having a go at each other,Balto just stared at them,while Aleu continued to do the same thing,until she reached the limit,and put two of her toes,and gave a shrill whistling noise,which made Balto snap to attention,Aleu then chimed up,"Shall we all go take a stroll around Nome,Alaska,"I would like to,yes,but wouldn't the townspeople be afraid if they saw a lioness walking around here?

To be continued once again.

And thanks Skulblaka

You should start a new line each time a different character talks. For example, instead of

"Why don't you remember me?",I'm Aleu,the blue-eyed wolf replied softly,"Oh yes","now I remember you"Kiara responded,"but where in the name of Pride Rock am I",Aleu chuckled,"Why you're not in Pride Rock at all","You're in Nome Alaska,again"Kiara gasped,for a second,then asked Aleu,if she could go say hello to Balto,and Jenna,"Why of course you can,I'll take you to see them once again"Aleu responded with glee,"In fact there they are now"

You should have something more like this...

"Why don't you remember me? I'm Aleu," the blue-eyed wolf replied softly.
"Oh yes, now I remember you," Kiara responded,"but where in the name of Pride Rock am I?"
Aleu chuckled, "Why you're not in Pride Rock at all, you're in Nome, Alaska again"
Kiara gasped for a second, then asked Aleu if she could go say hello to Balto and Jenna.
"Why of course you can. I'll take you to see them once again." Aleu responded with glee. "In fact there they are now."

I've added/deleted punctuation where required and have moved text down. It makes it much easier for the readers. It's a great story, just a little tricky to follow because of the puctuation.

Nice story, but lets be realistic....

she'd die of cold, becasue she comes from an extremely hot climate

Chapter three.

When they were starting off on their stroll,Kiara,had to stop for a minute,and wipe her forehead with her paw,"whew",she exclaimed,"is it always this hot in Nome?","why of course not,it does get cold in the winter time,but never mind that now,Aleu replied,"let's just continue on with our stroll",whenthey strolled into town,the townspeople did seem a little bit frightened,but they recognized,the lioness from the first visit,Kiara then started to feel hungry,and asked,"Do you happen to have any antelope around here?"Aleu then responded,"No,of course not,but we do happen to have caribou around here"Kiara then replied,"well,I never had caribou before,but I'm willing to try anything".

Edit:I never did say what time of year it would be,but it isn't always cold in Alaska.