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Kiche
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Post subject: Sled team / WIP?  Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2008 7:43 pm |
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Well... it started as an innocent school doodle that grew and grew as class got boringer and boringer...   Before I knew it I had a whole team on my hands! :O [[from top to bottom/left to right it's Gypsy, unnamed, Thunderstorm, Yao, Kenai, and Buck. Thunderstorm is an older character of mine, who was never really part of the 'Baltoverse' but who fits in just dandy anyway... and Kenai's my version of the 'red Aleu twin' from Balto & Jenna's litter.]] And they were ready to get to work right off the bat. ...*shrug* So I kinda like them... I might try and color if I have time... before anything's finalized, anyone got any critique/advice/comments? I know it might be kinda difficult to say, considering the bottom one's not even all sketched yet, but based on what's there...
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Post subject: Re: Sled team / WIP? Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2008 10:47 pm |
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... wow. Those are awesome.
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Post subject: Re: Sled team / WIP? Posted: Thu Nov 06, 2008 11:04 am |
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These are fantastic! 8D
I love the second one. <3 I hope you do colour this coz it'd be awesome to see it finished.
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Post subject: Re: Sled team / WIP? Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2008 4:34 am |
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Not bad, these have a pretty good solid formation. The top drawing the first wolf, is leaning forward a bit too much, the back legs should be on the ground, it looks like that she is top heavy because the back legs are short. I don't have any major critiques, overall this look pretty good.
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Post subject: Re: Sled team / WIP? Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2008 7:24 pm |
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Agreeing with Drew, a couple pf them are a little top-heavy, but quite good. You are much better at realism than I am XD
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Post subject: Re: Sled team / WIP? Posted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 2:10 pm |
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Cute dogs ^^ The one on the bottom looks like Balto in a way.
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Kiche
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Post subject: Re: Sled team / WIP? Posted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 8:16 pm |
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Thanks agin everyone :3 Hm, you're right about the top-heavy appearance - I think what happened is I slanted the paper a bit as I continued drawing, I have a habit of doing that sometimes :/ I'll have to go back and fix it if I'm not feeling lazy!
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