my animations!!! advice please

Dee · **Posted:** Thu Oct 23, 2008 2:07 pm

yaayyy!!!! here are some animations i did what do you think

Forbidden Studios · **Posted:** Thu Oct 23, 2008 2:19 pm

diego_rules wrote:

yaayyy!!!! here are some animations i did what do you think

Not bad, but you might want to draw 2 to 4 more frames of animations. and to help it stay one size try I want to say trace your drawing but change it with each picture animation drawing. you know what I mean? And just apply that to each of your animations. I hope this helps some.

Rina_Wildthing(BB) · **Posted:** Thu Oct 23, 2008 2:26 pm

I love them! Very nice!

Dee · **Posted:** Fri Oct 24, 2008 1:57 am

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Not bad, but you might want to draw 2 to 4 more frames of animations. and to help it stay one size try I want to say trace your drawing but change it with each picture animation drawing. you know what I mean? And just apply that to each of your animations. I hope this helps some

O.O thank you for advice you must be an expert :lol:

saske italian wolf · **Joined:** Thu Dec 27, 2007 9:45 am **Posts:** 6491

oh wow diego O_O awsomness!!! you did a really great job^^ and you're talking with a future animator ;D Bam Bam's one is good, you used a right number of frames and so, the animation came good :]
I like the second one too^^it's more difficult to do a running pic but you did it correctely, the back's paws are right (I really like how you did them), the front paws are good too (you did well a frame that came such for me -.-) but I think that you should use another frame(s) because the durungee has to be elastic, if you see better the durungee, you can see that it looks a bit rigid ^^' look at this--> http://fc32.deviantart.com/fs34/f/2008/290/8/e/running_wolfeh_by_Saske_Italian_Wolf.gif
you did it correctely (as I said) but do you see that mine's looks "elastic" ? great job anyway but I want to suggest you this http://thedreamwolf.deviantart.com/art/Animation-Tutorial-Running-Dog-11317081 it's a great tutorial for animating^^ I used it and I am satisfated of my running wolf ;D

Dee · **Posted:** Fri Oct 24, 2008 11:07 am

wow great advice i will bare that in mind

saske italian wolf · **Joined:** Thu Dec 27, 2007 9:45 am **Posts:** 6491

^^ glad I could help

Dee · **Posted:** Fri Oct 24, 2008 12:35 pm

hows this

spiritwolf46 · **Posted:** Fri Oct 24, 2008 5:46 pm

geez, how did u make him run! That takes ALOT of talent!

saske italian wolf · **Joined:** Thu Dec 27, 2007 9:45 am **Posts:** 6491

diego_rules wrote:

hows this

8D good, this one is really better than the first :thumleft:

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my animations!!! advice please