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Gentle_Heart
 Post subject: My first ever lineart XD
PostPosted: Mon Oct 20, 2008 2:38 pm 
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Yup this is my FIRST ever lineart!
Leave me a commet!
If you want to use it just give me credit!
Paint friendly!


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 Post subject: Re: My first ever lineart XD
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EXCELLENT! ^^ That is simply excellent, and by that fact, amazing you did that on your very firt try. O: I'm amazed. Well done.

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Nice one.I like it.

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This is very good, Keep up with the great work!

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 Post subject: Re: My first ever lineart XD
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Fantastic job on the lineart.^^

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 Post subject: Re: My first ever lineart XD
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Mind if I critique?

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Sure go ahead I def. realize it's not perfect ^^

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2 more added!
Note: My better art (in my opion) is on the main site in my fan art gallery.
Everyone may critique just nothing to harsh :D

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This line art is very shaky, and not smooth, try and make your lines as clean and smooth as possible. If that makes making them a bit thicker then go a head and make them thicker. I'm not sure what program you are using, I suspect Paint? Also I would try and reference off real dogs/wolves for anatomy I could give you a critique on that as well if you'd like.

I'm not trying to make you feel bad or think your line work is awful. I'm just here to give you an honest critique and help you improve.

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 Post subject: Re: My first ever lineart XD
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DrewTheWolf {AB} wrote:
This line art is very shaky, and not smooth, try and make your lines as clean and smooth as possible. If that makes making them a bit thicker then go a head and make them thicker. I'm not sure what program you are using, I suspect Paint? Also I would try and reference off real dogs/wolves for anatomy I could give you a critique on that as well if you'd like.

I'm not trying to make you feel bad or think your line work is awful. I'm just here to give you an honest critique and help you improve.

I agree it's shaky I have noticed that :D I'll try to fix that. And okay.

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