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Post subject: The Sound Of The Lights 2: The Past of a Dirty Dog Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2008 3:35 pm |
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--This is the second part of my series of Balto--
Its been one year since Balto and Jennie(Jenna) met... Since their noses bumped in that alley. Now, as Balto walks down the empty streets of Nome- he can feel all the memories bursting out of his mind. Clashing in with the thought of their 7 mouth old children. All six of them, grown up-
The only part that he tries to forget, is Steele... Abusing and breaking Jennie, Balto sent him running. Running, straight for the forest- that is. No one knows what happened to him... Because he never made it out alive to tell the tale! "I'll be back!" Steele laughed insanely, but Balto knew it wasn't true...
But that was in the past, now... Or so Balto thought.
His mind was stuck on the joyful day- for this was the day that Balto and Jennie's love became whole. The only thing is, Jennie didn't keep track of the days. She had no clue that today was something special for them. But- that was part of Balto's plan. A big surprise, is all the more special!
But, as Balto wondered the lonely Streets... He finds its not so lonely, when he gets snatched by the dog pound and put in- well, you should know where. The pound. He had been put in the area read, "Wold hall: DANGER" Balto sat alone, waiting for to be saved, when he lifted his head to see in the cage in front of him... A dark form. Who could he be...? This strange dog will unlock the true past of Steele- what what no one ever said.
--What will happen next? You decide!--
Join Balto and his family on a new tale, about on old tale! The past of a dirt dog! Cranck will do what he must ot find his father- but what will happen when he finds out he's dead, because of Balto?
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Name: Age: Gender: Breed: Personality: History: Family: Hide-out: Other: Mate: Crush: Children: Looks or pic: Text:
--My Bios:
Name: Balto Age: Adult Gender: Male Breed: Wold dog Personality: Tricky, sly, brave, clever, unlike any other. History: We all know xD Family: Jennie and his children Hide-out: Under the hospitle (With the shattered glass) Other: None Mate: Jennie Crush: None Children: (boys)Marshall, Ozzie, Tiezy, (Girls)Fystal, Uoy, and Victor E. Looks or pic: Black with a white torso, back legs, and tail. Text: Blue
Name: Cranck Age: Teen Gender: Male Breed: wolf/ one dog relitive. Personality: Trisky and sly, freee spirited and likes to play in the shadows. History: ...As soon as birth, he was abandoned by his father. Of course, thats what everyone expected- we has considered a good for nothing dog, where he grew up. "Scared and shiverin', that dog ran off like a jack rabbit." said his mother, the leader of the Northern wolf pack. when he was just a kid- he always looked up to being hte next leader of the pack. But as he grew older, he fell more in love with the idea of setting of to go find his father. The trader who left his mother. Why? Becasue he wanted to met the dog who was sick enough to say he was in love with a wolf and run away, just like that. So he ran away to Nome. To spend his life, looking for one dog.
Steele.
Family: Steele(dead), Dusty(sister), Taralee(Mother) Hide-out: Behind the dog pound. Sometimes getting cought. Other: Unlike his father, he's not a bad guy. He just wants to met him, the only thing is he doesn't know he's dead. Mate: None Crush: None yet Children: None Looks or pic: Like Steele, but a little more of a dark grey. Text: Dark blue
Name: Victor E. (Victoria Eve) Age: young teen Gender: Female Breed: wolf dog Personality: Shy, nice, calm, but when she wants do be, this dog is dangerus! History: None Family: Balto, Jennie, bros and sis's Hide-out: mountain tops Other: None Mate: None Crush: None Children: None Looks or pic: Like Balto, but brown & white like Jennie. Text: Purple
Name: Marshall Age: Young Teen Gender: Male Breed: Wold dog Personality: high spirited, likes new sights and sounds, cheerful, nice. History: None Family: Balto, Jennie, bros and sis's Hide-out: Mountain top Other: Loves music Mate: None Crush: None Children: None Looks or pic: Like Jennie but black & brown. Text: Blue
Characters: Balto- Me Jennie- Marshall- Me Ozzie- CinderHeart Tiezy- Uoy- Fystal- Victore E.- Me Crank- Me Taralee- Dusty- Others- Kuriko & Blaze(DemondWolf1995)
--Rules-- (All rules respect the Balto Source/Animation Source rules)
Be respectful to other players Violece is aloud- but not to much detail No rube talk/keep bad words under the *'s Big sigs OFF please. No power playing No God Modding Stick to the story line. Its about a wolf dog and his father, okay? No small posts Don't join unless you are positive you will not leave this RP and keep posting everyday. If you've red the rules, please fill in your answer at the poll. At least try to stick to this rule, I'm counting on you! Have fun!
Please join! Its never to late to join!
Last edited by Heyl on Fri Sep 12, 2008 6:04 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Post subject: Re: The Sound Of The Lights 2: The Past of a Dirty Dog Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2008 4:44 pm |
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Name:Kuriko Age:Teen Gender:Female Breed:wolf Personality:fun,nice,loving,can be heartless History:None Family:None Hide-out:forest Other:in pic Mate:none Crush:cranck Children:None Text: This onePic: Attachment:
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Name:Blaze Age:Teen Gender:Male Breed:wolf/dog Personality:shy,nice,loves to play History:None Family:Kuriko Hideout:Forest Other:None Mate:None Crush:None yet Children None Text Colour: This onePic: Attachment:
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Heyl
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Post subject: Re: The Sound Of The Lights 2: The Past of a Dirty Dog Posted: Thu Sep 11, 2008 9:20 am |
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Joined: Sat Nov 11, 2006 1:52 pm Posts: 301 Location: Zelda LaLa Land
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Thanks for joining :3 I'mma wait a little longer- see if anyone wants to join to take the open spots for some of the children.
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Post subject: Re: The Sound Of The Lights 2: The Past of a Dirty Dog Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2008 11:42 am |
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Can I join? I'd like ot be Ozzie. Ozzie is one of Batlo's pups right?
Name: Ozzie Age: young teen Gender: male Breed: wolfdog Personality: loyal, brave, outoging, headstron,g laid back, relaxed, joking, caref ree History: none Family: balot, jennie, his siblings Hide-out: mountain tops Other: none Mate: none Crush:none Children: none Looks or pic: liek balto but black and white Text: red
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Heyl
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Post subject: Re: The Sound Of The Lights 2: The Past of a Dirty Dog Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2008 6:02 pm |
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Welcome! I'll give it one more day. If no one else joins by then, we can start. But people are still aloud to join after words.
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WolfCall
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Post subject: Re: The Sound Of The Lights 2: The Past of a Dirty Dog Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2008 6:08 pm |
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Yay! Thank you! I'll add another character soon!
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Post subject: Re: The Sound Of The Lights 2: The Past of a Dirty Dog Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2008 6:18 pm |
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I'll add one more character Name:Dusty Age:teen Gender:Female Breed:wolf/dog Personality: loyal,fun,shy History:none Family:Steele(Dead),Cranck(Brother),Taralee(Mother) Hide-out:Forest Other: none Mate: none Crush:none Children: none Text Colour:This one Looks or pic:
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Heyl
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Post subject: Re: The Sound Of The Lights 2: The Past of a Dirty Dog Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2008 6:30 pm |
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Great! Thanks :3 If no one takes the places of the children or anyone else, we can just all control them when needed. Their texts' will just be black.
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Post subject: Re: The Sound Of The Lights 2: The Past of a Dirty Dog Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2008 6:34 pm |
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Ok.
Name: Jennie Age: adult Gender: female Breed: husky Personality: loyal, kind, caring History: in the movie Family: balot, her pups Hide-out: mountain tops Other: none Mate: Balto Crush: none Children: her pups Looks or pic: red husky with white underbelly Text: blue
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Post subject: Re: The Sound Of The Lights 2: The Past of a Dirty Dog Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2008 6:43 pm |
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Actually, in my story, Jennie is brown and white, and Balto is black and white. When I was righting the first story, I always kept saying "his grey fur" and then I came back later like dangit I did it again! lol Anyways, I just wanted to yet ya'll guys see the first little bit of what I'm working on so far of the actual story (Part 2, that is) Just a warning, don't be shocked at first- becuase the original story is a musical! Heres what I got: Gentle butterflies found their was across the field- The sun was just barely peeking past the mountains. The colors of the sky- Golden, orange, yellow red and blue. . . It struck hope and courage into our eyes. The grass sparkles of these colors as the single green strands lay, spread out tall. Covered in due, a single drop fell onto the foggy ground. It was so peaceful, you could practically feel the grass growing. Though, the fog grew thinner. To the west, the trees in the forest began to glow as well. . . You could hear the angels from above singing as if Heaven was just past the mist. Fall was just around the corner, and if you were there, I’d bet you that you’d be able to hear, The Sound Of The Lights. . .
“? Knowing rather then showing off, everyone just plays it soft- ” “? Kind of in the sweetest way, I know that we’ll get their some day! Just see it from my angle, in every way! ?” Sang to voices, Balto and Jennie- of course. They sat on a mountain top, watching the sunrise yet again. They found it to be their daily routine. “ ? Don’t give it up-” “? Don’t give it up! Not when you’ve got all your life to spend, keep turning ‘til you see the burning SUN! ?” “If you’ve never cared enough to tell, why let this problem get in the way? You’ll get out of the shadows, SOME DAY! -” “? And if you fell, I’d be there to catch you, always! ?” “? ALWAYS! ?”
“Mother, Father? What are you to doing this time?” Asked a sleepy voice. “Ya’ll do know its like, six in the morning, right?” He added. “Oh, Ozzie- well if its so early, why are you up?” Jennie replied. “Uh. . . Because of you two.” Ozzie moaned. “Oh, sorry, honey!” She giggled. “Are your brothers and sisters up? Tiezy, Marshall, Uoy, Victor E. and Fystal! Come on out!” She shouted, and all five teenage wolf/dogs came piling out of an abandoned bear cave. “Yes Mama!” “Yes Ma’am!” Called their voices. “Is it time to eat?!” Called a female tomboy voice they all knew as Uoy. “Yeah, when’s the eatin’ gunna get here?” Marshall jumped in. “Well, ladies and gentleman, your butler hasn’t even left.” Balto said. It had seemed none of them even noticed Balto sitting there. “Calm down, I’ll be back from town in no time. No, wait- hold that thought. I’ll need some time off today- considering that Boris needs me.” “For what?” “Why?” Called all the voices. But Balto just rolled his eyes and hurried down the short mountain. “Guys- your father is very busy, let him take his mind off of you guys for today so he can work with some problems, and stay out of his business- please?” Jennie asked kindly. “I wonder what he’s doing, anyways. . .” “Now, now. Mother, remember, let him have his space.” Marshall smiled, and the whole pack giggled.
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Balto took a deep breath as he took his time walking down the snow-covered streets. Memories kept flashing by, he could recall the very same way he felt the day he fell in love. He could feel the rhythm pounding in his feet, every step he took like giant drums- as it crawled it was up passed his heart and out of him mouth, he gave a wild leap and flew into the air for what felt like forever as he smiled, “? Back to the past! I wish it could last- Forever! But I know its just now how the rhythm goes! I just can‘t tell if its time, to come home. . . Have you left me? Its hard to tell, just from this memory! JUST FROM THIS MEMORY! -Is this who you are, now? Shall I come home? Do you need time? Yeah, we need time! Baby! J-j-just maybe! Can you feel that rhythm? Can you feel your heart beat? Tick, tock! Tick, tock! Where have you been, over all time? Yeah, all the memories. . . I though you were gone. . . For sure! You’ve lost track of time, I feel this is how it goes- Stop. . . While I take this moment to, realize! Where have you been? Where have you gone with The One I Love! Yeah, she’s gone! Your voice hasn‘t changed, oh, yeah- what happened to the memories? What have you done to me? YEAH! They can’t get passed my brain, the image, OF YESTERDAY! . . .Tick, tock. Tick, tock. You can’t get passed the clock! Where have you been, in time. . . All of my memories? The day that we met, I barely remember. . . Yet- when I come to this same place, I see it loud and clear! THERE IS NO FEAR! ..When the sound of your voice is near. ?” Balto turned his head up to find himself under the same building where Balto and Jennie fell asleep that night- we could feel every feeling he did before, all the memories struck his mind. . . For today was a special day. It has been one year since they first met. . . And today that was official. Snow was just barely starting to come down at this time of year, yet it is still so early in Fall. Balto had kept track of all the days- but he didn’t think that Jennie even noticed. Under the dusty light, he pushed the same colorful broken bottles under as well- and the magic came to life. If you wanna catch the full tale of the first one, go to my fanfic page. --Beware of typos!--
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Post subject: Re: The Sound Of The Lights 2: The Past of a Dirty Dog Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2008 6:46 pm |
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It sounds so cool!! I'll go read it when I have time.
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Heyl
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Post subject: Re: The Sound Of The Lights 2: The Past of a Dirty Dog Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2008 6:49 pm |
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:,3 I'mma go work on it, now. Bye for tonight!
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