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 Post subject: The love falling Pt.2 (SORRY FOR THE LONG WAIT!)
PostPosted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 3:28 pm 
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I'm so sorry! I've been so busy and I haven't got the time like I used to.
Balto rubbed his paws against the door. Rosie answered. “Hello Balto. Jenna is at the creek with John’s dog, Komo.” Rosie Said. Balto looked around the creek with a beautiful water flow that made it look pink. Balto was scared to know that maybe Jenna was in love with Komo and not him. Balto looked at the creek and saw his reflection. He then walked around the creek and wondered, if he was around more, would Jenna have done this? Kaltag and Steele stopped Balto on his way to end of the creek Jenna was at. “Going somewhere? Komo is stealing Jenna buddy. I never wanted you and Jenna to be together. You’re not meant. Komo isn’t half wolf unlike someone.” Stated Steele walking down the creek. “Shut up Steele! You weren’t supposed to talk to me. You should have died falling down that mountain.” Said Balto. “Balto. If your tour doesn’t go the way you would like, you know why.” Said Steele. “Listen Steele, you have no idea how much Jenna loves me. And Komo can’t replace that.
Balto said about to cry. Balto looked over to Jenna’s house and Rosie and Komo’s boy were playing hopscotch. Balto looked at the bench and Jenna and Komo were sitting on the bench. Komo and Jenna couldn’t stop staring at each other. A tear ran down Balto’s face. He decided to go home.
Later, Boris walked into the boat.
“Balto?”
“Boris. I’m not going. Jenna would cheat on me with Komo all week!”
“Balto, she’s just upset. She doesn’t like that you’re on tour all the time. And, Komo is a small town dog. He doesn’t have all the fame, tours, and shows. And Balto, that’s what Jenna always wanted to settle down with and maybe, Komo and Jenna are a match made in heaven.
Said Boris. Balto sighed. “I don’t know Boris. Komo wouldn’t treat Jenna like I do.” Said Balto. Boris rolled his eyes. “Duh! Have you heard the rumor about Komo in Anchorage?” Boris asked. “No. What?” Balto asked. “Komo has five different litters. With five different breeds. A husky, a border collie, a normal collie, a wolf even, and a beagle!” Yelled Boris. “Boris, are you lying?” Balto asked. Boris sighed. “Yes. Actually, Komo and Jenna are a better couple then you two. I’m sorry Balto.” Said Boris. “How is it possible for Komo and a beagle to- never mind.” Balto said. Boris pointed at Balto. “You better go talk to Jenna.” Said Boris. “That sounds like a okay idea.” Said Balto.
Balto went up to Jenna. “Hey Balto!” Jenna yelled. “Listen Jenna, who’s Komo?” Balto asked. “Balto, he’s a friend. I was just showing him around.” Jenna said smiling at Balto. “You mean showing him around your romantic side or the creek?” Balto asked. Jenna nodded her head. “It was just a peck Balto. You’re getting worked up about nothing.” Said Jenna. Balto rolled his eyes. “Jenna, is Komo better then me?” Balto asked. Jenna smiled at Balto. “Balto, you are fine. But in the first place Komo is the kind of dog I wanted to settle down with.” Said Jenna still smiling at Balto. “You didn’t answer my question Jenna.” Said Balto. Komo came up to Balto. “Leave her alone.” Said Komo. “I don’t know who you are but this is my wife.” Said Balto. Komo’s eyes grew wide. “Komo, I’m sorry I didn’t tell you.” Said Jenna. “Jenna, it’s okay. I love you. And I care about whatever you have in your life. Bye Jenna.” Said Komo. Komo walked back home. A tear ran down Jenna’s face. “Jenna, why do you care?” Balto asked. “Balto, he meant a lot to me. You and I really don’t know each other any better than Komo and I know each other.” Said Jenna. A white dog walked by and was crying. “Jenna, wait a sec.” Said Balto. Balto ran up to the dog. “Are you okay?” Balto asked the dog. “No, I’m part wolf and everyone’s being mean to me about it.” Said the dog. Balto automatically perked up. “Me too! I was a outcast too.” Said Balto. The dog wiped it’s tears. “Really?” The dog asked. “Yeah. My names Balto.” Said Balto. “I’m Anna.” Said Anna. “You want to take a walk?” Asked Balto. “Sure.” Said Anna.
On the walk, Steele came up to Anna. “Hello. Why are you taking a walk with this loser. You should be taking a walk with a REAL sled dog.” Said Steele. Anna rolled her eyes. “I’m part wolf too.” Said Anna. Steele’s eyes grew wide. “Okay. Never mind.” Said Steele. Balto and Anna both laughed. “You know, you’re pretty.” Said Balto. “And your fun t hang out with.” Said Anna. “We’d make the perfect couple.” Said Balto. “Yeah. Perfect couple.” Said Anna. Balto and Anna looked each other in the eyes. “Let’s go to the boiler room.” Said Balto. “Yeah.” Said Anna.
Balto walked under the doctor’s office where he took Jenna. “Balto, those are broken bottle caps.” Said Anna. “No. There the Northern Lights.” Said Balto. The lights flashed. And Anna and Balto laid down and watched the lights. Then, Balto and Anna kissed.
Jenna went over to Komo’s. She rubbed her paw against the gated. Komo came up. “Hey Jenna.” Said Komo. “Komo. I’m worried.” Said Jenna. “What’s wrong babe?” Komo asked. “Balto and some dog went on a walk and it’s been a few hours.” Said Jenna. Komo’s eyes grew wide. “Is it a guy or a girl?” Komo asked with his mouth wide open. “I don’t know.” Jenna said. Komo nodded his head. “Jenna, it might be a girl. He might be cheating on you.” Said Komo. “It’s all because what I did.” Said Jenna. “Babe, you didn’t do anything. You didn’t know what you were doing.” Replied Komo. “And you knew what I was doing would have hurt him?” Jenna asked.
“I didn’t know you had a husband.”
“Right.”
“Maybe you should apologize.”
“I will. When he get’s HOME!” Jenna yelled.
Finally, it was the next morning and Balto still wasn’t home. “I can’t stand it! Where is he!” Yelled Jenna. Balto walked in. “Hi Jenna.” Said Balto. Jenna got up. “Where were you?” Asked Jenna. “I was out with a part wolf named Anna. Nothing big.” Said Balto. “Did you?” Jenna asked. “Jenna, I’m sorry. I did. And, I was thinking about you while I was doing that with Anna.” Said Balto. “Well obviously, when you guys were making out, you didn’t think about me at all.” Said Jenna. “I thought about what you did to me.” Said Balto. Jenna frowned. “At least I didn’t make out with Komo. You made out with Anna!” Jenna screamed. “I know. I’m sorry.” Said Balto. “Balto, I can’t do this. If Anna has pups, we’re over. You understand?” Jenna said. “Yes.” Said Balto.
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 6:31 pm 
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