Kirada wrote:
First, I want you to know that I have long-since adored your art. However, you're also looking for critique.
I am in love with the picture of Breakurch. The composition, background, and character fit VERY well together. The detail works VERY well with your style. ^_^
However, a couple of the pictures with ground-based backgrounds look a little awkward (such as in "Where were you last night"). Maybe adding some darker (but not too much darker) shading on the subjects, highlights, and some grounded shadows? The problem with it, really, is that the characters don't look too grounded - like the background was just tossed in there and you "gunned it." Maybe, on a separate layer (if you use layers), sketch it out first. Add a bit of perspective. Then, you can play with tones to make the characters "pop" to your desire but still have a pretty background.
Well, I hope it helps. Sorry that it's short, but there's not a lot of crits to give - you're doing very well. :] Keep up the good work, and I look forward to seeing more of your work!
Thank you very much! I am going to follow your advice
Natticat ~> I want your criticize because I want criticisms to be able to make better drawings. I do not always see the defects of my drawings then I need outside opinions, but nobody ever says anything negative...
Thank you very much for the other ^^
It's one of my char in my comic. His name is NightQust (Yes, he's a boy it's strange no? For the french people it's ok, but for you... ? )
http://hecatehell.deviantart.com/art/Ni ... t-88342371
