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This may very well be my best work lyrically to date!, this one's called "Lines In The Sand" and it's about the fine line between peace and CHAOS.. enjoy and leave opinions! good or bad, I don't care.. I appreciate them all!

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13.) Lines In The Sand
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Lyrics by: Lost Eternity
Music by: Lost Eternity
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Verse 1

Everybody's waiting for something to happen.
Everybody's waiting for something to see
Lunatics waiting for bigger disasters
Everyone's waiting for awnsers worldwide
Winding lives at the end of the spiral
Waiting dictators with their next big thrill
Everyone's looking but no one is listening
Everybody wants to be in at the kill

I wait for the signs
They tell me true
I see the signs of the end of time
What the hell are we waiting for?
Is it armageddon that's near
Or is it another long drawn out war?
Tell me now have we finally lost our way
Or have we lost our ******* sense of unity?

Verse 2

Everyone's searching but nothing's revealing
Everyone's looking for the reason why
Everyone's hoping for life everafter
Everyone's looking at death from the sky
Everyone's nightmares are going to happen
Everybody's ripping the mask from their eyes
Everyone's praying but no one's believing
Everyone's heroes tell everyone's lies

I wait for the signs
They tell me true
I see the signs of the end of time
What the hell are we waiting for?
Is it armageddon that's near
Or is it another long drawn out war?
Tell me now have we finally lost our way
Or have we lost our ******* sense of unity?

Verse 3

So now I watch and I wait
And I'll pray for an awnser
An end to our strife and the world's misery
But that end never came
And now we're digging our graves
And we're loading our wepons for the kill

(Chorus x2)

Can the world's end be at hand
A future memory of our tragedy
We're drawing lines in the sand
Drawing the line between heaven and hell

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Aww, words with actual meaning, that's something rarely witnessed by modern music fanatics. I can't comment on whether your composition is good or bad as I haven't heard the song with the actual music but from what I've seen so far I'd say this might be good.

Thanks for the complements! I really try to make my words have a story behind them at all times. even if they seem a bit clique so times.

Ah, a perfect description of the world. Bravo sir. keep up the good work.