The Epic Journey

Godzillawolf · **Posted:** Sat May 17, 2008 2:06 pm

Pretty good first chapter, I'm wondering how having humans in this will change the plot or if it will at all. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter!

Godzillawolf · **Posted:** Thu May 22, 2008 4:12 pm

Not bad, I see you had Ivy and Randel clash earlier than in the RP, which is fine since it makes more sense that they would start earily, sometimes in the first RP Meldox seemed to come off a little jerkish, which now Randel has kept that, though in both cases the pressure from there job is enough to make someone behave this way. Anyway I think its good. You also kept one of my favorite parts of Beth's personilty in Ivy, though I'm wondering if the emotional side will come out as well. Anyway keep up the good work!

Godzillawolf · **Posted:** Thu May 22, 2008 7:07 pm

Good chapter, I liked it. Good to see Wind, not sure if his role will be the same as before and if his legs are still metal, I guess that depends on if the X's are in this timeline. Anyway, nice chapter! Can't wait to see Titan!

okami24532 · **Posted:** Fri May 23, 2008 9:13 am

Good, Good very.

Godzillawolf · **Posted:** Fri May 23, 2008 2:21 pm

Well that was intresting. Nice chapter. I see some more changes in this chapter as well, mainly to the fact it never happened in the roleply, not that that's a bad thing, in fact its a very good thing. Keep up the good work.

okami24532 · **Posted:** Fri May 23, 2008 2:37 pm

I hope Wind kicks Lamar's butt. I'm liking this even more!

okami24532 · **Posted:** Sat May 24, 2008 1:22 pm

Awesome! Coutine please!

Godzillawolf · **Posted:** Sat May 24, 2008 8:18 pm

Nice chapter! Please update soon! I hate Cliffhangers!

okami24532 · **Posted:** Tue Jun 17, 2008 9:36 pm

Hey are you going to continue this?

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