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Note: this story has scenes of extreme violence and even torture. It's not appropriate for young children, or those who are easily offended. Please don't read it if this stuff offends you.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4058926/1/T ... _The_Freak

Nine chapters are up, and I'm working on the tenth as we speak. Tell me what you think.

I read your story on ff.net. I reviewed it there, so I'm not going to go into it in detail again, but I have mixed feelings. On the one hand, I have intense admiration for you writing such a long, complex, well-written story. On the other hand, some of the characters an themes seem a bit clichéd. Still a great story though, and well-written. If nothing else, I admire it for the extraordinary length and effort.