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 Post subject: Critiques Please =)
PostPosted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 3:12 pm 
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I just finished drawing this today =) It took me a very long time XD

Link : http://autumntornado.deviantart.com/art ... f-82749957



It's my fursona, well, dying XD


Please share you opinions with me. What can improve? What was good? =) I'd really appreciate it guys !=D

Also, if you like my drawing, here's a link where you can find my art :

Deviantart : http://www.autumntornado.deviantart.com

My baltosource drawing gallery is in my signature. ;]

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PostPosted: Sat May 31, 2008 10:21 am 
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Why is your fursona dying?

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 01, 2008 3:25 pm 
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Flurrin wrote:
Why is your fursona dying?



I was in a depressive state when I drew it.

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 07, 2008 5:00 am 
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Aww, that's sad!

The background needs a little work.

Other than that, I can' think of anything wrong with it

Except it's sad!

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 07, 2008 10:26 am 
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legacy5 wrote:
Aww, that's sad!

The background needs a little work.

Other than that, I can' think of anything wrong with it

Except it's sad!


I'm glad you like it.

What can I do to improve the background?

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 07, 2008 6:12 pm 
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Oh, I just thought it looked weird how there was a big block of grass, then their was a big block of dirt. Maybe you could improve it by thinning out the grass as it gets closer to the dirt, by i dunno, making it smaller and less of it?

BTW: You don't have to listen to me, I don't know much about art. But that's just what I thought.

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 07, 2008 7:54 pm 
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legacy5 wrote:
Oh, I just thought it looked weird how there was a big block of grass, then their was a big block of dirt. Maybe you could improve it by thinning out the grass as it gets closer to the dirt, by i dunno, making it smaller and less of it?

BTW: You don't have to listen to me, I don't know much about art. But that's just what I thought.


That's a good idea !=) Thank you :]

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