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I decided to post the begining of my fanfic. I'll post the rest later. Please tell me what you think. Here you go!

I found my self being lost in the beauty of the northern lights. I hated it. Slowly my mind began to go back to when I was just a puppy. The hours spent playing with my sister under the watchful eye of my mother. My father on the other hand. No! He was my step father and nothing more. I never trusted him no matter how it pained my mother to witness my aloofness towards him. The way he would approach me with that lecherous gaze still to this day causes me much discomfort. I can say this without hesitation; I blame my step father for the reason I don’t trust male dogs but…
“Hey Ms. Mute!” A snobbish voice said behind me. I cringed at the sound of her voice. I reluctantly turned to face my sister. “Aww, what’s wrong, cat got your tongue again?” she said with smug grin on her face. I bit my lower lip like always before speaking “Kelly, is there a reason you’re bothering me?” I said getting up. She rolled her eyes. “What, I can’t talk to my sister?” she replied. I briskly walked past her with my eyes closed. Hearing her laughing behind me I broke into a run. I slowed down then began to walk back down the hill to Nome.

it sounds like a good start