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KurtmanJP
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Post subject: More Than Ever (Another song I wrote)  Posted: Sun Mar 16, 2008 5:01 pm |
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Here's another song I wrote. It's not emo, but it's a tear-jerking 80's style power ballad similar to Europe's "Carrie" or Saigon Kick's "Love Is On The Way". I imagine it being full of acoustic guitar and haunting keyboard melodies. Here it is:
We shared the best of times together
Our friendship won't die, but it won't last forever
I hate to leave you, cause I love you more than ever
But times change, and you slowly fade away
Tears roll down my muzzle, I'm crying in the rain
It hurts so bad to see you go, to live throughout this pain
Why can't I stop my heart from breaking oh so sadly
When in my brain, I know it's true, I want you back so badly
I need you more than ever
Our love may have died, but you still live in my heart
I want you back forever
So hold me girl, and love me from the start
Hours pass by, in a cold and empty home
I try not to cry, or feel so alone
I listen to your message on the telephone
But it won't bring you back in my life
Salty tears splash on my paws, I just went all insane
My heart is torn to pieces as I scream out your name
Why can't I stop my tears from matting all my dead fur
It hurts so bad, it burns my soul to live throughout this curse
I need you more than ever
Our love may have died, but you still live in my heart
I want you back forever
So hold me girl, and love me from the start
I need you more than ever
Our love may have died, but you still live in my heart
I want you back forever
So hold me girl, and love me from the start
(Solo)
I need you more than ever
Our love may have died, but you still live in my heart
I want you back forever
So hold me girl, and love me from the start
I need you more than ever
Our love may have died, but you still live in my heart
I want you back forever
So hold me girl, and love me from the start
Lyrics are (C) me, KurtmanJP
Tell me what you think!
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Post subject: Re: More Than Ever (Another song I wrote) Posted: Sun Mar 16, 2008 6:10 pm |
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starsky_Hiro wrote: This one was really good! you should start a band or something. this one as well would be interesting to try and put some life to, if its ok with you? =P Sorry, but I already have the tune playing in my head.
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) i love it 