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Post subject: Revenge Plus One *Rewrite with X_Salome_X  Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 2:44 pm |
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Ok, this is between me and Salome, this is a rewrite of my one with AlueJenna3. Enjoy!
Plot: Kodi is returning to the mail team after recovering from a bad injury, he finds a new dog on the team, a dog named Fang who seems friendly enough but makes mistakes on runs that could get someone, normally Kodi, hurt. Kodi forgives him but secretly believes these aren't accdental. Balto also finds this new dog suspensous, and strangely simular. Soon Steele returns to Nome, is he connected to the new dog. Kodi's sister also has troubles of her own, Niju and a new foe, the ferral big cat named Kira, are planning to bring her down, can her family come to her rescue?
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Kodi, Balto, Fang, Kira, Kirby, Saba, and Steele- Kendell
Jenna, Kiona (c)-cw14t, Midnight, Skye, Dusty, Niju and Aleu-Salome's
Rules:
Pretty much the normal rules.
Last edited by Godzillawolf on Thu Mar 06, 2008 2:34 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Post subject: Re: Revenge Plus One *Rewrite with X_Salome_X Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 2:55 pm |
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ahh nice *huggles* i'll be jenna, kiona (c)-cw14t, midnight ^^, skye(kodi's mate cuz me no likey dusty XD), dusty, oh wait which of kodi's sister's has problems?
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Post subject: Re: Revenge Plus One *Rewrite with X_Salome_X Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 2:57 pm |
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Aleu, alright I'll add those characters.
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Post subject: Re: Revenge Plus One *Rewrite with X_Salome_X Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 3:03 pm |
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ah okay then i'll be JennaAleuDustyMidnightSkyeKionaName-Skye Age-3 Gender-female Breed-husky/collie mix Personality-sweet, caring, and a flirt Crush-Kodi Mate-will become Kodi no matter what dusty does Pic-  Hows that? ^^
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Post subject: Re: Revenge Plus One *Rewrite with X_Salome_X Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 3:04 pm |
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Good, could you be Niju too?
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Post subject: Re: Revenge Plus One *Rewrite with X_Salome_X Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 2:44 pm |
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Jenna smiled, proudly watching her son. She nuzzled her mate lovingly "very good Kodi, keep it up and you'll be back in sledding in not time at all" She had been very worried over his recovery but now was feeling much relived.
Shye trotted away from Dusty and her sled teams, Once again Dusty had told her off. She lowered her ears and shook her head. "Why does she always pick at me?" She wondered helplessly. She wondered if it was because she had a crush on Kodi. Still she walked away seeing, Jenna, Balto and Kodi she smiled, and hurried over to Balto and Jenna sitting next to them. She bowed before the example of a perfect couple and looked over at Kodi.
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Post subject: Re: Revenge Plus One *Rewrite with X_Salome_X Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 2:49 pm |
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Balto looked at Shye, he was a little confused as to who suited Kodi better, Shye or Dusty, Kodi seemed to like Shye better though. "Hi Shye, how you doing?" he asked.
Kodi skidded to a stop and looked at Shye. "Hey Shye, how you doing?" he asked. She'd been the first one there when he'd broken his leg, he now felt embearessed the first thing he said was that if his leg was still attached.
Kirby glared at Dusty. "Dusty that wasn't a nice thing to do, she's are friend and that was just mean." he said.
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Post subject: Re: Revenge Plus One *Rewrite with X_Salome_X Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 6:15 am |
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Skye smiled and smiled over at Balto "Well...good i guess" She replied to the town's hero. She then looked ver at Kodi and blushed inwardly. "So how's that leg Kodz?" She looked down at his paw, examineing it.
jenna smiled and watched Kodi and Skye then whispered to Balto "you think Dusty been bothering her again?" Her tone was held softly for only balto to hear.
Dusty rolled her eyes looking back at Kirby "So what?! I was here first and Kodi belongs to me!" Dusty knew she had never really told him how she really felt, but still she wanted him "She'll get over it if she's a REAL sled dog" Tail curled roughly back.
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Post subject: Re: Revenge Plus One *Rewrite with X_Salome_X Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 6:25 am |
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"Maybe, that's what happens when they're both in love with our son." Balto whispered back.
"A lot better." said Kodi, he shuddered as he remembered just how bad the break was, it was mericule he could still walk. He started running back and forth along the beach. "So you feeling good today?"
Kirby glared again. "I can respect you love Kodi but you should respect she does. It doesn't matter if you both love Kodi, its who Kodi loves and this isn't the way to win his heart. You know Kodi doesn't like bullying because his father was picked on so much." he said, dispointed in his friend.
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Post subject: Re: Revenge Plus One *Rewrite with X_Salome_X Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 8:47 am |
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Jenna sighed "Personally I belive Skye is better fir for him then Dusty. Shye shy and sweet sorta like me " Jenna chuckled remembering her younger years. "And dusty's has a stong personality..I really dont know" Jenna closed her eyes and smiled, shrugging.
Dusty lowered her muzzle "Yea, what ever!" She rolled her eyes then trotted away from her group, and layed on her owner's porch, watching Kodi and Skye, mummbling under her breath.
"Huh? oh yea" She hid the fact that Dusty clearly hated her. She didn't want him to be worryed. She smiled, her eyes sparkling softly as she watched him run. "wow you heal quick, had i gotten a wound like that it wouldve taken me much longer to run" Smiles then turns to Balto and Jenna "You must be proud parent having a son like him" She said tenderly then turned to watch Kodi again.
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Post subject: Re: Revenge Plus One *Rewrite with X_Salome_X Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 11:25 am |
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Balto nodded. "Yeah, I loved that about you." he said, nuzzling her. He turned to Shye. "You bet we're proud." he said.
Kodi blushed. "Well it took too long if you ask me, I've got so much pent up energy I can't stand it!" he said running around in circles.
A malmute walked up to Dusty. "Hi, I'm Fang, I'm the new wheel dog. You must be Dusty right?" he asked. Man she's beutyful. he thought, feeling a little blush creep up.
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Post subject: Re: Revenge Plus One *Rewrite with X_Salome_X Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 2:32 pm |
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(perfect thinking kenny *huggs*)
Dusty looked up, hearing the dog. She looked up at Fang, the newest dog in town and smiled. "Oh hey there Fang" She got up and nuzzled his shoulder in a friendly greeting.
Jenna hid her blush "I'll say" She added and gently nipped Balto's ear then smiled over at Skye "Of course honey"
Skye smiled at the couple then looked over at Kodi and laughed " ha ha yea your are a handful Kodz" When she got the chance she reached over and licked his nose quickly and blushed.
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Post subject: Re: Revenge Plus One *Rewrite with X_Salome_X Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 3:50 pm |
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Fang felt his blush growing. In truth he had an alternative motive for coming to Dusty but he found himself becoming lovestruck. Man she's pretty, I've got to keep on track but... He decided to just go for it. "Y-you're kind of c-cute." he said with a nervious smile.
Balto looked around, hopping Dusty wasn't around to see that. "Do you see Dusty? If she saw that, she'll make fun of Shye...do you think I should give Dusty a talking to about this?" he whispered to Jenna.
Kodi felt himself blush so bright it was visable despite his red fur. He gave a nervious laugh. "I guess I can be a pawful."
"Niju, we've been at this for hours! Where is that brat?!" said Kira, they hadn't seen a trace of Aleu in hours. She scuffed before going to nuzzle her mate, Middnight.
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