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 Post subject: First DEMO Drumtrack for the record! "Redemption"
PostPosted: Sun Mar 02, 2008 1:45 pm 
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And now I present to you all the first DEMO Drumtrack for the record for a instrumental song called "Redemption"

Comments and critique highly appreciated!

http://files.filefront.com/Redemption+drumtrack+Take1mp3/;9742221;/fileinfo.html

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 Post subject: Re: First DEMO Drumtrack for the record! "Redemption"
PostPosted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 3:48 am 
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It sounds a little out of time, the hi-hat/ride strokes come at irregular intervals. I recommend a lesser focus on double kicking (Your bass flams sound pretty good, however.) and focusing more on getting back time beats in time as this will help your rhythm/dynamic/flow greatly. You're trying to do too much at once, keep a beat flowing for longer before changing.

Your fills sound pretty good and have a good sense of style. When your timing improves this should all meld quite nicely.


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