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While kodi is walking through the forest, he encounters a strange necklace with a jewel on it and decides to keep it. But, it really belangs to the Predator and now it wants it back. It goes around killing everything in its way just to get the necklace... and kodi is the #1 target for the predator.

It sounds good Roxas_Silverwolf, i would like to read more, and look forward tomore of the story!

The plotline of the story is really interesting,please continue on with it.

Roxas, not to be rude or anything but your copying films and novels and putting them almost word for word in your fanfics is getting out of hand. Can't you come up with something original of your own instead of ripping off movies and books?

Again, *holds up a hand* I don't mean to be rude but it is getting rather annoying

It is getting annoying. No matter how many people say "yes" to the continuation of your plagiarized screen-to-writing fanfics, you never finish them anyway (its bad enough they don't DELETE each topic you make just for the fact that you are stealing), so I see no point in ANY of your topics.

I agree, there is a diffrence between a crossover, which I actuelly thought of doing a crossover between Predator and Balto, and a direct plagiarizing. I've watched Predator multable times, I can put some of the lines you used right into the movie. Now of course there are some lines that no Predator film can do without, such as the common one said by anyone seeing a Predator's face for the first time, but you didn't use any of them. On top of that, what is there in Alaska for a Predator to hunt? Why would one be there in the first place? Predators only go somewhere were there are a nice amount of prey, such as a war zone in the middle of a jungle (Predator) or L.A. during a gang war (Predator 2) you could at least make something like those happening. If you really want to make this, you need to think it out very well and not just watch the move and make a copy of it with Balto characters. Alright, I'm done ranting now.

Im gettin sick of people saying im stealing ideas !!!!! I cant even write a freakin crossover without someone sayin im stealing ideas! Plus my fic editor is screwed up so give me a break!!!!

Well I guess you really only did one line from the movie and it will really only count if you have the Predator copy Kodi's laugh later. But as a tip, I'd suggest you have something happening in Alaska that would attract a Predator, such as a gang war or something. There really needs to be a reason for it to show up or its really pretty random.

If u continue this won't it result in Kiodi being vaporised? (Personaly I like Alien Better) But contine!

You got reported for that.

Post by Pppermnt deleted for being spam.

On another note, Damien, I'm wondering where your fic went. It looks like it was in the first post, but then got cut down to less than a sentence.
It would be nice to see what everyone is talking about.

Have a nice day.
-LWf

ignore the plagerizing stuff im still planning it ill update soon!