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I need your help!
Please tell me what's wrong on these pics,
because I see some mistakes, but not all of them!
So I'd like you to help me to see what's wrong,
and to improve my art!


Téhà
Téhà and "X"

Well the thing that glares out at me is the anatomy, it needs some work.

I'd recommend Drew's wolf anatomy topic for references on this and seeing as you have a dA account, try typing "Wolf tutorial" in the search or looking for wolf photo's and reffing poses and such from those.

Another thing would be the BGs look a little empty, again I'd suggest a dA search on "Back ground tutorial".

Ok thanks a lot!!

And thanks for the link
I think this will help me!

I shall practice, thanks again ^___^

EDiT: I made an other one. I didn't work on the background or on the coloring, I just tried to practice the anatomy.
I took a photo-reference I found in a book from an old "Atlas collection".
I didn't use the tutorials yet, I didn't have my computer this morning so I couldn't look at them while drawing ^^"


I shall try to make an other one, using the tutorials, this time =]