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Hello eveyone I am making a new series, Its called Never Kill Me Again The story is about Balto and the backround charachter Kaltag find there friends getting kidnapped. This is a action packed series with pictures and stuff. Oh and for the information there is only one gun feature no more. And if its not good enough please let me know the first chapter takes place in Nome, the second L.A the third NYC thats it there will be 15 chapters this will be a gooooooooood story! Please love my stories!!!

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Settings and Contents

Chapter: Settings:

Chapter1 ( Cracking Up ) Nome, Alaska
Chapter 2 ( The reunion ) San Fransico, California
Chapter3 ( Meeting Caligula ) Las Vegas, Navada
Chapter4 (The Break Out ) Paris,France
Chapter5 ( Retometo Tower ) Tokyo, Japan
Chapter6( The Mizuki ) Paris, France
Chapter7 ( Smash N Grab ) Tokyo, Japan
Chapter8 ( The Exchange ) Tokyo, Japan
Chapter9 ( Meeting New People ) Manhattan, New York
Chapter 10 ( The Chase ) NYC - Florida, USA
Chapter 11 ( El Capitolio ) Havana, Cuba
Chapter 12 ( Can't hold a grudge? ) Havana, Cuba
Chapter 13 ( The Village ) Havana, Cuba
Chapter 14 ( The Airstrip ) Havana, Cuba
Chapter 15 ( Consequence ) Havana, Cuba

Okay (whipes sweat off of his nose) i thought you were going to say that its way too advanced and retarded

Me again.
Please avoid making a new topic so often on the same subject.
I would suggest re-posting the chapters you've already written here, so that I can delete the other two topics with them. Posting a new topic for each chapter is a waste of cyberspace.
It's not a big deal, but I'd like to consolidate the three topics on your fanfic into one.

Please PM me if you have any concerns or questions.
-LWf

Sounds really cool!

Yeah if this goes off hand Ill probably get banned.

Here goes chapter1. Its better putting it in 1 post

Never Kill Me Again Chapter 1

It was 12:56 in the morning dogs in Nome where having a good time. There laid Balto & Kaltag chat talking about Steele. " You know Steele was always there for himself you know?" Kaltag looking at Balto. " I never knew that he would be as much of a jurk though" says Balto. " I never liked the way how he almost killed you by throwing you off of that cliff to take back the medicen to save Nome. Real selfish of him." Kaltag looking in the sky.

*In the boiler Room*

Slyve,Dixie,Star,Jenna,and Nikki where telling the worst things that happend to them in there lives. " You want to know the worst thing that happend to me? Getting kicked by Stelle, getting uppercutted by Kaltag, and now everyone makes fun of me just because i flinch at everything." says Star in a annoyed voice. " Oh that's very sad, very sad indeed even when you have to squat like a girl to pee." Says Nikki. Everyone in the boiler room laughs at Star brutaly. Jenna the one of the smartest canine in the town of Nome breaks up the laughs by telling everyone what they do imberrasing " You guys can't talk about Star. Nikki we all know that you have terrible taste in girls, the last time you thought that Poodle was a girl. But it was a guy." Nikki looks at Jenna anoyed and says " Thats all not true, I erm... thought it was a girl thats all." Jenna stairs at Nikki and says " You see that you have nothing to say and its true? Everyone cant talk about each other for no reason." Everyone in the boiler room silences the room. " Wait, (ghasps) you hear that noise? " says Dixie. Sudently there was a bang at the door, strangers came and Kidnapped Jenna,Dixie,Slyve,Nikki,and Star.

*Back at Balto and Kaltag*

"Brrr. Balto its getting cold now, so umm Im going to go back to the boiler room now." Says Kaltag. "Hey, can I join you?" says Balto. Kaltag thinks to himself at the moment and says " Sure, why not." Balto grins and says "Thank You."
As they both walk down the road they hear someone else. " Wait shhh, you hear that? " says Balto. "No, wait whats that noise?" Two dogs appear behind Kaltag and Balto and clunk them both behind the head with a cup of canned noodles. Kaltag and Balto are both nocked out unconsciously. They both are tied up in a black bag and thrown in the back of a White Ford F150.

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Five hours later

Kaltag grunts, all that he can hear is city street cars, and people yelling at each other calling them selfves italiana bread. " Oh god, my head." Kaltag turns his head at Balto and yells: " WAKE UP, WAKE UP, " Balto wakes up with the shock of his eyes open imidaitly. "Kaltag, where are we? How did you get here? And what banged me on my head?" says Balto. " I-I dont know. There is some pure ratcr- hey!! Whats that on your head?" says Kaltag suprisingly. Balto grabs the note from the top of his head. They both read the note that was found on Balto's head. They read it. Its says " Hello old timers. You might of never remeberd us because its been a year. Welcome to San Francisco!! You know live hear and you will pay the debts you both have caused for this family. There is a guy named " Caligula " he runs a dog casino and a fake bordello. Meet him ASAP the addres is 15D. Rosevelt Caligula #1408. We have also captured your furry little friends. Do the job right or else." Kaltag stares at Balto and Balto stares at Kaltag. They both say " We are in some seriouse trouble"


End of Chapter 1, now in Chapter 2 Kaltag and Balto now have to meet up with a gang boss Caliguala. Will they get the job?

Chapter2

The rest of the note read "There will be a guy waiting on you, his name is Manny Escuela, who goes by the name 'George'.
You should know and dont ask. He drives a silver Audi. The liscence plate number is BS088." Kaltag looks up in the sky as an unusual way. "Something wrong?" asked Balto. "No, no there's nothing wrong. I just want to know. How in the heck do we find a gray Audi in San Francisco?" asked Kaltag. "I-I dont know, plus i have no way explaining this to Caligula. We are just going to have to get through his gang without getting whacked." said Balto. "Hey, isnt that are guy up there?" asked Kaltag. Balto shook his head "yes". "C'mon, lets get to the car." said Balto. Kaltag and Balto walk down towards the Allywat to get to the car. Balto beats the door with his right paw. "What are you whacko? You can't hit a brand new Audi!" said Kaltag. Balto looked at Kaltag with a annoyed look saying "Kaltag, you dont even know what an old Audi is going to get us through. And you dont even know what an Audi is." says Balto. "Yeah I do, we all know one thing that you dont." said Kaltag. "And what is that?" said Balto. "That you dont know what an Audi is. And we all know its a stupid car." said Kaltag.

The doors to the vehicle opens with a voice greeting them in a quote saying "Hello Balto I was expecting you here sooner." said George. Balto looked at George for a moment and said "How did you get here in a car? And how do you manage this thing?" said Balto. "Oh this, nah it isnt mine. Caligula gave this to me as a token. And how we manage these things you say. We modify the steering wheel,chair,and gas and break peddals." said George. "Oh okay then, Manny can you take us to this address here?" said Balto. Manny looked at the address on the note saying "This addres is a construction site." Balto looks at him with a mean stare. "Look just take us to the stupid meeting." Barked Kaltag.

*45 minutes later*

"So, were here!" said Manny. "This is it? This is the reunion? Wow this does seem crappy to me." said Kaltag. Balto tells Kaltag and George to stay behind him. As they both walk up to the hole in the ground they all say "Where is everyone?" with a curios tone. A dark creepy voice from behind said "Were just checking in". Balto & Kaltag both turn around, its a Alaskian Husky who startles them. "Whoa, you scared me for a moment there little one, what are you doing here?" said Kaltag. Two more Husky's show up with Assault Rifels. "Oh my god." whispers Balto. One of the Huskies told Kaltag and Balto to get down. "Alright,alright. You stinking Alaskian Pigs." says Kaltag. Making the huskies even mader. Whacking Kaltag and Balto until they both knock out.

"Wake up, I say wake up you shoddy strays." says a husky. Balto wakes up but Kaltag is still down. Balto opens his eyes and sees seven Alaskian Huskies and Three Siberian. "What, Siberian huskies what are you guys doing here?"asks Balto softly. One Siberian walks up to Balto and says. "Balto, your paying all of the depts that you haved caused in our family 'brother'." Balto gasps. He and has seen that one of his brothers have betrayed him. "I dont care what I have done for this family. Where is Jenna and the rest?" says Balto. "Oh there fine alright." says Steele. Kaltag sudently opens his eyes and sees that Steele was behind all of this. "St-Steele!?" yells Kaltag. "Yes its me OLD TIMER, you shamed me and your-self you friggin little traitor." says Steele. "Kaltag. I treated you like a son. You to Balto. I told you to stay away from the medicine and what. You didnt listen. Now everyone is taking the credit to you know. Balto this Balto that, who gives a crap about Balto!" yells Steele. Balto looks at Steele and says "Wait, where is my family and friends?"says Balto. Steele then says "Oh, your family? And friends? (chuckles) those where my family and friends. I loved Jenna I had a heart for her. She was my best mate! Plus your family and 'friends' are in the van over there. You are to come up with 200,000 pounds of dog chow in within 5 months. You dont come up with 50 a week well start off with Alue. Bring them out!" Steele said

Jenna and Alue were pushed out of the van. Leaving Alue crying on the way over. Steele's new asassin Mute was doing the assasonation. "Set and get your face to the ground." Balto yells wait to Steele "Do I get to talk to them?" Steele looks Balto dead in the eye. Okay, you got five minutes. Balto turns to Jenna. "Jenna? Are you alright? You hurt." asks Balto. Jenna gets even angryer towards Balto. "You murderer, why do you kill dogs?" yells Jenna. "What? Kill dogs? Who told you that?" said Balto "Steele told me you and your pack were running from death row." says Jenna

Steele had totaly brain wahsed Jenna with one of his lies. Mute then yells "Your time is up Balto your family dies now." George then wakes up. Running towards Mute. As he pulled the trigger to the gun Manny had jumped pushing Mute to shoot a second bullet strait into the air. Jenna and Alue both take cover back into the van speeding away leaving a track of dust . Both Balto and Kaltag snap. Kaltag jumps and attacks the other Alakian Husky. "Balto, get up and fight." yells Kaltag. Balto jumps off the ground and strangles Mute and banging his head on the ground saying "YOU SHOULD HAVE LET ME TALK TO THEM! YOU SHOULD... HAVE LET.. ME TALK TO THEM. Knocking Mute down nearly killing him.

After the riot was down George explains what happens "This whole entire time Caligula was here to set us all up!" yells George.
"Comeone we got to go meet with Caligula then." says Kaltag. Balto asks George "Where is Caligula's casino at anyway?" George looks at Kaltag and Balto and says "Northern part of Las Veagas. Venturas Avenue, come one lets go we got to get there before anymore huskies do."

The end of Chapter 2

Chapter 3 ( I had this changed a little bit, Kaltag and Balto see the Caligula dude, they do a job to do a assasanation, )

New Character Makoto Steele's brother
Date: April 29,2002
Time: 9:18 PM
Location: HN (Husky Nation)

After a long drive away from Balto and the riot; Jenna and the others decided to stay along with Steele. Steele takes them out to see his new 'gang'.

Jenna: Steele? Its been 2 days, where are we going?
Stele: Hold on Jenna, we will be there soon.
Star: Yeah Steele, whene are we going to go back home?
Steele: You live with me now, are new home! The err Husky Nation. Where all dogs are welcome.
Jenna: Does seem beutiful....
Steele(Cutting Jenna off): Really, you have to tell me how you feel about Balto doing something to you guys like that.
Jenna: I know... I wouldnt have founded out what have happend if it wasnt because of you.
Steele: Thanks.

*In Husky Nation*

Steele makes a speech on how they are loosing bones for each Asault Rifel they buy.

Steele: We are loosing 250,000 bones each month on each Bullet,Packs,and Guns. The worst part of all, the guns are too big for us to handle.
Makoto: Steele, What about miniature guns?
Steele:What do you mean uh, an submachine?
A Grey Bulldog: Yes,yes Steele! A submachine and miniature pistols are the perfect size.
******: Seems alright to me.
Steele: Alright then you guys. It will put kibble in the semi.

All of the dogs come into an agreement and celebrate. Odd.

Kodi sitting next to his mother asking her what are they doing in HN. Jenna answers back with a "Trying to kill your father plot." Kodi disagrees with there plan and wants to be on his dads side. The only problem is that he has no clue where he is. Star approaches Kodi.

Star: Its alright my friend, they will be over with this plan soon. Lets just hope that your father makes it out alive before they catch him.

Kodi: Do you even want my father dead?
Star:No, I just want to get out of the situation...

25 minutes later

Steele comes out and is ready to leave the lobby. Going up the abandond hotel they all stay in a room.

Steele: Dont worry Jenna, Ill find Balto before he finds you..
Jenna: I dont want you to hurt him, Ill do it myself.

If this was total crap, I did it in a rush, The 4th chapter will be longer than this.

Instead of reading some scenes there will be some scenes where you watch.