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Chaser Cats fanfic:
Yey - full steam ahead! 50%  50%  [ 2 ]
Yey - ideas could be better, but none the less 50%  50%  [ 2 ]
Ney - need different storyline 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Ney - just don't 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Not sure/Don't know 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
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 Post subject: Chaser Cats (Aristocats fanfic): Yey or ney?
PostPosted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 6:18 am 
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Well, I hear many people are interested in The Aristocats. So I've got a few ideas and I'm wondering - would you be interested?

Toulouse, Berlioz and Marie are all grown up now, and have formed their own swinger band, the Chaser Cats. Being swingers, Toulouse often laps up the attention he gets and Berlioz has three young kittens (Antoinette, Valentin and Sargent) of his own to raise by himself. Marie is the odd one out, believing in such things as commitment, like her mother, whom unfortunately had a mate but he was killed when their kittens were young. She's the most popular female in town, and her boyfriend, Theodore, doesn't contribute much to their relationship, because he thinks Marie will stay with him with the whole "commitment" thing. One of Berlioz's friends, Dominique-Evariste, shows interest in his friend's sister, but stays away, as he has been beaten up by Theodore before. Duchess is a little concerned for her children's wellbeing, especially Marie. She often minds Berlioz's kittens with O'Malley, rather sorry that Berlioz's mate left him, but is wary of Theodore. She urges Marie to end it with him, as he doesn't love her in Duchess' eyes. Marie lets it slide. The next night their group performance in the old Scat Cat Pad is crashed by a gang of dogs, led by Ferrand, a vicious anti-cat-attitude mixbreed. Most of the cats scatter, leaving the trio to fend for themselves. Toulouse grapples with them as Berlioz urges Marie to leave. He then helps Toulouse, but they're no match. They're left in the mess the dogs created overnight.

They spend the next day with worries. What will become of the Chaser Cats? It's not the first time the dog gang has struck the pad. The three go to bed that night worried for their futures.

In the morning, Toulouse runs to Berlioz, furious with a note in his mouth. He tells his brother the bad news, and the two find their parents. Toulouse goes downstairs to get Dominique to mind the kittens while they discuss something very important. Soon, the news spreads, and then all of Paris knows. Marie is missing, and Ferrand's gang have kidnapped her.

Toulouse and Berlioz decide they have to go find Marie. Antoinette, Valentin and Sargent all want to join them, but Duchess tells them they have to stay. She offers to go with the two, but O'Malley tells her that her place is in the mansion, and he has to go with them. Dominique overhears their plan and also offers to join them. O'Malley at first disagrees, but Berlioz persists. Duchess tries to reason with Theodore, thinking he'll go, but she's disgusted when he shows no real need to go after her, thinking she'll still be with him when she gets back. Toulouse threatens Theodore and they start fighting, but Duchess scorns him, saying they must go immediately. As soon as the four start walking down the street, the Scat Cat Gang arrive. They've had enough of Ferrand terrorizing the young band, so travel with them, as they have extensive knowledge of the Parisian streets. Duchess and the mouse Reuther mind the kittens, whom are rather curious on what's going on.

"Grandmother?"
"Antoinette?"
"Is Auntie Marie coming home?" the black female kitten asked. Her two brothers looked up at Duchess. They hoped she would... they missed her. Duchess looked to Reuther the mouse, concerned. Was her daughter coming back? But she knew Berlioz and Toulouse, and O'Malley.
"...yes. Marie's coming home," she said. She leapt up to the window that had a clear view outside. "I hope they find her."



Well, does this get the green light? Also, added render so you know what the older Marie shalle look like.


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 Post subject: Re: Chaser Cats (Aristocats fanfic): Yey or ney?
PostPosted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 7:35 pm 
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A little off-beat (well, more than a little), and it leaves out O'Malley, my personal favorite character. But it sounds like it could work if you (forgive the pun) play it right.

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