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 Post subject: Tsumeato: Animal I have Become. Please reveiw!
PostPosted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 10:57 am 
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Ok, I have deleted all my Balto fanfics except Balto Randomness. Why? Because i feel that I should have more of my new character Tsumeato. Anyway here's the first chapter of the story. Hope you enjoy it!

Tsumeato is (C) to me if you steal him I will kill you!!

This is Tsumeato in his wolf form.
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This is Tsumeato in his human form
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Chapter 1

The wind howled and rain fell from the sky, it was a little drizzle. But the forest was unsually quiet, nothing moved except the leaves as a wind blew through them. But a little way in-between a cluster of trees was a small tent. The branches were so close together that rain hadn't even touched the ground, and the humans clustered around a large fire. Humans sat around a fire talking and chatting. One threw an empty beer bottle onto the forest floor. "Hahaha! Hope someone steps on it! Hahaha!" laughed a man. "Don't you mean something?" said a man. "Something? Nah I just hope one of you idiots step on it!" the man snapped. "Humph!" said a rather porky man. "We should get back to work after we're done. We don't want to get in trouble now do we?" asked another thin man to the left. "Yah your right!" one of the men agreed. "Well," said the thin man, getting to his feet after polishing off his meal. "we should get going." Rain was pouring down from the sky, in fact it was raining so hard that one would assume gods were empying swimming pools down on the land they had made. The rain was soaking a small city, just an oridinary city... where un-ordinary stuff happened. A man walked down the street his hands tucked neatly in his pockets. He wore a black jacket with a green shirt, his hair was red and spiky, and he had blue jeans. His name was to be remembered in wolf legend, yes wolf legend because he was a wolf. His name is Tsumeato (Note: Tsumeato is a Japanese word for "Scar".) Tsumeato looked around and stopped walking suddenly. Then the light turned green and he crossed the street. He didn't have respect for any of the Human laws but he didn't go breaking them in public, even though he dispised everything to do with humans he kept to himself and talked to no one and no one talked to him. He liked it that way and he wanted to keep it like that. "What are you doing!?" a man barked as Tsumeato nearly colided with him. "Sheesh, what are YOU doing, mister?!" Tsumeato snapped as the force of the colision nearly knocked him into a homeless man with a cart who was trying to get by. Crap. This really was not what he had wanted today. "Well sorr-ee! But you were walking like a clown!" Tsumeato snapped angrily. "I show you clown!" the man said and then he tuged on his leash a Doberman peered out from behind it's master and saw a gray wolf with a scar on his eye, standing in fron't of his master. The dog snarled and then the man dropped the leash and bellowed. "Get him boy!" "You b*stard!!" Tsumeato snarled and then he took his wolf form (the dog could still see him in his wolf form though) the man screamed bloody murder and tried to run away but Tsumeato leaped on top of him and pinned him to the ground. "No, no no!!" the man screamed. Tsumeato's eyes gleamed with hatred and then he took the man's throat and cruched down. Blood was gushing onto the floor and spraying into Tsumeato's face, the man 's eyes were huge with fear and then the eyes went dull. But he had forgoten about the dog! The Doberman charged forward and grabbed Tsumeato's leg and lifted him into the air and began to smash him into a building. Tsumeato wheeled around and tried to fight back but he couldn't manedge to do it. That is until the Doberman's left ear came to close to his mouth. The dog let out a shrill scream as Tsumeato began to tear at the floppy ear. But then suddenly a man wearing a blue uniform pulled out his gun and pointed it at Tsumeato and pulled the trigger. Tsumeato wheeled around just in time to see the bullet go straight through his shoulder blade. The the man wearing the blue uniform pulled out his nightstick and raised it above his head. Tsumeato leapt backwards, he hit the ground and began to pull himself forward but his shoulder hurt terribly. The man began to run after him. "Your not getting away, wolf!!" he screamed Tsumeato turned and with all the strenght his possesed ran across the street and jumped over the fence and into the river. The police man ran over and began to shoot the water. "Sir, I think he's dead. You don't need to do that." said a man with a white shirt. "Dammit! He'll never do that again. I'll take care of the dog, I'll take him back to the station with me." All was dull underwater Tsumeato, in his wolf form, lay on the muddy ground unable to move due to the pain in his shoulder.

Sanctus Espiritus! redeem us from our solemn hour
Sanctus Espiritus! insanity is all around us
("I speak to you for the first time as Prime Minister in a solemn hour for the life of our country")

Tsumeato opened his eyes a crack and then they grew wide as he flung himself upward he came up above the surface and latched himself onto a rock breathing heavily his eye's huge he scrambled forward limping from the wound on his shoulder.

Sanctus Espiritus!
Sanctus Espiritus!
Sanctus Espiritus!

In my darkest hours
I could not foresee
That the tide could turn so fast to this degree
Can't believe my eyes
How can you be so blind?
Is the heart of stone, no empathy inside?

He clung to the rock and scrambled onto the rocks then he winced as pain shot through his pawpad. "Crap!!" he snarled pushing himself forward and then he broke into a run his head aching he leaped forward and hit the wall and slid down onto the ground.

Time keeps on slipping away and we haven't learned
So in the end now what have we gained?

Tsumeato scrambled up and pulled himself forward in his human form and dug his nails into the wall and pulled himself forward and then in his wolf form he began to run UP the wall his nails scrabling frantically as he forced himself forward. But then he froze. Would it be wise to reveal himself in front of the humans who had seen him kill that man?

Sanctus Espiritus, redeem us from our solemn hour
Sanctus Espiritus, insanity is all around us
Sanctus Espiritus, is this what we deserve?
Can we break free from chains of never-ending agony?
Tsumeato slid down the wall and glared up at the walls. "How can I get out of here!?" he spat and then he turned around. He spotted some rocks that led out into the water then he spotted something else, a large log.

Are they themselves to blame
The misery, the pain?
Didn't we let go?
Allowed it,let it grow
If we can't restrain
The beast which dwells inside
It will find it`s way somehow, somewhere in time

He climbed onto the log and pushed out the log was flung into the water with the gray wolf on it. Shaking with cold and pain he looked up to the sky as the log shifted slightly but then nothing happened. The log was stuck in some rocks.

Will we remember all of the suffering
`Cause if we fail it will be in vain

Then there was a BANG! Tsumeato wheeled around and his ears flattened against his head as he saw the police man with his gun again. "You mutt, you'll never leave this place!" he pulled the trigger. Tsumeato took a step back and felt the water touch his back leg. "I'm gonna die!" he muttered as he backd further away into the water. "No! I'll never turn my back on the enemy. That is what makes a true wolf!" and then he lunged--

Sanctus Espiritus, redeem us from our solemn hour
Sanctus Espiritus, insanity is all around us
Sanctus Espiritus, is this what we deserve?
Can we break free from chains of never-ending agony?

The police man screamed and was about to run when Tsumeato's teeth met his throat and the butt of the gun met Tsumeato's head. The force of it sent shock waves up his body and then the two of them, man and wolf, fell onto the ground and smashed onto the rocks.

Sanctus Espiritus!
Sanctus Espiritus!

People screamed the police man smashed his head against a rock and Tsumeato bashed his back and head and face against some the two of them slid down the rocks tosing and turning...

Sanctus Espiritus, redeem us from our solemn hour
Sanctus Espiritus, insanity is all around us
Sanctus Espiritus, is this what we deserve?
Can we break free from chains of never-ending agony? (ending agony!)

...Tsumeato smashed onto the rocks breathing heavily he looked up his vision was going black. He saw some feet hit the floor and then they began to head his way....

Sanctus Espiritus, redeem us from our solemn hour (solemn hour!)
Sanctus Espiritus, insanity is all around us (all around us!)
Sanctus Espiritus, is this what we deserve?
Can we break free from chains of never-ending agony?

Tsumeato looked up. He saw a blurry figure standing above him and then he saw several men walking towards him holding guns. "This is it, my friend." said a man as he pointed the gun at him. And then a needle struck him in the injured shoulder. With a yelp he began to twist and writh around on the floor. He saw a purple needle potruding from his bloody stained gray fur. And the he began to growl he heaved himself up. "Whoa! The needle didn't work on him! Run, run for your life!!" but then Tsumeato staggered and hit the floor on his side unable to move as the needle began to work on him. Then he shut his eyes and his head hit the floor as he passed in to darkness.

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 5:18 pm 
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Yeah, that was just the first chapter. I'm out of ideas but I'll post more chapters in the forums and in my fanfic gallery.

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cool fic Tsumeato^^I wait for the second chapter!!


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