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silver wolf
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Post subject: Balto 4 story Posted: Sat Sep 24, 2005 9:06 am |
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Balto 4.
A year or two has past since Aleu found her destiny across the bone chilling cold of the great water, on the island where she became the leader of the wolf pack she now lead through the unown willderness that she and the pack now clame as there own.
"Aleu"! said Nixi startling her she said "what Nixi" with a little anger in her voice "it's one of the pups""what about the the pups! in a really warried kind of voice, "the pups were playing on a log and one of the pups sliped and fell into the river" "why didn't you do any thing" Aleu said in a serios tone, "i tryed but I couldn't reach her" Nixi sounding paniced, Aleu took to the river to the river"Aleu! Stop! it's to dangours come back!" Nixi screamed,"NO!" Aleu said in a very angry voice"i'm not going to sit there and them die there famalie", half way to the river she saw the pup Sheba and said "i'm coming!", Aleu got to the edge of the river and plunged in head first swiming and swiming towards Sheba geting mouth full after mouth full of really cooled water the cerent was heading faward at least until Aleu cought site of a huge water fall at the end of the river, she swam harder and harder to reach Sheba in time "almost there" Aleu said strugling"got ya!" she said sounding a bit happyerthen before, the rest of the pack was running on the hill beside the river "grab that branch" Aleu yelled, Aleu and Sheba were allmost at the edge when just before they fell over the water fall a thick branch flung in front of them Aleu grabed the branch with her teeth and the pup hanging on the back of Aleus neck"pull! pull! pull harder!" "almost got ya!" Aleu and Sheba were on land now panting really hard Aleu could feel her heart pounding in cheast "are you okey"Nixi said with relef"that was really brave"said sumac "don't ever do a thing like that again" "i'm okey"said Aleu still panting,"thank you"said Sheba still panting "dont play by the river unless one of us is with you.
Down on the bay by the grate waler Aleu sat gazing acrose to the other side wondering "I wander what my Father and Mother are doing" Aleu thought"I think I will go see them".
Morning rose filling the sky with warm colors as snow was falling, Aleu got up antold the pack that she has selected a new leader to take her place because she was going to go see her father and mother again "the leader will be Nixifrom now on" "I-I dont know if I can" "yes you can Aleu said in a confedent kind of voice "okey I will" Nixi said strongly "I will miss you all I will you"Aleu said,Aleu was walking to the great water and said "good bye" as she started walking on the ice brige she turned back and howled as did they and off she went.
Back at home Balto was sitting in his bout thinking about Aleu and that good bye wich struck his heart with pain and happness that she found where sh really belongs,"i'm going to see what Kodi is up to" he thought, balto got up and jumped over the bout side and ran to town.
Aleu was already acrose the grat water and was heading on the way to go home.
"Kodi" "yeah dad" congradulations on making the lead dog" Thanks dad" "Balto!" "jenna" "what are you doing here" "saying hi" "oh sorry" "thats okey, is somthing bothering you" "nah" "well I was just thinking about Aleu, I miss her so much" "I know how you feel I miss her to" "I hope she's okey" of corse she's okey she made it there didnt she" "yeah I guss your right".
About two hours later Aleu arived at Baltos bout her heart beating with execietment to see her parents again "papa!" "is tha Aleu" gasps "Aleu!" "papa!" "I missed you so much papa!" "I missed you to Aleu!" "how have you been" "okey" Aleu replyed "and you" "much better now that your back" "I my mother in town" "yeah i'll take you to go see her" "thanks" Balto and Aleu went to town while they were walking on the street Kodi pulls up woth the mail Aleu glanced Kodi and Kodi glanced at Aleu "she looks familler" Kodi thought he walked up to her said "you look familler do I knw you" "Kodi thats not funny its Aleu!" Balto said with a smile on his face "wow you'v gotten big since I last saw you" "you to"Aleu replyed, "Aleu is that really you it is you!" "oh mom i'v missed you so much " "same here so tell me what hapend" so Aleu told her story and Kodi told his.
The next morning Aleu went for a walk through the town to see if anything changed "so your Bingos doughter" "it's Balto! not bingo! fleebag" Aleu replyed in a angery voice "you thilthy halfbreeds are all the same" "what did you call me" "a thilthy halfbreed oh yeah by the way my name is Steel" "so does it look like I care" "don't ever talk back to me" "hahaha! and what are you going to do about it" "tear you to shreds for starters" "hahaha! i'd like to see you try" "Fine!" both Aleu and Steel are growling and bearing there teeth at each other "hey" "who's that" "why don"t you pick on somthing your own size" "like you" "bring it!" Steel plunged and so did the dark one the dark one got steel to the ground lached on to Steels neck and flung him in to a ple of shipping crates shatering them as he fell "ahhhhh! Beatin by a halfbreed! NO!" Steel got to his feet and took off out of town, "thanks" "my name is Aleu" "your welcome my names Nightfall "would you mind walking with me" "no I don't mind" Aleu and night fall walked and talked for hours.
Morning came it's been one week since the Steel insedent Aleu would walk with Nightfall for along time every day. Aleu was walking be side Nightfall a little be for the vet animal hospitle Aleu was starting to wheze louder and louder "Aleu are you okey" "yeah i'm fine wheze" the vet was heading to his office and he saw and heard her whezing "hey" the vet said come inside Aleu falowed him to the vet office Nightfall leaned agenced the window to to see and hear what was going on, the vet told Aleu to come up on the table so she did the vet came closer to her took a flash light and shawn it in her eyes he stated to feel her body fot bites scraches or cuts, he went to the drore and he grabed his stethescope and walked over to Aleu and he broght the end closer to her cheast, she jumped back a bit he said don't warry im only going to listen to your heartbeat she stood and didn't move he broght the end again and pressed it agenced her cheast while he was listining to Aleu's heartbeat he thought "I new it" he took the end and put it to each side of her cheast wall "were done" he said giving her medisen to get rid of the nomonya in her lungs she came out "what happend you feeling better" " a bit".
Two weeks have past and the story that Aleu told about Niju and the pack made night fall fell uneasy so Nightfall and Aleu took a walk through the woods when they heard a cracking sound from the bushes Balto had went with them as soon as they saw what was making that cracking sound in the budhes Nightfall and Balto were a litle behind Aleu and the hunter from the bush brought out his rifle and aimed it at Aleu's heart "Aleu!" Nightfall came dashing through the bush and the hunter was pulling the trigger a defining crack filled the woods balto jumped on the hunter driving him to the groung smashing his head on the rocks nocking him out balto went to see any one of them got hurt Aleu got up a few minuts later from being knoked in to tree "oh no Nightfall please be okey papa he saved me" tears rolling down her face she went over to Nightfall how is wounded on the ground she put her ear on his cheat wall "is he gone" Balto said she listened and listened until she could hear that his heart started beating again"Nightfall are you okey" "I love you Aleu I woun't let any thing bad happen to you.
two days pased since the hunter incedent ,"Night fall are you okey" "kinda this wound hurts and it's heard to sleep "Nightfall come here" Nightfall walked over to Aleu and sat "I have an idea why don't you rest your head agenced my cheast wall and listen to my heartbeat and my breathing" "why" "because it's relaxing" "okey" Nightfall put hiss head agenced her "can you hear it" "yeah your right your heartbeat and breathing are so soothing.
A week went bye and threr was an unknown wolf pack headig for the town of nome Nightfall ,Aleu and Kodi went for the direction of the wolf pack, as soon as they hit the woods the wolf pack was right infront of them they stoped "Niju"Aleu said in an angry tone "you!" Niju said with an evil tone in his voice "so you do know him" Nightfall said "what are you talking about" Aleu said "he's my father and on the right side was Viciou my sister and on the left is anjelic my brother "come back home Nightfall" "NO! my home is here because you abandend me because I was a halfbreed and my brother and sister aren't half there full" "you better come home or I will have to make you" 'try it" "so be it!" Nightfalls sister jumped on Aleu they busey fighting Aleu got slamed to the groung and she slambed Nightfalls sister into a tree same thing happend to Kodi every where was totle caos Aleu geting bit and clawed same with the full breeds battle lasted a long time and one was wounded Aleu hurt bad every on was hurt bad nightfall was on his back and Niju sprung for the final blow Nightfall used his legs to flip Niju over the clif, hanging by a paw Niju grasped for his life Nightfall said "here i'll help you" Nightfall tryed but Niju fell. Nightfall tuned and his brother sister were gone "why didn't you tell me" "because I thought that you'd be ashamed of me" "Nightfall I love you no matter what it's what on the inside that counts, Kodi went back to town and Nightfall and Aleu waited untill midnight Aleu Nightfall howled at the same time at the full moon.
THE END
or is it
By Silver Wolf.
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Sep 24, 2005 10:24 am |
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nice story but this needs to be in the fanfic section
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2005 5:23 am |
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