Newest Picture I Drew. {need crits}

WhiteWolf--(WSP) · **Posted:** Thu Dec 27, 2007 7:12 pm

Hullo. (gosh havn't been here in a longg time) XD anywho's Im not sure If I can post this here, but I just drew a warriors fanart picture of bluestar, and DESPARATLY need crits. But nice ones. :XD: Soo the piccu:

It's called Silent Tears:

http://whitewolf--wsp.deviantart.com/ar ... s-73116566

Lemme no what you think, and I'll post more art soon

Grey Wolf 777 · **Posted:** Fri Dec 28, 2007 9:12 pm

It's a pretty good picture, I think. I have no clue how people make pictures look all shiny like that.

WhiteWolf--(WSP) · **Posted:** Wed Jan 23, 2008 6:50 pm

Wow, thanks you too. Im really touched ho much you like it

I use the dodge tool for shiny stuffs. XD

UKthewhitewolf · **Posted:** Thu Jan 24, 2008 3:10 pm

Overall it looks awesome!

If it's crittique you want then...

The eyes look a little odd, size wise that is.
The bridge of the nose looks too far away from the eyes, it needs to be 'squished' up a bit more so it's closer to the eyes.
The background needs something else added to it, the close BG looks fantastic but the area behind the kitty needs some hills maybe...or distant mountains, just to make it look more 3D, give it some depth and make it appear less 'flat'.

DrewTheWolf {AB} · **Posted:** Fri Feb 08, 2008 3:55 am

The face needs more perspective, the way the head is tilted you would only partially be able to see the eye. It would be in three fourths view, as the nose would be less visible and the right ear is too large. The neck needs to be shorted and more attached to the body it looks to be stretching far too much in this picture. The left ear also would not be so far back.

http://wilithin.deviantart.com/art/cat-44511632 See how the perspective is?

aleu and me are twins · **Posted:** Mon Feb 18, 2008 11:36 am

i think it has a lot of meaning to it

WhiteWolf--(WSP) · **Posted:** Wed Mar 12, 2008 8:21 pm

Thanks for the critiques Drew and UK i really apreciate them. Im taking them into great consideration.

Here's the newest picture of a cat I drew. For more information go to my DeviantART. =] Crits on this one too. =]

http://whitewolf--wsp.deviantart.com/ar ... n-79833353

I know the BG sucks =[

UKthewhitewolf · **Posted:** Thu Mar 13, 2008 5:32 pm

The anatomy is much better in your new one! Bit of polishing still but it's definately improved.

And yeah, the BG does need more to it. The grass is nicer in this one though but again maybe adding some hills or mountains in the distance or making the foreground a bit more 'hilly' would have improved it.

Keep up the good work!!

WhiteWolf--(WSP) · **Posted:** Fri Mar 14, 2008 4:40 pm

Thank you very much UK =] Im glad the anatomy improved, and the BG issue, it's really just supposed to be flat land but I guess flat pastures have mountains sometimes, right? XD I suck at drawing mountains anyway. I can do with hills, maybe. lol

saske italian wolf · **Joined:** Thu Dec 27, 2007 9:45 am **Posts:** 6491

wow^^very good!!!!!!awsome work

WhiteWolf--(WSP) · **Posted:** Sat Mar 15, 2008 8:47 pm

Thank you =]

saske italian wolf · **Joined:** Thu Dec 27, 2007 9:45 am **Posts:** 6491

your welcome

DrewTheWolf {AB} · **Posted:** Sun Apr 20, 2008 12:49 am

The head looks good but the front legs would be much higher up and near the shoulder and the base of the head, the tail would probably be farther back as well as from where the cat is sitting it looks awkward.

WhiteWolf--(WSP) · **Posted:** Mon May 05, 2008 5:58 pm

Thanks for the advice!

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