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 Post subject: The Protector - Failing the first rule - LINK INSIDE
PostPosted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 7:06 pm 
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The Protector

The world has started to use the most strong and brave dogs for police work. These dogs are used in the army the police and help protect man and dogs alike, where would the world be without them?

Azden a German Shepherd is a first class police dog, the best in the business. New dogs look up to him and when ever an important job comes up he is the first choice, he has saved many lives, but some believe he is past his prime. But not even Azden could prepare himself for his next mission.

A wealthy woman has received death threats not of her but of her beautiful pure breed border collie. This wealthy woman has no living relatives and so her only friend is her dog who brings her happiness and company. Scared for the life of her only friend the women orders the police to protect her dog Ebony. The police find the entire matter laughable that anyone can care so much for a dog that they send the now middle aged Azden to protect the house from intruders because they believe that he is getting past his prime and they don’t wont to waste anytime on the matter. Though it soon becomes apparent that Azden doesn’t see Ebony as simply another job.

The number one rule of a body guard is to not get involved with the person / dog you are trying to protect you are just doing a job nothing more, but Azden soon realizes that this time its different.


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Whats this a love story coming from me!? Well its coming up to christmas so why not try somthing new lol. Why Ebony is receiving death threats will be revealed in the story.

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LINK ----> http://baltosource.timduru.org/fic/The_ ... -5998.html

Being my first love / relationship fic any helpful hints / criticism would really help to improve my writing in this genre =)

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 7:50 pm 
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yay finally a police dog story I was going to do one too


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Thanks rangerwolf :mrgreen: I'm actually really enjoying writing this and i should have it done in a few days.

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Thanks Sierra-wolf101 :mrgreen: I sent it in so it should be up either today or tomorrow :mrgreen:

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hey Kay I'm making up my own police fic would you like to collaborate with me on one


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Rangerwolf wrote:
hey Kay I'm making up my own police fic would you like to collaborate with me on one


Hi Rangwolf, another police-dog fic sounds cool! But i'm a little busy doing some other things, but i'll be sure to read it if you write it :mrgreen:

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