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Kodi, dingo and dusty stay with the nobodies for 2 years. There will be pepsi, dirritos, muffins, zexion teaching kodi how to be emo. Axel, roxas, demyx and dingo partying, Larexene teaching a thunder spell, crashing ships and more!

I don't even know what this means. It just looks like cancer and madness.

I'm with you, man.
Sorry, kora, but you really should explain your fanfictions a bit more, esspecially for those of us who don't know who the nobodies are...
Right now, it just looks like...a bunch of words thrown together with a poll.
I strongly suggest that you concentrate on grammer, especially things like capitalization and punctuation. (Kodi, Doritos, Pepsi...)

I'm not sure what to think of this story right now, so I'll hold off on voting.
-LWf

Its kind of a humorous balto Kingdom Hearts 2 crossover. Organization XIII lead the creatures called "Nobodies", an empty shell of a human that lost his heart to the heartless.

Everyone hates my ideas!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You know what? I'm sick of looking for fanfics and seeing 50 million by you which are one-sentence pieces of...whatever. They're not even fics. No, you should not continue, know why? Because you haven't even started writing anything. Make one topic for all of your ideas, skip the polls, they're pointless, and just leave it at that. You haven't even started writing any of these because you aren't making it interesting. You're making it annoying. How about you actually finish an idea first instead of making a topic each time a light bulb flickers on. Its spam, and um, MOST people get banned for it

EDIT: And when I said "finish an idea" I mean actually make it more than a page long, minus the huge font

Well heres part 1 Then.



"AXEL!!!!!!" vexen roared,"GIVE ME MY PORTAL KEY BACK NOW!!!!!!!!!" "Ok, but I get to cook dinner tonight!" axel replied smirking. "Fine, but dont you dare burn my salad!" vexen replied. Axel handed the portal key back to vexen. "Hey vexen! I need to go see sora and kodi, can I use your portal?" asked roxas as he entered the room. "Sure go ahead." vexen replied as he handed roxas the portal key. Roxas walked into the portal. "Hey roxas!" shouted kodi. Roxas turned and saw kodi, dingo and dusty. "Hey guys, wanna come visit the castle?" asked roxas. "Sure!" they replied. They walked into the portal knowing that they would not see home again for 2 long years.



To be continued.... DUN DUN DUN DUNNNNNNNNNN!!!

Kora, I am quite sorry, but I don't approve of this idea. I love Kingdom Hearts, and crossing it over with Balto would be killing both Balto AND Kingdom Hearts. To be quite honest, you should stop this idea and throw it away, but that is simply my own opinion, and if you want to finish it, sure; go ahead.

Anyhow; Balto just doesn't fit with Kingdom Hearts, and it's just... strange. I must agree with Cat14 on some points as well.


(Cat, you made typos <3 I corrected it in the quote)

So, I say the same as Cat14, really. Anyhow, if you do this correctly you MIGHT be able to pull it off with a decent to great result. But this kind-of crossover is quite hard to do without completely messing up the lore (history) on both sides.
It would be easier crossing Star Wars with KH, or Final Fantasy with World of Warcraft. Balto could be crossed with Bambi, f.ex, with a decent result.

But... no. I don't really approve of this idea; but who knows? Maybe you'll manage to make it good.

Part 2: Marluxia


Back at the castle, marluxia was polshing his scythe and planting flowers. "Lalalalalalal I m very pretty!!!" he sang. Mans-- i mean Xemnas was watching form a far distance with his eye twitching. A portal suddenly opened and roxas, kodi, dusty and dingo fell out and crushed marluxia's wonderful flowers he had just planted "My babies!!!!" marluxia screamed. Kodi and dingo's eyes began twitching as well. "Uh-Oh... run" roxas whispered as marluxia pulled out his scythe and began choping everything in sight. Everyone ran out.